hot shit..i'd like to see more of dis.....das like a song and a half if u add chrous to it..lol...good shit tho...~1~
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upping.........
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upping gotdamn you newbs sleep on every shit
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uuppping...........
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do i have to post 4 times for you fags to peep this shit out!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
scenario you owe my a feedback snd so does 6 other newbs..... |
that was hot shit paramik, it had everything that was needed, flow, structure, eveything was on point, nice topic to, no ones really youched on that subject.
10/10 |
Our open mic is up now check this dope shit out....
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ok ender could improve beginning and middle fire dopeness this shit is fucking good nice shit
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If Worthy Vote This For Open Mic Of September....
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pretty dope...9/10...lots of writing in this must of took awile...good stucture...but your flow fell a lil but you used multis in some parts but not bad...pretty good
check my open mics links in the sig |
This was like a storyline//script it also=brilliance. Well at least I thought so, you had your concept well developed and you had great grammar and structure.
Definetly one of the better drops this place has seen. |
This was dope. I'm surprised you didn't get jinxed by G_$peed being the first to leave open feed back . lol. But this was a dope one. The best. I've read half of this when I first joined but never left feeb back. So now i do. Goo drop. Hey return da favor in my sig nigka.
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Ight ill do it later..
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7.0 out of 1.0 its good if your under 20yrs old give yourself an extra 1.5
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nice drop ill give it a 8/10 but kinda long
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man this was hot, excellent drop, imagery was great as well as everything else, i don't usually rate stuff, but this is a 10/10 most definite, keep it up man
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