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Voted For: untouchablekilla
TORJAN.. ya punches are like fans to pac...they always gon miss me... i use complicity in punches,to lyrically burn this emcee... 1ST LINE WAS GOOD 2ED FELL OFF n TO ME MADE NO SENSE.. ya could put macs in ya verse,and it still wouldnt pack heat...* ya could vote for ya self five times,but ya still gon get beat... SET UP DECENT FOLLOW WAS WEAK am treatin ya game like a fat bitch...aint no chance its gettin a look... id have to be high on some chronic shit...for both of them to look good...** CHRONIC DONT MAKE U SEE THINGS BETTER THAT ARE UGLY LIQUER DO... WASNT FEELING IT.... am truly tht ill....im lyrically sicker thn somebody wit flu... ya lines played so much like a lil kids brand new PS2...*** 1st line was weak, follow was decent untouchable...shit...looks like ma rhymes got ya wrapped... u made a mistake..dont ever come battle me without ya metal packed...**** weak N played concept but i've seen it worded way better... u aint killin shit bitch...am twistin ya wordz round am bound to merk ya down...leave this fag lookin like a clown... eeeeh.... dont fool yaself man..ya stupid..our mindz aint never gon collide... ya still couldnt be up on ma level...even if u took an helicopter ride...***** decent cuz i still grasp what u was trying to say N do... ya lookin straight at the screen..kid..tht puts ya behind ma bars... locked up..tht makes ya owned..like ferrari owns cars... nah ending was lacking a punches or diss or personal wasnt to raw in this battle word-play was iffy N weak at times flow was ok creativeness just wasnt good.... 5/10 killah untoucabalekilla really a untouchable vet will never answer to threats used ya verse to whipe my ass, and i still aint fellin ya text preety good opener... trojan you cant topple me, im about to beat ur ass properly The only way you could match my skill is when you literaly copy me decent.... my lines shine, rhyme after rhyme to go and blind your eyes hit from the blindside, not like u... hittin on bi blind guys* haha shit was funny to me decent diss.... my style has readers eager to read avoid the drawnout suspense…/ your weak structure promotes little change like a DNA sequence ok.. its no lie u've been ripped like people with dead plasma punch's will leave u short on breath like midget's on asma good hit... fuck this last line,i dont need it,this is the only useless line i need I just type words like oxygen,so i give ya some time to breathe ending was weak.... but u still had decent hits decent diss flow was good creativeness was slightly above average all around not a bad verse... 7.5/10 |
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Voted For: untouchablekilla
This VoTe for Untouchablekilla... he did his Thing nice structure, wordplay & just properly brought it 2 him hard... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Trojan
i vote for trojan becouse he has some good hits ajainst uk his metas were better and his structure was too Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Trojan
nto bad i think trojan won tho but its was a hella weak battle for vocab and punches but the wordplay almost got it man:D heres what i came up with for this battle like the rating n shit like day you kno what i eman here: punches: trojan wordplay: trojan vocab: no one stucture: trojan, i guess flow: no one metas: trojan multi's: no one opener: trojan closener: trojan, everyone needs openerss and closeners vote and more enjoyed: trojan return the favour in my battle verse mattee1 the links in ma sig thanks peace |
Voted For: Trojan
Nice post, Hard punches Nice metas He elevated. And he delivered. Nice man V/Trojan If you dont have a crew then try out for Organized Sound.....nuff said. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: untouchablekilla
untouchablekilla...nice drop, you have a sweet opener, got me stoaked on reading your whole verse. i was also pumped on the midget asma line haha, good shit. overal you had good flow and a good structure, nice wordplay and allright vocab...some good punches in there, i give your verse a 7.5/10 Trojan - you set up your opener pretty good with the first line, but you followed up it pretty weak, you had some good punches in there, i like the PS2 line haha, overal you had a good flow, and struture, good wordplay, the vocab was allright, and punches were pretty solid...id give this verse a 7/10 close and good battle, but im gonna have to give it to.... v/untouchablekilla drop an honest vote with GOOD FEEDBACK on this battle please as i have or done this for you, please good feedback i can't stand when votes get dq'd http://community.rapverse.com/showb...54&page=1&pp=15 |
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drop a honest vote on my battle, dont retalliate if i didnt vote for u or if u dont like me or somethin, honest vote whoever http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=150480 thanks peace |
