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wonovakind 02-17-04 02:20 AM

yeah that shit was whack and plain, I must say your rap was lame
I couldn't really give a fuck about the boring crap you claim
Yo recap your brain, you don't know who I am
Knew to the site, but I flow like a dam
Your above me in this thread but not in terms of skills
Your fucked up in the head did you forget to take your pills?
If you spitted that verse I know you couldn't flow it
I'm you multiplied thats a fact I bet you know it

ha just some random shit

- k ! L L z - 02-17-04 03:19 AM

you put words together Just Cuz they Ryme.
Your verse better then Mine? Your Stupid, thats how your One Of a Kind.
Why are you Posting in the Cypher with your Second Post.
dropped crummy like Burnt Toast. And Practice, kid you Need it the Most.
I'm really sick of weak crappy wannaBe Rappers.
stick to Beeing a Wannbe Black Nigga but Instead your a White Wigga.
I Figure. your mixed with a wack and shitty Mixture.
And no your flows Not sure. You got what I'd Call terrible Texture.

carlosbarrett 02-17-04 08:43 AM

Killz how is life you better live it while it last
Lyrics like that will get you in a body cast
Free at Last said Dr.King
Son you don't want it in a ring
You from the projects but you ain't done a thing
You stay in your house and you get lunch money snatched
Probably got gats but would'nt dream of squeezing at
An emcee like me who chills in DC
Act like I know ya in a toyota corolla you fallen soilder
Quoting BIG, NAS, EMINEM and HOVA...it's over

Drain Bamage 02-17-04 09:18 AM

so carlos is ur name
with that rhyme u must be full of shame

u call that a rhyme?
mayb u'll improve in due time

soldier i am proud to be
atleast im not a political detainee

whats up with that avatar of yours
it really is out of doors

youd rather start planning ur atttack
b4 u end up in a shack

Next Level 02-17-04 09:26 AM

fillin this room with clutter spittin straight outta a gutter words left in the air to flutter/
your lyrics in convolsions causin nuthin but repulsion/
u need to check ya style, practice for a lil while come back with a style then maybe you'l gain a smile/
and change ya name cause spittin from a gain leaves nuthin for you to gain/
sept a loss with yourself and ya wackness to blame./

Born To Kill 02-17-04 09:52 AM

This kid's so whack, he posted twice like we care...
Shit! If he's the Next Level...I don't wanna go there!
Simply blast ya dumbass, cuz ya really don't matter...
Be like the gun in ya sig, and bitch, ya the laughter.
Then hop one to the left, I'm agile ain't ya heard?
And show you proper respect, by flipping you the bird!

carlosbarrett 02-17-04 10:05 AM

You ain't gonna be ready anytime soon
I equal doom at night my chrome shine like the moon
I will consume you and your idol
I'm tryna recycle
you and emcees like you
no guns I'll stand and fight you
You mad I ain't a white dude
Intimidated you get eliminated and isolated
I barely fake it you can't stop shaking your jaw is acheing
Your born to kill but you ain't caught no bodies
You freestlye about killing cause its a hobby
You not like me
And I'm glad I'm not like you
I did'nt wanna bury you but I had to
Bust at you :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shocked:

Kwizikz 02-17-04 10:07 AM

Born to kill?..That's false advertising, 85 losses?..Shit
This guy musta fell off...And rotted away in the pit(avi)
Dumb prick...Merkings look like they are convenience thats true
But only to others...Or the 85 wack Mc's who have merked U!
And the 112 U've actually beat...Guys musta been less than able
Newbie MC's on Rb...Or this guy Battlin the disabled

LyricalKing25 02-17-04 10:32 AM

:thefinger Im timeless and im callin out nextlevelsfinest. So come holla at ya boy and I will leave you spineless. I wanna see if your worthy. And if you are I will put two nines on ya back like a Warren Sapp jersey. Im ready nigga, so come show me if ya aim is steady nigga. I got a shoty and you got a mashete nigga. Its real and young boy you could never get a deal. And we know you a lie if you say you holdin steel. So do you want beef Im askin. When reply, Im like Shells, HA HA Im laughin!

