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Yo Truth Why You Rushin' Orijinal In The Battle Man? That's Unchill Dude Deffinetly Not Cool. That Already Makes Me Bias Towards This Battle.

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But Orijinal That's Kinda Self Conflicting. You Are Not The Orijinal Jin So Man i Won' tJudge You For That. It Was A Close Battle.

Vote = Jin

Both of these Mcs came with good punches....I liked all of both of these doos' lines..Structures were alright, however Orijinals was a lil off. But he did take truth in the punchlines. He had some good lyrics in there and an overall better flow. I think Orijinal took this one...

Vote-Orijinal

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hmmmmm.........thsi one was ok.....some of your lines were both stretched..........my vote goes to o cuz he/she had mo original and lots of pucnhes.....they hit harder than yous did......plus the cement line was like all played.

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ok pretty wack battle.....Da truth......you had one punch in whole verse an that was the beaver line an even that was weak, you had a few metas but nothing special, structure was bad, an flow was ok at best not much else to say

Punches: 5/10
Personals: 2/10
Metas: 3/10
Flow: 4/10
Structure: 2/10
Overall: 16/50

Original...not much better only difference is you had 2 ok punches, your opener was tight plus for that, an closer was ok not great but good, your opener won the battle for you in my opinion, your flow was shaky, structure just as bad as his, metas were ok, still a weak verse though

Punches: 6/10
Personals: 3/10
Metas: 5/10
Flow: 4/10
Structure: 4/10
Overall: 22/50

Both need to elevate but ultimately original won cuz of 2 mediore punches
Vote: Original

DaTruth29
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its gay...structure was wack...all of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had a few metas...wordplay was alright, some of it was good, some wasnt...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Orijinal
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...everyone who reads it will know when ur lines end...structure was pretty wack...all of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off a lil cause of the stretchness...u had some metas...wordplay was tight...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had a good structure...neither had a good flow...neither had good personals...Orijinal had more, and better metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Orijinal gets my vote...

VOTE - ORIJINAL

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