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ok but who r u????????????????????????????????
whas ur alias?..... |
I`m good..... put me on the roster...
Why do you need to know my alias......... by asking me that you may be losing a good member.... just do it.. you wont regret it.... |
if u dont pick em u must be out of damn mind.
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....... ^ word & he`s not joking. I`ve always wanted a women to lead me in the right direction :evilgrin: |
^Mask Murderous? .....
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He an alias not MM..lol
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Ok... I Have No Idea?!!!
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eh?.........it kinda helps to know who he is......but put im on if u want dml.......
might as well....... ive a feelin he/she will b a vet. |
uppin the tryouts.........
cumon peeps............ |
iight yo...this one is from 1 of my battles....the dude still gatta get online and drop but fuck it...ima showing this as a try out..........
Intensify Effect?..thats how u getting murcked by this oustanding VET..and I’m doing this with no REGRETS (1) son take this Spit as a 1000 holes in ya CHEST + bloods all over ur VEST,next time think twice b4 ge’in on the NET... (2) 723 POSTS..no change..you still a JOKE,you'r lines remind me of a gay in a BLOW..you would be "booed" at if this was a SHOW (3) you aint in no CREW..nigga get a fucking CLUE..u suck and u SCREWED.cant u find somethingelse to DO? (4) you puches r just like and old man MOUTH...how u xpeact to hurt me when u aint even got a teeth to brag ABOUT? (5) he dosend even know wherre the fuck he FROM...you battleing me is like putting a pole up ya tinny bum BUM..(6) 8lines and im leaving peeps asking your wherre about...y'all gatta know he's right herre in the cats mouth.. (7) i done with BUSTING YOU..next time i bitch slap think twice 'cos i'd keep CRUSHING YOU..now lets see if this spit aint worth saying "I’M SONING YOU"? (8) iight....the rhymes r in CAP.... 4)he aint in no crew and in his profile he didn’t put whats he does..no work …nothing 6)in his profile he didn’t put where he from peace 1 |
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^When You Tryin Out You Should "HAVE" To But Your 'WORDS' That Rhyme Togetha In "CAPS" ... - Fucks Up Your Whole Flow.. And I Really Aint Feelin It -Work On Structure -Work On Wordplay -Work On Vocabulary -Work On Your Stretched Lines... (Etc; Etc;) ... (Good Luck) Imma Say (Out) |
iight then fuck it....
telling me "you still on the basics" would have be easier i guess.... anyhow.. manip im out....................... 1 sis |
^ No Need To Get All Violent And Shit..!! I Was Giving You Feedback... Not Saying Your Whack.. Or Anything Like That' ...! (Calm Down) ..
-But Like I Said (Good Luck) |
:huh: *looks at my post once again*
was i violent? ohhh prolly its cos i didnt say thanx for the feedback..well thanx 1 |
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No Worries -Your Straight! |
like i said u elevated since we battled x...............
keep workin on ya shit.u`ll get there sis... stay up, n holla back in a while..... peace uppin the tryouts......... rosters lookin pretty aiight so far... |
Yall keep holdin it down.
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No Doubt' ...!!!!! |
yo, whos all on this roster right now?
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Leader: Manipulation
Co-Leader: DangerousMyndLuantic Skillz - Ill-Grammatix Princess -Fluidmoon Mental Murderous |
well im on a tight sched for the night, i'll drop you a poem i wrote yesterday thats in rap structure, tell me what you think, if you want i guess i can spit some lines later
just another grave along this cemetary path, a girl to be exact a path that leads to my heart, constantly getting stabbed in the back confused again, offering all my trust, for not love but lust watching my sympathetic dreams, and hope get blow up in dust another part of my life...wasted...just memories to rot till decay something to regret, that i'll want to forget every single day i despise the tears that flow from my eyes, regreting all my wasted tries looking up to the clouds in the sky, preparing myself for yet another lie theres just nothing left for me to grasp, just something i can't put in the past so i enter the tub, but not for a bath, i hit the tap, and take my last gasp ...i loved you.... word, peace |
i quite liked that.....
the direction it was taking was nice some good emotion ok flow sum multies in there structure was off tho simple vocab... from that id say u got potential on the topical/poetry side u need more complexity..up ya vocab n metas... if u do txt battles,holla wit sum links or spit... wot u think dml?........theres potential i think.... maybe holla back wit sumthin harder? |
... holla ... .
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erm.u in this crew menta???????????????????????...
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heres a pretty old battle between me and headgames, i've obviously elevated since then
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=141918 |
ahhh fuck it, i'll spit a verse gimme ten mins
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if you want "KATASTROPHE", then what you want is me
i cut emcees at the knees and leave em there to bleed i go by red bull, my style is contridicting dull i spit with metaphors, personals and multiples "KONCEPTS" is the crew that i wanna represent so pick me for this, its something you won't regret |
awh no man^^^^^^^^
ur link was cool.that wasnt.......... i liked ur metas in ur battle.....i think u got potential... ima say .yes........... but wait see what dml sez.aiight |
word, i just spit that in 10 mins, cause you said throw sump down
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Multies - Were 'Alright' .. Nothing Great' ..!!! Kinda Doll...! Like You (Contridicting Yourself) Vocabulary - Equal' .... Could Work On It Personals - Was Aight Wordplay - Seems To Me.. You Tried To Much In This Category!' .. Structure - Was Safe...!!! Wasn't Really Feelin Your Verse..!! Buh' ..!!!!! (Im Not Going to Cast My Vote Whether It Be Your In.. Or Your Out) Call's On You...!!!!! Multi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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hmmmm, like i said the verse u dropped wasnt good.but ur link was aiight..........
