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Abraxas 09-11-04 04:27 PM

This was feedback posted for Victimizer
 
PUnCHES: vict
Personals: vict
STRUCUTRE: VICT
Flow: vict

Ranks™ 09-11-04 04:34 PM

Voted For: Victimizer

Victimizer: You used a cum line plus shes a girl, wow...but still won. You ahd a better, although stretched to death structure. You had wordplay, and better punches, I liked the midas line, that the only real good one though, everything was either stretched or average.

yvonne: that shit was ass...your structure was horrible...took me like 5 minutes to read each line...lol. Then you had some wack shit about spittin candy bars. None of your lines connected...this was bad, even for a rushed verse

Mc *MaZe* 09-11-04 07:19 PM

Voted For: Victimizer

i think yvonne has got this one she has a better flo and a more understandin way ov spitting victimizer on the other hand aint got as much flo and it is quite confussing to read yvonne gets my vote


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