yo that shit was cool, seemed a lil choppy at time in the ryhme (poetic lisence) but
keep it up, i'd like to hear an audio an hear how yawl floe it though

keep doing ya thang folks

c'mon peeps we got every1 verses from da crew except shy n kizza on dis now peep it out hot joint tells wut we coulda done betta peep hottness uppin dis piece
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fuck nice man u should spit that shit on the radio or sumthin

thanx 4 da love people lookin 4 more feedback n oh here's da proof dat virtue said he no thug n im supposedlu lyin bout him sayin it well here da proof holla back



lmmao peace holla back

yeah and thanx for all the feed back

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yo thanx fo the feed back ya'll but lookin fo some mo feed back
peace

Let me point out a fact that everyone who gave you positive feedback on this drop were new to RB with no battles and hardly any posts...hmmmm

hey the first verse was ok the second verse started off sick but when u talkin bout serious stuff u DONT put punch lines the third verse was cool and the fourth waz sick and yall got some talent but u just dont seem qwite focused....

so eut newbies are talented too and you n eva know

if ur dat skill'd u can use punchlines wheneva homie every ones verse 4 dis shit was hot in there own unique way n justify u barely got da rite 2 tlk bout newbieu still a rookie ur self but every thanx 4 da love n keep givin us feed back wanna kno wut 2 do betta 4 next crew drop peace uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

can yall check my shit ?? cause i dont know if its gay or not?

btw that was a nice drop

i already peeped all ur shit so far homie uppin dis piece

yo dawg dat shit was tite man, n yop dawg i gave his ass sum positive feedback n does it look like i got 20 sumthin posts? NO but ne way good piece dawg

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that shit was nice i liked it it was ok first verse then got better and better im feelin it
could you check out mine tell me wats up with it, i seriously wanna get better and work at it thanks
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139852
peace

yo seriously rv quit sleepin on unless return da feedback i give out 2 every1 holl back n rite sumtin quit bein lazy people peace

Nice drop,,Thats the fire im talking bout,,,keep em comming
God bless all...1 love
One more thing,,,I put something down about haters,,,So if you all can relate to being hated on ,,,you might want to read this one,,,,Its the truth...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140326

thanx ya'll for the feed back but still uppin fo some mo

yo man still lookin fo some feed bhack

Das a sound thred dawg, a can see u werked hard on it keep em flowin
peace out

Dats some fire rite der, i almost got burned while readin it. Tight shit, thight shit.
Man since i joined u guyZ have had the hottest flow.

whoo thanx man

view this shit damn...../. lol

nice shit

view this mutha fucka cuz he worked hard

Look fixing criminals is like mixing chemicals it could blow up
On a flow corrupt in your face like pesticides best reside and instruct
With caution, this yap astounds minds and perk like wraparound designs
In skirts, it’s passion with fashion a hell flow like Velcro stick to spines
With sick lines and remove shoes and groove smooth like quick vines
Growing up,

huh

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That shit was elusive son, keep up the good textin...

yo view this as well...

thanx 4 da love every1.....keep givin us feedback we'll return da favor....

yeah man...

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