:gfy: :shoot:

Ambitious 02-17-04 10:37 AM

To Kwizikz
^Rag on BTK for all his losses but your out of place....
Took you 20 minutes to write 6 lines all in haste
Ya verse is shoddy, sloppy, your nothin but cocky...
I knew you were wack so that verse wasnt shocking
Jocking, for a position on Rb, but gifted..you? hardly!
You were done before u started, hed like seas parted
Diseased & retarded ...you beggin me please will u pardon...?
How alarmin.... he said he'd suck the dick of my sergent!
Damn..... maybe thats why Credz let you in our crew!
I just dont like your name I aint got beef with you....
So you can breifly choose ...if you want teeth to chew
....Cause punches break ya jaw slice the weak in two!
Truthfully herb.......this shit is nothin to me
Cant even call this a diss....
.............Cause it was just somethin to key!

LyRiCaL GeEnUs 02-17-04 10:43 AM

God ya whack, I clap ya back
And load my mac, with a tap
I'm dop cause I smoke coke and shit
Bit wits to write hits frim lips....Word
Execuativees? aint dope..like me cant you see G?
Lyrically I'm the MC who is the dopeset outta all....and shit

lilrenegade89 02-17-04 10:46 AM

im sick of ya shit like i said b4 ur lame lyrical
but this shit rite here is a fuckin mirical
lyrick bites rhymes everytime
that y he got no respect i flip a dime
i turn and its ur time to burn
imma roast u toast u
kill u n thrill u
n thats y lyrical dun make thrills boo

Provoked Images 02-17-04 10:53 AM

renegade is a song not produced by u...
u holdin guns but thug is not old skool...
Alliance Deffiance, I'm RB's sattellite spy...
Eye sees you in tha street as heat dies...
I've seen better structure in a wheel chair...
Little is correct, illegal for you to chill here...
parentel discretion is not a suggestion...
you "little" PSA, got Smoked Sausauge in your congestion...

lilkdogg1988 02-17-04 10:56 AM

Yo this whitebread mothafucka can't say shit, he's always fuckin talkin bout someones dick!
Yeah he's fuckin white and wants to be black, he's a discrase to the race! Renegade take that!
On any fucking day i'll beat you in a battle get off the dick and a goddamn horse sattle!

Provoked Images 02-17-04 11:06 AM

u posted agist tha noob instead of me, bad boy...
keep spinnin your record, your style used to be a "fad toy"...
like Furby... Goo Goo Gaa Gaa, Kid take your BaaBaa...
you need more help understandin then Luke to his Fatha...
Your worthless, not even gonna be on my Murklist...
heard better from a 3 year old group of 4 kids....
each about half your age, and could lyrically beat ya...
creatureless in your presence? nope, u could post twice...
but it just be a murkin double feature!!

cdawglady 02-17-04 11:33 AM

You rap like a child talkin bout furbys and what not
the real thing is you messed up on the dot
call that dude a noob you have no room to talk
you ignoramus i think youll never be famous
thats why you keep talkin your shit well cut your bit cause your rap medaly stinks

Provoked Images 02-17-04 11:38 AM

ha ha, oh boy, wat up wit you, Gladys??
old females on RB now? and gettin franctic?
don't all of a sudden come on and try being...
one of us true, unhidden Records who MC'n...
you suck more than hookers who pay up...
stick to cyphers, cause in battles...
it's easy to beat you like Blockin a WNBA lay up...

Born To Kill 02-17-04 11:45 AM

Fucka Image, consider me blind then...don't wanna see you...
Cuz ya ugly as fuck, and ya provoking me ta run ya through.
How lame can you possibly be, from the heart of the devil...
This kid's whack and won't even be as good as Next Level! ^^^
So back to hell with this whore, hope ya liked ya lesson...
Kid's so confused he's running from me, like his roving sig question.

One_Der 02-17-04 12:05 PM

Born to kill, it seems you spend too much Time on this board (Look at his record, posts), Shoulda never posted in this thread. Your MINE now ya whore!
And if your a veteran, I must be an ALL pro. Sick multis,punches, that'll make ya Fall hoe!
You should'a known, that when One's Fightin ya dead. I'll leave ya like the skull in your avater with a Spike in ya head!!

