Mad Dog
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty simple...some of ur punches connected...a few good personals...

Kryogenix
structure was good...flow was on target...u had a few metas...wordplay was nice...most of ur punches connected...personals were good...

Overall
both had a few metas...Kryogenix had the better structure...the more stable flow...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Kryogenix gets my vote...

VOTE - KRYOGENIX

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...

Opener - Kryo
Closer - Mad (close)
Structure - Kryo
Flow - Kryo
Punches - Tie
Metas - Kryo
Personals - Kryo

Fun battle to read.. Mad, you droppy pretty nicely, but it just wasn't nice enough to beat the return fire from Kryo.. As stated above, work on gettin' ya punches to hit a bit harder, and you'll be spittin' crazy in no time.. Much respect to both of ya..

OVERALL - Kryo


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n' if ya'll don't mind returnin' an honest vote.. check the sig.. thanks