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Voted For: Paramik
good battle......ima break it down.... ICE PIK P's battle success?-he-fails-at-this, so watch as Ice-derails-this-b1tch INTESIFY EFFECT BEAT him so i think its safe to say your skills is shyt!! ^^^HAD a weak personal...weak punch..ur first line was ok setup.punch killed it. 5/10 sayin you'll rip ICE is like sayin' broke people can afford-hummers ßά$ïć Ţђμğãήỗmίçź ???now ur confused like 1st graders multiplyin' wit four-numbers GUD WORDPLAY^^^average punch 6/10 want tha truth???...ya skills is like fat-chicks...aint no one diggin'-ya rhymin' You wouldn't be hot in a volcano in a carribean-climate livin'-inside-it!! GUD WORDPLAY.AGAIN AVERAGE PUNCH 6/10 Pick???....i'm sicc-and-canivin', while u find dicks-to-your-likin' ^^EH.ILL TAKE THIS AS A MISTAKE COZ IT DNT RHYME WIT NOTIN not on my level...you'd only be close to greatness if ya ass was sittin'-near-me yo P...think ya wordplay is on a high level? only if ya dictions- airy wordplay gud.punch ok 6/10 Bottom of the 9th P and imma throw the bat at you, watch my mood ‘swing’ and you ‘catch’ my attitude…. I'll rip u and remain casual….ill make u park in ur place and the ‘Board’ walk like monopoly Avenues... played concept......6/10 Paramik get struck with injuries.. Im the storm in a distant vision , Once my lyrical Onslaught hits you your verse will be left in submission, ^^^filller 5/10 you came to this battle like a hurricane.. and blew your chances of winning ^^^again..does this rhyme???? PARAMIK Already this bitch is thin on his ice, the way this faggot skater sways…… Ice picks flow still couldn’t be graceful if the judges’ marks were A’s. played..5/10 And Gangsta’s breath stinks “on-ice”, just like his punches and his flow… Even if he washed his mouth with “Mentadent”, he still would No-show. ^^^think this is worded wrong?.6/10 This fucking herb’s got gas in his ass but it’s the wackness that he supplied. Knowing that this fags mostly likely to kill himself, than commit homicide. played 5/10 He says he give the punches for those days, that day he felt lucky, son. Considering that, the only days he had a punching spree, was only one. OK 6/10 This kid is hardheaded, he fucking sucks, his cranium’s harder than a brick… Ice Pricks been here for “ice” ages yet his punches and disses never stick. BEST LINE SO FAR 7/10 Still fucking the penguins? This guy is all iced out, I’ll tell this guy to chill. This bastard made Nate Dogg proud, he finally found someone he call kill. DECENT 6/10 Check in, I’ll be rummaging for Ices’ home, his location, and his house key. Ice Pick is his own address, watch him obey me cause he’s a SERVER IP. PLAYED BUT OK.6/10 ICE-34/60 PARA 35/60 scores look tight, but paramik also had far better structure...sum of ices lines didnt rhyme and it was stretched....mostly gud wordplay throughout...but a few played concepts, and the punches too predictable and not hard hittin. think u both need to make sure u work on how u word your punches too. overall.uve both come harder than that best line paramik This kid is hardheaded, he fucking sucks, his cranium’s harder than a brick… Ice Pricks been here for “ice” ages yet his punches and disses never stick. ^^^hardest punch. |
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haha for sure you got this one in the bag too bad i cant vote
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Voted For: Paramik
iight... paramik came up with harder punches and his structure was better...i felt his flow all thru..and his wordplay was decent...but i gatta say both stretched their lines a lil bit...cos ice had all the self glorigication and paramik foucsed more on ice's name..besides all this paramik was still able to rock the mic..nah mean?...ice had a larger vocab but paramik..gets this for a better verse filled with tight punches,better structure,better personals...in short a decent verse.... holla at my battle yo... thanx 1 |
Voted For: Paramik
vote goes to Paramik!! I liked your punches mate, they were nice and original, they had nice word play and were delivered well your flow was good aswell, lines were all even, structure was good. Vocab was good, and the verse was funny, enough said! please return honest vote on one of the battles below! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Paramik
vote goes to paramik.. ice pick im not feeling ur verse.. lackin punches.. it was a good battle tho.. Paramik just came harder.. he had better flow.. and ice pick make ur font smaller it would be easier to read.. no hate ice in my opinion Paramik took it.. good job to both though.. paramik just had better punches pz.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Paramik
ice opener no real punch there but funny i.e do suck lol second punch good also self glory bar 4th dont do that punches ok flow was streched as fuck structure was off disses aight here far from your best a 5/10 paramik opener also no punch second bar ok funny though kill himself good diss funny shit also 3rd bar no dont do that lol dope punch ice ages punches dont stick dope wordplay there lol nate dogg good diss too lol good ender good flow and structure a 7/10 basically i think paramik took this with ease here betetr set up flow and punches more personals and better disses icepick i think will own you he really tried but he slacked and you got him |
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