LOL

Ambitious 02-17-04 12:17 PM

Hey look it's a new world one_der....
I leave ya body parts left right up & under
Never trace you back to NY cause your wack...
Your stretched lines and no punches thats facts!
Look at ya verse it has to make you sick...
That was fifth now this bitch throws up for the 6th!
Intellegence ....you a majority holder I wonder....
Cause to you its like my words give you sun burn!
Burn you with heat ....no wins to earn you cheat...
Not discrete....I'll kill u in the cypher so every1 sees!

Jo-JO 02-17-04 12:19 PM

MEANT FOR ONE_DER

One der what the fuck does that mean and this post what duz that mean
Im lost your skill will go completly unseen on the underground scene
With no skill and your complete structure is under complete destruction
So with new disrupution on this Virgin Battler with no skill with assumption
that this punk was born with out the real world funk so continue on
And with the foolish words of this man fucking with the online veteran
u think that u r the best but infact you infest and are not better than

DAARK 02-17-04 12:58 PM

Jo Jo shut tha fuck up ur style iz "pain" to tha sore eyez/
thas why I devise~a plan so wise ta bring yo faggot ass str8 demise/
no compromise I already made yo "shortcomingz" painfully clear/
nigga I swear~one more spittage from U and amma split tha chest of 1 mo queer(that's U bitch)/
Bro jus leave tha "cypherin" and battles up ta real lyricist/
but if U persist~I can bump yo name up quick on this hit list like "shindlers list"(tha halocaust shyt)/

NextLevelzFinest 02-17-04 12:58 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by LyricalKing25
:thefinger Im timeless and im callin out nextlevelsfinest. So come holla at ya boy and I will leave you spineless. I wanna see if your worthy. And if you are I will put two nines on ya back like a Warren Sapp jersey. Im ready nigga, so come show me if ya aim is steady nigga. I got a shoty and you got a mashete nigga. Its real and young boy you could never get a deal. And we know you a lie if you say you holdin steel. So do you want beef Im askin. When reply, Im like Shells, HA HA Im laughin!

:gfy: :shoot:


y u cum in at me like u want beef nucca, i'll put da mack 2 ya face have u spittin wit no teeth nucca, i got a gurl 2 hold ma heat triggaz, n wen it cum 2 coppin bodyz im da mutha fuckin Ol' G nigga, i blaze dudes like u wen im sparkin a dutch, dont kiss ya gurl cuz den u gone b tonguen ma nut,

Edge 02-17-04 02:08 PM

bringing it as always...
 
this is a diss for the nextlevelsfinest,
biggest whiner in the world, that would be his highness,
he decides to get even with the lyrical king,
who only spits rhymes when his mouth is not full of chicken wings,
but enough about that chump, nlf with the iq of a tree stump,
he crouches when someone asks him to jump,

first let's break down his name, which is weak like his game,
his lyrics dwindling like burning kindling, so is his fame,
ne to the xt, and I am feeling sleepy,
le to the vel, like a pervert kinda creepy,
fi to the nest, according to women in the sack he's speedy,
and together it all sucks and is boring the shit out of me,

with my rhyme I bring everything, and the kitchen sink,
nlf, change your drawers you corpse, because you're starting to stink,
sitting in the witness dock with a blue dot, because you are a fink,
now like the Boston Red Sox, consider yourself jinxed,

Now let me get off your neck,
throw your body off the aircraft carrier deck,
down to the seagulls and on you they will peck,
and they feed on you like a cousin feeds on a redneck,

holla! :cussing:

ThatBoiQ 02-17-04 02:10 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by NextLevelzFinest
y u cum in at me like u want beef nucca, i'll put da mack 2 ya face have u spittin wit no teeth nucca, i got a gurl 2 hold ma heat triggaz, n wen it cum 2 coppin bodyz im da mutha fuckin Ol' G nigga, i blaze dudes like u wen im sparkin a dutch, dont kiss ya gurl cuz den u gone b tonguen ma nut,


