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Ill Tempa
I'm 2 and 0 wit 2 KO's, so you betta bring all yo weapons// This nigga wanted me to spit first, cuz he's used to sloppy secI - good opener keep it 10-16 lines, cuz my shit is short -n- sweet// Your like a legless track runner, you just can't competeonds -punch was pretty good I open my mind, find tha rhymes, and let him have it// It looks like he stood behind a screen door and some1 threw shit at it// -lol funny His parents offered me money to find him cuz he got kidnapped// I found this chump in "Textual Territory", gettin "Bitch Slapped"// - i like how u used that against him This nigga got a set of "Dentures" made just for "Biting"// But he's still no good, like a cake without tha icing// -like the first line the second was an ok punch Ya "Breath" stays "Hot" so when you "Spit Lyrics" they "Reek"// He's so dumb he takes a "Ruler" to bed to see how "Long" he sleeps// -first line i liked alot but the sec was played out U got 40 posts and no record, garbage history// This battles over, I win, by Flawless Victory. -Really good ending and personal Atticus Homie Couldn't Be-TEMPERED If He Needed-To-Blacksmith!... And ILL?, Not Even When He's-Tethered To His TEMPA-pedic-Matress//1 -didn't get the first line and the sec was good liked how u used his name I'LL Up The TEMPA-ture When My Lines-CEL-YA-THIS-Art...(CELYATHIS/CELCIUS) And Send-Ya-Verse Into ORBIT So You Can Say Your High-In-The-Charts//2 -first line i didnt like the sec was not a very good battle punch and the name thing is getting played out And He Says I SPIT-After Cuz I Love Them-Sweet-N'-Sloppy... But This-BASTEREDs Been On My -STEM- Like His Meters'-Used-Unproperly//3 -didnt understand it Daym And Just-Look At All Of Your -Punches-... Never Mind Jokes, Just-Look, It's Sad I Gota Show You What You Should Come-With//4 -didnt even rhyme Says He Can RUN CIRLCLES Around-Me, But Not Even With Geometric-Math-Tools... Cuz He Has No FOOTING Around-Me Like A Leggless-Track-Crew//5 -He didnt say the circle part but good flip on sec Tryn Be-Defiant By Sayin I'll Do 10-16 Instead Of Within-Those-Asked-For-By-Me... But He's-Lying About Not Listenen-See,Cuz Just Then-He-Didn't-Go-Past-Line-14!//6 -good ending overall this was a soso battle.Atticus had a few good lines,but some didnt make sense and were lacking basic skills like with rhyming. Ill Temp had a little more better lines than atticus even know one of em was played out his was just more on point this time. VOTE=Ill Tempa |
Uppin for votes. And yo atticus i send you a pm askin how to get that shit in yo sig to move. Did you get it?
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aTTIUS: i liked ya verse-- but i saw sum downsides.. i didnt recognize any flow and feeding is wack, (my oppinion) track team legless was already used by ILL Tempa. good verse though
ILL: you had an ill verse.. the only bar i didnt like really was this This nigga got a set of "Dentures" made just for "Biting"// But he's still no good, like a cake without tha icing// ya had some humorus punches which is dope, an u was flowwin good. i liked ya shit= good battle yall my vote= ILL Tempa |
sorry i forgot to add could you please hit up my signature with votes please? being slept on. thanks
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uppin for votes.............
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uppin for votes.......
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^^couldnt say it better my self my vote goes to atticus |
Ayooo ILL, K-awdik's Vote Shouldnt Even Count...
Cuz If It Is Then I'm Losing Cuz He's Ignorant... He Said On A Bar Or Two He Didnt UNDERSTAND... He Shouldnt Have Even Voted If He Cant Fallow The Material... AND ILL TEMPA NEVER SAID NO FEEDING!!!... SO STOP VOTING AGAINST ME FOR THAT... But Ya I Got Ya PM Temp, I Sent You How To Do It... You Didnt Get It???... Upping... |
Ill Tempa got this for the following reasons: He had a better structure his opponents was choppy and srtetched.
His punches hit harder and also had decent wordplay. The rhyme scheme was stronger and i found quite entertaining. And was all out for winning it by the looks. Fav Line: Tempa Ya "Breath" stays "Hot" so when you "Spit Lyrics" they "Reek"// He's so dumb he takes a "Ruler" to bed to see how "Long" he sleeps// Worst Line: U got 40 posts and no record, garbage history// This battles over, I win, by Flawless Victory. /\ Could've finished much much stronger Fav line Atticus: And He Says I SPIT-After Cuz I Love Them-Sweet-N'-Sloppy... But This-BASTEREDs Been On My -STEM- Like His Meters'-Used-Unproperly//3 Worst line: Tryn Be-Defiant By Sayin I'll Do 10-16 Instead Of Within-Those-Asked-For-By-Me... But He's-Lying About Not Listenen-See,Cuz Just Then-He-Didn't-Go-Past-Line-14!//6 /\ again another weak closer V/ILL Tempa |
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