Voted For: Paramik

Tight battle, close one to call.................

Black Plague u dropped a nice verse, it was consistent mostly but the flow fell off a little coming to the end, u need to try nad shorten ure lines and keep them the same length. u had some nice punches rollin some hard, some not so hard, but uer first line, u cant really be dissin his structure when ures is all wack, personals were not that good, i could only see a couple, nuthin that really struck him, u shud try playing off his name and shit more. wordplay was gud, nuthin too basic, some gud complex shit in there, some played stuff, but overall a nice drop.

Paramik a hott drop to, u really brought the big guns, ure flow was consistently gud all the way through, u kept ure structure together which kind of fucked up BP's first line. u had the punches in there hitting hard, some gud personals, especially the nice play off of his name using the BP gas station shit. the KKK shit has been done too many times before, the rayman shit was funny though, some original lines in there that i dont think i've heard before. rhymin was basic some places, but a got a little more complex at times, more complexity though, need to elevate that shit. overall a tight drop and i think you bested Black Plague in this battle.

***One quick pointer that i keep on saying, don't bother to explain ure punches, real MC's should be able to get them in the first place, and if they can't then they shouldn't even be voting***

VOTE: Paramik

Voted For: Paramik

I seen ya other verses, ya "structure" is off like that of the leanin tower of Piza
You not on my level..I'm "Everywhere You Want To Be" like ya credit card Visa
^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD WORDPLAYS AND AN PUNCH NICE

"Like A Pimp" wit Lil' Flip i'll drop a verse, and leave this "Ho on tha floor"*
You dont get respect...You get hit up more than the local dealers door
Para you from Florida? Battle'd me and i knocked you out like Hurrican Charlie
You try to shatter my ego, but Im like B.Willis from unbreakable..U can't scar me**
^^^^^^^^^^^ HA NICE PERSONAL AND AN PUNCH GOOD FLOW NICE WORDPLAYS NICE MAYNE


Ya last battles have been 2 liners... cuz you can only come up wit 1 line at a time
You read my verse and it leveled you, like you sniffin pain't...It's fryin ya mind
I can see by your avvy that you hittin keys in a desperate attempt to contest
But you winnin this battle would be unlikely, like homeless men bein put udner house arest
Kid thinks he gansta, but he's only "Strapped" when he puts on his velcro Sped shoes***
I KO'd this fool, leavin his ass passed out, gassed, harassed like holocostal
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE VERSE,,,,,LIKED DA CLOSA AND DA WORDPLAYS U USE AND DA PUNCHES (WERENT HITTIN) BUT IT WAS COOL DOUGH








This wack textcee thinks he can beat me, I'll bring out my rifle.
Cause Black Plague thought he could steal verses by owning a bible.
^^^^^^^^^^ NICE OPENER GOOD PUNCH


Bitch claims he is the earthquake, but I already got his ass shook.
He couldn't drop hot rhymes, if he fell in love with a poetry book.
Must be lying, says he 18 but spit wack, I know this kids in youth.
Speaks the truth?, but said more lies than in the Movie “Phone Booth.”
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LOL NICE MAYNE GOOD PUNCH (HITTIN HARDER)


Fags like a dull pencil, I’ll sharpen him so he can better “get the point.”
My lines could get this guy “moving out”, even if he’s an immovable joint.
Like losing AOL connections, “BPs” punches can’t ever “connect.”
Thought he could make his lines stronger, by putting special effects.
^^^^^^^^^^^ HA GOOD PUNCH NICE MAYNE GOOD PERSONALS



I bet he wouldn’t want to kill me if he joined the Ku Klux Klan. *
And Black Plague can’t even throw a killing punch, if he was Rayman. *
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD CLOSA GOOD VERSE

I HAVE TO GIVE DIS TO PARAMIK CAUSE HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES (HARDER) AND GOOD FLOW

BLACK U HAD GOOD FLOW WORDPLAYS BUT PUNCHES WASNT HITTIN IT GOOD VERSE DOUGH KEEP IT UP MAYNE

V-PARAMIK CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW PLUZ PERSONALS

~PEACE~

Voted For: Paramik

this was an ok battle...was pretty even.paramik..some ok punches...on and off.flow and structure was good..aight wordplay...some good personals...overall decent verse...

plague..another aight verse.....punches were aight..didnt hit has hard as paramik tho..some ok punches again..wordplay ok..overall aight verse...

close battle guys..my vote=paramik

return the favour wit an honest vote plz:)

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damn this been on for long.............................................. ..

Voted For: The Black Plague

some real close shit.. but i gotta go with BP he just had harder punches.. Paramik i know u can come harder than that.. spitting weak punches... BP ur structure was fucked.. try shortening ur lines or making ur font smaller its hard to read.. but u still took it due to the fact that you had a little bit harder punches then Paramik.. Good Job by both

wat?????!??????!?!?? naw.. this was explained it told how the personals was good and explained about the structe and everything also it explained how BPs was as good and it was good and explained

please put this vote valid cos its explained

Diabolic:ima have to give this one to u dawg....cant be a d/r or hate vote cuz both are in Mindz Kollide...i just think BP punches were a LIL betta...just becuz they were some funny punches too..ya opener was good...betta then P's...closer goes to Black..seein as thought it was a lil funny...not really hard to get on challenged peeps...but still it was betta...both had some personals so ima have to give this to black on punches...o yea...yall stay active in the forum now

Ok para, if u gon Give back lyricals vote, then u gotta give this back too..

Voted For: The Black Plague

i voted fo him cause hsi punches was harder his flow was betta and it was funnier good verse from both of you doe

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Voted For: Paramik

close battle....here da breakdown

Punches - Paramik...i have to give it to him give his were alil more direct then Black's...i wasnt really feelin the PUNCH from Black..he had em but they wasnt as hard

Personals - Tie...both of yall tyried to get at each other...but there was no clear winner of that cuz the punches u used for ur personals werent strong on both parts

Meta4s - Tie...both yall put together some decent meta4s...thing is that none of them meta4s came wit a hard punch...1 dude talkin bout sped shoes...another nigga talkin bout gas station...all BLAHHHHHHHHH 2 me

Wordplay - Black Plague...bp did throw in some creative lines...like i sed b4 nuthin led to a ill punch cuz das basically wut a battle is...but u took da cake on da wordplay

Enjoyment Factor - Paramik...simply for the fact that it was easier 2 read as well has havin slighty harder punches...BP i dont complain about ppls structures as long as i can understand basically wut u were tryin to say becuz in TEXT u never no how its ACTUALLY suppose to come out of some1s mouth...but in this case it was seemin to me like ur barz were all stretched out n u kept switchin up ya style...good battle tho...


Vote - Paramik



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