This is to the boi callin his self the finest...
This nigga's typin looks like it was done by a tyrant
WTF is a nucca, ain't that a baby bottle
Slow down kid, stop mashin on da throttle
here's 2 tips to improve ya skillz... maybe you can make some kills.
#1. No one can read WTF you typin and read yo shit over does it sound right recitin.
#2. Try hard to Rhyme some shit that can compare to yo opponent, right now, you just not on it.

retard101 02-17-04 02:44 PM

hope you like this ThatBoiQ

cuz yall dont wanna mess with the best/
fuck around end up with 6 holes in ya chest/
shotgun cocked but so is the gat/
i dont even need those ill use the louisville bat/
when you see me its comin straight for your face/
you dont know me dog im a new breeded race/
lyrically encised to rip you apart/
but can you talk that shit with 4 holes in your heart/

blackcasper 02-17-04 03:01 PM

retard
 
i take retard 1 on 1//
we talk lot of shit but he dont know i got a gun//
:shoot: the $hit i spit goes pas the meat intour bones//
type of nigga that burns down ur home//
black casper some shit u cant see//
leave u retiring like jay-z// :laugh:

TheUnderRated 02-17-04 03:44 PM

how this rapper is crapper try and make him happier but just gets crappier
I got a spear so you fear the guy with the beer cause i'm budweiser you are like a visor and i suprise you with how good i am and can drop cause i know and love hip hop so i do it non stop black casper wanted to be a friendly ghost but couldn't host the toast for the most roasted peanut this kid must be nuts to challenge a great MC..
Making Candy thats not what it stands for you whore and hit youin the lip with like 200 more
you take rhymes from ohter brothers and do that shit unde cover and you a lover of you rmother i'm talkin about your mom kid get with my bid and did the pit of the stomach on this wreck and tech so check the net blackcasper less know than rapbitches.net...that doesn't exist this is the ultimate diss i gotta go take a piss pz...

Slayer 02-17-04 04:02 PM

You are under rerated because wen u drop u dont leave a dent
A bet after you have cliked submit reply, you wish ya spit had not sent
One little glance at ya drop we get one chance to read but we all stopped
I am a mountain and you are a peble and you have just been rocked
My lyrics can kill make em move round u, like a ‘figure of speech’
I can hand a chrome nine infront of u but that’s still a ‘trigger to reach’
You in grave danger cos u got rocked by a new stranger, im the best
And we under rate cos u cant make complex words with a dictonary just to complicate text

LyRiCaL GeEnUs 02-17-04 04:28 PM

Why you dissin and pissin on my crew bud?/ Smoke bud and smell flower buds cause Ima stud/ And loved..wanna hug? FAg Like that show JAG I'll tag your bag and saly all demons....and slay slayer too cause hes whack...how bout that...like a rat trap..your causght in my turmoil and such...eat you fo lunch...and kick you in the nuts....peanutbutter and jelly like tellietubby.....Dun fuck with us....We're the best...Wanna battle call me out in Bitchslapped and I'll make ya bones rattle...But don't tattle

lyricalchick86 02-17-04 04:38 PM

Slayer yo lyrics can kill bitch dey punch weakly
u aint got but 1 post so bitch slow yo role :nono:
you a gay muthfucka im more woman den u
i can beat u in battle while u lickin my click
u beatin me is like say janet aint show her tit tee
:spit:
my rhymes betta den yours kid
so u dont need to front... :thefinger

KytoKhouang 02-17-04 06:06 PM

Are you fuckin' serious?
This chick, may be frontin' wit her rhymes she just said.
I'd put her six feet under twice, and she was never dead.
You got more pictures in your rhymes are you really an 'artist?'
Rap my ass ho, you worse than Wiley Coyote tryin' his hardest.
You should stick to Barbies cuz thats what girls like you, know.
If it ain't Barbies, then you better get down low and blow.
I'm not proud of my record but at least I've tried.
0-0 to start out with 31 posts, you never lived, but already died!

