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DRAG~ON 08-26-04 10:37 AM

can we get sum honest votes on
diss battle ya

TAKENOTICE 08-26-04 03:05 PM

Voted For: DRAG~ON

damn i liked both verses but i'm vote fah drag cause i like his wordplay and punches bettah everything seemed tah come together for him this time...even though that alliance and science line from ecko though was creative in my opinion but the whole play off the ECKO clothin line from drag was tight...you came with it this time but drag had the edge i think
no hate or nothin
STAY UP STAY ACTIVE VOTE OFTEN...

DRAG~ON 08-26-04 03:13 PM

thanx 4 ya honest vote WINC we
needed dat can we get sum more
honest votes ya

Da Vinci 08-26-04 03:46 PM

Voted For: ==&amp;gt;ECKO&amp;lt;==

Ecko takes this, better punches and far better word play, Sry Drag~On you normally come way harder than that but I wasn't feel'n those punches. Your opener needed some work and you should try and devleop the punch. Ecko not a bad verse good enought to win, remember to devleop the punch.

[.:D:.] 08-26-04 04:11 PM

Voted For: ==&amp;gt;ECKO&amp;lt;==

ecko.....you get my vote here man....you had betta punchlines that hit harder then drag`on......your vocab was betta here to which gave you betta wordplay......personals werent really nuffin special....ya opener was ok it prolly coulda been worded betta.same with ya closer too

drag~on...ya verse coulda used some work....to me it seemed like you repeated personals.....ya punchlines didnt stand out to me...seemed like you didnt really use good word play and no vocab.....so you need to improve in those areas...ya verse was too simple..ya opener wasnt good to me....and ya closer it wasnt hard but if you woulda worded it betta i guess it woulda been ok...

iamthatdude87 08-26-04 04:47 PM

uppin

iamthatdude87 08-27-04 12:24 AM

uppin

DV8 08-27-04 02:53 AM

Voted For: ==&amp;gt;ECKO&amp;lt;==

yo i entered the dragon and de-flamed the flame through ya nostrils
im colossal...paintin pictures with my words like i was a drugged up picaso
^^ok not bad..no punch though
The pot smoke....The Crack Smoke...i didnt know u had an alliance
how hard is it to smoke n make friends it aint no fuckin brain science
^^i liked this
let alone people sayin that yall formed up a dynasty
village,duece,the leaders.....shit its already been a fucked up travisty
^^could've been written better but its still good
its all blasphemy....showin disrespect.... to C.S. and me...
p.S.A is like the 12 holy apostles...they already folowing we....
^^dint like this
We the C.S....smoking these bitches like they was a pound of stress
cuz that shits to E Z.....bought a ounce of chron...toss the rest
^^decent
we leavin ya bitches wit cotton mouth...we come from north to south
east to west..its game over..i jus pulld the tonsills out this dragons mouth
^^some wording issues but good

overall decent verse i thought you played on his crew a little much but it is a crew battle"right"structure was ok dipped in the middle a bit opener was ok..but no real punch..verse lacked a little with punches...but decent..nice drop...

drag~on's verse

diss cat got his name from a cloting line
"ECKO"but diss battle wont have 2 be said 1 mo time
^^ok but kinda simple
line 4 line, punch 4 punch i guess im packin more
i "rock" ECKO n da votes but da clothes i neva wore *
^^dint like 1st line but liked the idea behind the second
make his lungs collapse when i pull out straps i luv 2 clap
diss "K.O." was "E C(z)" go head n say dat back
^^ok koo but should've been written diff...
i "SINDICATE" my "CIME(s)" here fom the start like n ya sig
by hittin backflips on ya fitted cap 2 "flip ya lid" **
^^aight decent flow
den DRAG ya body ON 2 da tracks 4 "dashin"
n "run" all over u n a "sprinters" fashion
^^was'nt feelin it at all....too simple
-[P-S-A]- n we "fuck" bitches from every team
just like tissue on dat ass crack we "get n between"
^^ok funny best line in your verse....

drag~on pretty decent verse i liked some of your ideas but your verse lacked in structured punches i suggest not using
qoutations n caps it makes your verse not flow as well...
but still decent drop...nice battle

overall with flow punches n all cats considered i gotta give this ta ecko cause he came with content that was consistent in flow n delivery of punches some fillers but that created the lou for the punch....nice battle it was fairly close

aight i think that coverd it all,again nice battle ..


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