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hey y'all are sleepin on this battle we need some votes no kiddin....this is an old battle and we need it closed
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im fuckin done uppin this shit fo real its gettin old.....we will vote for your battles or at least i will so stop fuckin sleepin on this shit niggaz
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...uppin
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Breaking it down
I’m Conjesting This Vortex! Bitch, Im Fukkin This Whore Next Im Known To Surpass Your Level Like Fukkin Drugs-Blessed … He Claim Gangsta So This Thug’s Next, Riot Claim To Be Sick… After Infected Needles With “Blood-Tests … Mad Streched!..Wasnt feeling the punch that much..vocab and flow was good 4/10 This Hoe’s Spared He Spoke Impared I Neglect Bitches[Appearance N Leave Him “Proned-N-Scared. … I’m Dope Here! And In-TiMe Will Propel Bitch To His [Hometown] To Prove That He’s Going “No-Where. … Was Ok..wasnt great though..punch was kinda weak 4/10 I’m Infected G! We Got Separate Dreams!! Riot States That He Legend To Rap Battles But Only When He “Wreck-The-Keys I’ll Cut Ya Flesh For Free! But Riot’s ‘Shit’ Is Blessed Only When He Forced On Molesting-Priests. … (ouch) Tha was decent..bit played but the concept was orignial!..6/10 I Bomb Ya Fags Your Drama Lacks! Bitch Isn’t [Gifted]! N Just That Proves He Don’t Belong-In-(W)Rap. … I’m Stronger Man!! Plus The Only Time This [Bitch] ‘Flows Wit Fury’ Is When (S)He On-The-Rag. … Didnt flow in my view was a weak punch to...3/10 Damaged- If tha was an experiment with structure..i would advise you to change it! lol..anyway your vocab i was impressed with in most parts..flow was ok but fell off once or twice..punches were mostly weak with played punches..use a bit more imagination wit your punches..use his name against him and shit in his profile..which will give u fuel for personals Da whole time u were rhymin, I came to a conclusion/ Your "new style" is so wack, it causes da whole world confusion/ was an ok personal..could have been worded better 5/10 Your lines are fucked up, like Oprah doin sex up da butt/ I got a question about your verse and that is.....whut?/ Wasnt feeling the set up..made me say what lol..punch was to clever either..2.10 If I were to give u a tip about spittin your shit in lines of ten/ It would be simply, read a fuckin dictionary, and make some sense/ Naaaa..he actually had better vocab than you..not a could bar..2.10 It's easy to see that your shit isnt even close to bein worthy/ In this TRIAL of styles, I'll let u pick da witnesses, judge, and jury/ I see were u was going with this..but still was a weak punch..4/10 So here's your SENTENCE, u get your whole life in PRISON/ For bein a whack lyricist, like a nerd, your "punches" are missin/ Was ok still not good..still going on about the judge jury concept..5/10 I could bring a doped up clown in this battle and say that it was me/ Wit my pen and paper, I'll kick this nigga and punch out his buck teeth/ does he have buck teeth..even if he did..still would ov been basic 3.10 So finally, end of discussion, period, I'ma make sure this dude's dead/ Riot's makin sure he's DAMAGED and he's only got negative ONE lives left Nope..weak again..attempted wordplay but still not good enough 3.10 Riot- Flow was on key..structure was ok fell off once or twice..vocab also ok..But punches and sets where mad weak and played at times..made me cringe a couple of times which is not at all!!..as i said to damaged bit more witt and imagination with your punches would improve your verse's v/ Damaged- for better punches this puncline clinched it for me I’ll Cut Ya Flesh For Free! But Riot’s ‘Shit’ Is Blessed Only When He Forced On Molesting-Priests. … (ouch) Now hit me up on my battles under my sig..no hate..later |
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mC Riot's-It's easy to see that your shit isnt even close to bein worthy/ In this TRIAL of styles, I'll let u pick da witnesses, judge, and jury/ So here's your SENTENCE, u get your whole life in PRISON/ For bein a whack lyricist, like a nerd, your "punches" are missin/ ^ had me dyin' laughin'... lol best lines: Damage1-I’ll Cut Ya Flesh For Free! But Riot’s ‘Shit’ Is Blessed Only When He Forced On Molesting-Priests. … (ouch)< had me laughin, too haa haa... Betta vocab-Damage1 but every other word was rediculous, Betta Structure-mC Riot, i didn't get lost once... Punches: mC Riot even tho Damage1 was pretty good... overall my vote/ mC Riot nice battle, check mine oops i don't have any links.. lol ~wun~ |
thanks for da votes y'all....uppin
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uppin for tiebreaker
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uppin
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I’m Conjesting This Vortex! Bitch, Im Fukkin This Whore Next Im Known To Surpass Your Level Like Fukkin Drugs-Blessed …
He Claim Gangsta So This Thug’s Next, Riot Claim To Be Sick… After Infected Needles With “Blood-Tests … Im sure i saw the style of your lines before... this is okThis Hoe’s Spared He Spoke Impared I Neglect Bitches[Appearance N Leave Him “Proned-N-Scared. … I’m Dope Here! And In-TiMe Will Propel Bitch To His [Hometown] To Prove That He’s Going “No-Where. … this is ok I’m Infected G! We Got Separate Dreams!! Riot States That He Legend To Rap Battles But Only When He “Wreck-The-Keys I’ll Cut Ya Flesh For Free! But Riot’s ‘Shit’ Is Blessed Only When He Forced On Molesting-Priests. … (ouch) Good ryhmes use I Bomb Ya Fags Your Drama Lacks! Bitch Isn’t [Gifted]! N Just That Proves He Don’t Belong-In-(W)Rap. … I’m Stronger Man!! Plus The Only Time This [Bitch] ‘Flows Wit Fury’ Is When (S)He On-The-Rag. … ok but not feeling it very much ya were very good using good vocab in all but most is just dissin him but u had some punches Da whole time u were rhymin, I came to a conclusion/ Your "new style" is so wack, it causes da whole world confusion/ This is good Your lines are fucked up, like Oprah doin sex up da butt/ I got a question about your verse and that is.....whut?/ not feelin it If I were to give u a tip about spittin your shit in lines of ten/ It would be simply, read a fuckin dictionary, and make some sense/ good It's easy to see that your shit isnt even close to bein worthy/ In this TRIAL of styles, I'll let u pick da witnesses, judge, and jury/ very good bar here So here's your SENTENCE, u get your whole life in PRISON/ For bein a whack lyricist, like a nerd, your "punches" are missin/ this is sort of good good use of rhymin I could bring a doped up clown in this battle and say that it was me/ Wit my pen and paper, I'll kick this nigga and punch out his buck teeth/ How u know he has buck teeth???? So finally, end of discussion, period, I'ma make sure this dude's dead/ Riot's makin sure he's DAMAGED and he's only got negative ONE lives left/ this is an ok finish thou i liked ya flow and stucture you had kind of better disses than damaged1 but the personals were lacking with fake personals but u were good this battle was so close!!!!!!!! but i had to pick Mc_riot for better bars and flow and structure. both of you are good sorry damaged1 im just froppin an honest vote :thumbup: |
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