Slayer 02-17-04 06:12 PM

Bitch dont post if you got no talent that ya can 'put in this thread'
U the type to ask Bevis that i get 'nuttin but-head'
Bitch just say the word, i leave ya DNA on the kurb
Keep open minded so i can stick ma dick in ya ear an fuck wot u heard
This is rap not storys u actin like an old age pensioner
I can diss bitches in my spit
Make em regret cumin up 2 me an gettin wet
And i didnt even mention her

Hitta 02-17-04 06:34 PM

SLAYER popin a lot of shit for a gay ass nigga that will get hit.....
this was your 3rd post and noW ya thinkin you da shit..
hard hitter is up ta hit...
now ya talkin about stickin and movein..
talkin about fuckin ear's thats the only way u proven ta say u fit tight.......
i aint gunna put up a fight.....
ill leave u hangin right were u stand up right....
uve just been sliced and proved ta them im iller right....
put on ya fight face check out the price rates..........
ta bite fakes and dafeat um.......
beat fakes and greet um with the sickest puches ya herd...
...........NIGGA ya herd...........
i lay you out u just a NEWB herb........
bout ta get served fags talking alot of shit when hes really the bitch...................

Dev 02-17-04 07:12 PM

500 posts a month.... ha ha... free poster
ya couldnt pop a dis... with a verbal toaster
ya could'nt hit hard... with frost bite
cos ya lyrical skill is like the sun at night
fucking shite... dim and outta sight
this cypher is wack... but i dont battle with kids...aight..

....lmao.... im jus so wack...

BluMami 02-17-04 07:12 PM

Dis is FO U HITTER!!
 
Hard Hitter u aint hard cuz u spittin out that profane/
really aint compared to the "Real Artists" in the Rap Hall of Fame//
if i hit you, dont hit me back with some non-sense, cuz ill throw it back/
gonna catch it , cuz yo style is like u dont know how ta act//
u talkin' like u gonna finna rip them apart/
how about i lyrically dislocate ya in parts?//
man u was weak from the start/
all that jibberish is bleek, and it's a shame, u claim you "Hittin' Hard"//

Hitta 02-17-04 07:46 PM

OK NUM NUTS^^ ightt yo blumami ima leave u swellon and brused........
you aint spittin shit just the same old rhyme tunes........
get a life your just a fuckin newB.......
i would teach ya this shit but fact is u never had it dude....
why diss on my post's i have 400 someodd more then u!!/
..............you'll never be Ill...........
..."only way this kid is ILL when he at the fuckin hospital".....
i will serve u burn u and sonn you.
and send you on your way straight in ta the next day........
copy and paste ta text my way..
ill take time ta merk all of y'all..........
but fact is none of u ever had it herbs ta hit back kicks..............
ta back shit ta stab hit's........
ill rap it in any styel ta key it up.......
just call me out and feast up.................................

BluMami 02-17-04 08:13 PM

can't you read? it says "Blu Mami" dude imma female/
dont let me thrive you out, and subdue to comprise a regale//
if im spittin nursery, then u need to elevate on ya Vocabulary/
obviously u aint the illest MC, cuz ya messin' up on ya P's//
Punches is what it means/
dont let me toss that garbage out to a RB...Revine//

Hitta 02-17-04 08:40 PM

OK.. you a female i would fuck ya till ya in sides swelled...........
put more cock in ya then ya belly could hold....
my dick long and bold take and choke ya and make ya swallow my load..
i load up ta fuck ya hardA why the fuck ele's would they call me hardhitter..
run ya mouth and ima put it in ya shitta........(ass)
no wait ya prolly like that to much..
............you prolly just a nother butt slutt........
lookin on R&B tryin ta cop a nut.
bomb back at this and hard hitter gunna fuck ya like a virgin slut................

k-nine 02-17-04 09:14 PM

ow shit...here i go again spittin verse for this midget
your flow is irritatin like a leakin faucet/
the illest mc..?how the fuck can you post it...?
you must be ashamed dawg hit the X then close it/
free yayo... people are tired for this g-unit wannabe's
livin ya fantasies...get fucked by sorrorities/
my cursed flow will leave you infected with allergies
hard hitter just got pedophiled by seniorities/oww shiit


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