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Ill-Grammatix 10-17-04 03:47 AM

once again i call upon the public to drop an honest vote and elect a winner... for the people, by the people...one

Ill-Grammatix 10-17-04 07:59 AM

I was in Katastrophe Koncepts when this battle started and me and Empire weren't in the same crew... why'd that vote get deleted?!!!

For$akeN 10-17-04 03:39 PM

This was feedback posted for Ill-Grammatix
 
i want free money so i'm leaving feedback in people battles of my crew:) good luck 1

~Luciano~ 10-18-04 02:35 AM

Voted For: DV8


Dv8
u had nice flawless structure i mean it was a lil long but datz aight
u can chop dat down u had nice punches and good setup
ya personals were portrayed really well and ya meta's were aight
u had some nice wordplay which stands out 2 me
Punches,Meta's and Personals and wordplay are the keyz 2 winning
and u checked them all

Ill
u came with an ok drop here u could of elevated it a lil
and provided a better structure cuz u lost points jus because
it was sloppy and kinda difficult 2 follow u should focus on a smaller font u can fit in alot more instead of havein the letters all big and stretched
ya punches were there but ya set up wasent and that also lost u points
nice personals

was kinda a close battle but Dv8 takes this one

Ill-Grammatix 10-18-04 04:59 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by *Troop*
Voted For: DV8
Ill
u came with an ok drop here u could of elevated it a lil
and provided a better structure cuz u lost points jus because
it was sloppy and kinda difficult 2 follow u should focus on a smaller font u can fit in alot more instead of havein the letters all big and stretched
ya punches were there but ya set up wasent and that also lost u points
nice personals

was kinda a close battle but Dv8 takes this one
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Thanks for the feedback... even though ya hate my crew,lol... it's all tied up 3-3... it can still go either way... *nods his head approvingly"... "this is how battles are supposed to go down... neck and neck... respect,DV8!"

...Apocalyptic Soul... 10-18-04 08:48 PM

This was feedback posted for Ill-Grammatix
 
f.saken alias i want money nuff said:0.....:).....

Ill-Grammatix 10-20-04 07:38 AM

da fuck?...ya got bookies after you or sum'n... tell'em I.G. got ya back and to lay off 'fore shyt get real hectic for 'em!

iamthatdude87 11-03-04 03:30 AM

Voted For: DV8

aight this battle semmed one sided to me....i liked the multies in dv8 verese he also had baetter puches...overall better verse

ill ur verse was ill but i wasnt feeling the flow like that line when u sed ur the only ill grammatix i wasnt feeling that line it was like a self glorification...u both did gud but dv8 gets my vote both of ya stay up

Ill-Grammatix 11-03-04 05:10 PM

explain this vote more or it'll get deleted...thanks for voting though...one

iamthatdude87 11-07-04 06:27 AM

ok since i have to explain more i'll just tell u y i voted against IG ur verse had a lot of self glorifactions such as "I appreciate the chance to alleviate DV8
Ya intermedi-ate skills ain't good enough for drops I.G. create" and "Pretend-to-be-sick with words" but I'm the only "Ill-Grammatix"
there is more but im not going into it u had sum gus punches and personals but some i wernt feelin like the only way u can see me is in the member mugshots.... oops thats a glorifCTAION hmmm....lets see....i cant think right now if this isnt enuff just pm me

Replay 11-07-04 06:32 AM

Voted For: DV8

Ya lines waste space n shit, ya Konsept's laced wit distaste, I
displace n erase your hits,
Your styles basic, ya only spit ill with grammar when lick’n disease
infested novelists clits,
(nice opener and it works cause he posted first and hot mults)
herb your trash, you write words i laugh, you phat? .not even when
writing on obese hips,
fuck your scripts, you hot? you wouldnt even spit fire if i was
lighting grease on ya lips,
(more hot mults but kinda wack punch on this one)
you wanna go toe 2 toe? you betta be pissin cyphillis in butt ta match
my sick ass flow,
ya record shows you lack blows,ya most accomplished wins from a chick
dat no-showed,
(the second line was ok but the first was a swing and a miss)
i must adress your a mess,you honestly give new meaning to the word to
meaning-less,
im not sure whats more pathetic.!..,your text of ya crew being led by a
fuckin princess,
(a personal not really good or bad)
ya drops are neglected, you ILL? .......nah ya shits not even close to
being infected,
ya got a false sense of being respected, here ill fix ya verse
*DELETE*..!!now its perfected,
(lololol nice that oginal forreall)
ILL's GRAMMA punches like TIX, so my hits'll leave him in knots like
little kids shoe laces,
get a grip and take ya trip, cause you don't pack a punch like hawaiin
drinks in suit cases,
(in a suit case???????????)
your gay n strictly ass, youra dick dat wack n you aint in the army to
be physical attacked,
its obvious your a fag, dats a skill you grasp, but you shoud really
try stayin off that crack,
(wack...)
its fuckin obvious dude , but i know U don't have a clue, the only
kastrophy in U're crew is U,
U're pussy, in a crew full of fems, that explains why you have momma in
your name 2,
(lololol funny stuff)
who you mad at, your jus a army brat that try's ta pass bad spits as
effective static,
its tragic, cause you could'nt even drib-ill (dribble) lethal spits if
your name was magic,
(not a good closer but still a nice line)

I appreciate the chance to alleviate DV8
Ya intermedi-ate skills ain't good enough for drops I.G. create
(good opener but not that hot of a line)
Mock Battle Verses?... you pre-write! you thought we wouldn't remember?
Ya entered R.V. a loser still you think you a contender
(Wack............. with a capital W)
"Pretend-to-be-sick with words" but I'm the only "Ill-Grammatix"
This faggot's a clone-a baggage of bones with skills extracted
(is this really a bar in your verse?)
Ya "Mind Kollidez" with mine-ya mental's gettin scrambled
Can't think straight... like homos with pictures of Tevin Campbell
(lmao)
(ok finally a nice line)
Keep ramblin' on and on about the garbage kats you blow through
They all noobs... ya supposed to win... but this post here exposed you
(second line wack but first was okey)
I coast through ya flow with ease... this text-tease (textee's)
Gettin' "clowned" and knocked down like "Ron" boxin' in "Mickey D's"
(lol)
(Nice bar wit a capital N lolol)
Nigga please... the only way you seeing me is in member mugshots
It must be mosquito season cuz all ya punches feel like love knocks
(pretty good)
My hammerin blows leave foes stammerin... doze? I'll finish you
"Pop-eyes" using lethal lines with the same effect that spinach do
(ctfu)
(wack again)
Miniscule kat... Diminish ya raps... ya styles beneath me
Whenever you want another "L" you know where you can reach me!
(bad really bad)
it was dv8 al the way


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