u got potential,but still work ro be done to improve..... i know u active which is a bonus,n u cool unlike sum herbs on dis site..... so ima say.......... MANIPULATION DANGEROUSMYNDLUNATIC FLUIDMOON ILL-GRAMMATIX MENTAL MURDEEROUS RED BULL U ON THA ROSTER....... use ur potential tho dawg............. uppin 4 tryouts........ |
solid
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let's get this shyt crackin' y'all... wuddup RB... welcome to da fam
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^^^^^^^^^^^^yup gon b crakin real soon.............
2 spots left.uppin 4 those tryouts. |
ey...mani...you've already seen my shit....but from dml i'll drop it again...
freedoms rings Pacing back and forth towards opportunity calling my eyes dribbled tears crossing over to bawling crawling on all fours the floors mapped my stress starting from this hole in the wall to where my head rests to ingest anymore pain....the rain would turn to acid cause it was hard enough not be hard just remaining flacid Everything was plastic....the sharpest point was dulled out and i've tried anything from springs to bed corners to leave my doubts the idea was out...I drew the answer to my memory but it was erased by consequences every light was shimmering I finally gave in..and said "Fuck it...theres no way around this" so my options were obviously escaping or becoming someones bitch relyin on the rich to pay for the food swallowed in my mouth I'd never forgive them for me livin on shit instead of dying without reinacting routes the nightshift slowly thinned out the force determined to do this..i began to quickly move on my course my road was a one laned street and i was hoping for no traffic the path was completing and a dead end was a drawn graphic I couldn't have it..as i darted out to the opening at the end running for my life...i was also wishing for a new one to begin the lights came on...shots started firing at me like a target and over all the noise i could hear the orders from the sergant "Shoot to kill....dont let him leave this prison alive" hearing that i got to the fence right as a bullet pierced my thigh Never slowing down i climbed to the top met by barbwire... and i ripped the shirt off my back just so i could get higher I ran with purpose....again feelin freedom as a thing and while i neared the hill..i escaped....... hearin the alarm of freedoms rings ^ theres a topical heres some battles... this is a battle against some dude named DJtwice or twizzle welcome back duke...s'too bad imma have to beat you in a second round cause the only shit thats spins is when this DJ's turning around ya verse is long...so i'm expectin punches and disses but ya verse still aint makin contact like dudes cyberin with bitches claimin ya stats are godlike...well i couldn't tell you cause I cant get the facts STRAIGHT cause ya GAY dude his talent's like his relationships he doesn't have enough cause his girls are like 56k modems always hangin up I should expose ya mistakes...but damn imma be polite.... and I know his spits are stuck in the middle...cause nothing ever comes out right This fight is given...along with this dudes age old tactics cause Twizzle is more of a washed vet then old chevy classics To ask this I'd be wrong but...dude how could you even rate? i'm like a hungry Michael Ervin the way ya gettin 8 and 8 ......... this is another battle against some dude named Delinquent dopeness runs from this dude..shit and his names a hint that i could give a url to his skill...but even DE link went (delinquent) he couldn't see me if he squint...but i'm not tryin to let you save face cause i'd push you in a gay bar just to put you in your place cmon duke...ya lettin everyone know my punches hurt cause like anorexics with a job...your just light work imma life taker..everyone who faces me faces death so i'll choke em with a baseball glove just to catch his breath he thinks he's hardcore...but watchin porn only makes him HARD... and as for CORE..eatin apples is the only way he'll get that far he's under par....while i'm "Killin headlines" unlike you and ya verse is the only way i'm gonan be the bearer of bad news whatever the decision s'cool pZ |
When we have 8 .. pm strobe.
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will do.wot u think of albatross???????????anyone?.........
id say in. |
yo i'm interested, i'll spit a verse i did in an older battle, aint been doing this long but improving everyday, the 3 losses i have was because i went straight to battling wit6hout learning shit and i am just winning now in all my current battles, heres a piece.... Yo you 'can't Touch This' just like with MC Hammer,
i'ma murk you so bad i'll end up in the slammer, i'ma pysch you out with a demonic eye, i'm the winner of this battle so dont try to lie/ You think your R Kelly and you wanna start your 'ignition', so i'll partition your acquisition as i take you on a murking exhibition, With your mom i'll ass jam her cuz i ram her as i hammer her anal manor, i'm like a wasp in a rage, fuck with me i'll sting you then kick you like Jonny Cage/ (mortal Kombat), My rhyming has evolved since i came here in day one, My lyrics will burn you, burn you like the sun, My skills are perpertual, it lasts forever in the brain, I'm a lyrical G and its driving you insane/ You tell me your sick like 'Marilyn Manson', you not even as sick as that kid from 'Hanson,' I'm the reason you stepped up your pace in the race, battles over, its won and thats the end of the case/ |
Albatross has got a lot of potential... I like how he tries to come a little different with his punches... he can still use some work but I say he'll catch on real quick... IN
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