Voted For: untouchablekilla
This was a nice battle. Both of y'all came hard (65 replies wow lol) Trojan, you had a pretty good verse. You had nice punches, but soom didn't hit all that hard. But they were still nice. Yo flow was aiight. It fell off in a few spots in my opinion though. But overall nice flow. You had an overall pretty nice verse. Nice shit, I like it. Untouch, you had a nice verse. Yo punches were hittin' pretty hard throuhggout the verse. Nice personals. I liked it nice shit. YO flow was on point too. Fell off on a few parts, but still. Nice shit Overall, I thonk you edged it out though. no hate. pc |
Voted For: untouchablekilla
This is how it goes: Trojon: Opener: was bad not only did i not get the punch i also hate it as an opener. Closer: it was worse than the opener Flow: litle rough but okay Style: i hate when people have to explain they raps but other than that it all good Punches: there were some there but they didn't hit and were confusing Personals: none Mults: didn't see any Vocab: not to complex UNTAKA: Opener: It was a starter but not hot but still good Closer: i liked it but instead of words u shoulda said punches Flow: it was real good i like it props Style: i don't like hypelinks in battles Punches: funny shit Personals: al there Mults: didn't see any Vocab: nice u had it large words and everything vote: UNTAKA |
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Voted For: Trojan
i give this win to Trojan. He packed more punchlines that made sense, his structure was alright, his flow was sorta off at times...but overall a pretty str8 verse. untouchablekilla...u had punches (just not as much), your verse flowed a little better than trojan's...but overall trojan won it...but it was a good battle...i could tell both of y'all put some thought into it. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Trojan
nice battle trojan wins dis 1 close battle tho i think he just took this 1 i lyked his verse better he had little harder punches nice battle pz out Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: untouchablekilla
wow man u stomped him...urs sounds hot...his dont.. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: untouchablekilla
untoucabalekilla really a untouchable vet will never answer to threats used ya verse to whipe my ass, and i still aint fellin ya text OK DISS NICE FLOW TO IT 5/10 trojan you cant topple me, im about to beat ur ass properly The only way you could match my skill is when you literaly copy me MORE GOOD FLOW AND A NICE LITTLE PUNCH 7/10 my lines shine, rhyme after rhyme to go and blind your eyes hit from the blindside, not like u... hittin on bi blind guys* LOL DOPE WORDPLAY HERE MADD MULTIS GOOD PUNCH 8/10 my style has readers eager to read avoid the drawnout suspense…/ your weak structure promotes little change like a DNA sequence GOOD VOCAB OK PUNCH 6/10 its no lie u've been ripped like people with dead plasma punch's will leave u short on breath like midget's on asma LOL GOOD PUNCH AGAIN A 7/10 fuck this last line,i dont need it,this is the only useless line i need I just type words like oxygen,so i give ya some time to breathe THIS WAS YOUR WEAKEST LINE A 4/10 ya punches are like fans to pac...they always gon miss me... i use complicity in punches,to lyrically burn this emcee... OK AINT REALLY RHYME A WEAK PUNCH 3/10 ya could put macs in ya verse,and it still wouldnt pack heat...* ya could vote for ya self five times,but ya still gon get beat... PUNCH AINT MAKE SINCE HE WINS IF HE VOTES FOR HIM SELF 5 TIMES SO HE WONT GET BEAT 0/10 am treatin ya game like a fat bitch...aint no chance its gettin a look... id have to be high on some chronic shit...for both of them to look good...** THIS AINT RHYME OR HIT AT ALL A 2/10 am truly tht ill....im lyrically sicker thn somebody wit flu... ya lines played so much like a lil kids brand new PS2...*** SICK LINES ARE PLAYED AND IT AINT HIT WITH THE PS2 EITHER 2/10 untouchable...shit...looks like ma rhymes got ya wrapped... u made a mistake..dont ever come battle me without ya metal packed...**** GUNPLAY LINES ARE ALSO PLAYED A 3/10 u aint killin shit bitch...am twistin ya wordz round am bound to merk ya down...leave this fag lookin like a clown... JUST TALKING SHIT AINT NOTHING THERE 3/10 dont fool yaself man..ya stupid..our mindz aint never gon collide... ya still couldnt be up on ma level...even if u took an helicopter ride...***** FINALLY A DECENT PUNCH 7/10 ya lookin straight at the screen..kid..tht puts ya behind ma bars... locked up..tht makes ya owned..like ferrari owns cars... ANOTHER WACK BAR TO END A 1/10 DAMMIT TROJAN I KNOW YOU SPIT WAYYYYYYYYY BETTER THEN THIS WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED HERE?THIS KID KILLED YOU WITH BETTER PUNCHES DISSES STRUCTURE AND VOCAB ON ALL LEAVELS HE MERKED YOU AND I KNOW YOU SPIT WAY BETTER THEN THIS SO THIS DISSOPOINTS ME. VOTE-UNTOUCHABLEKILLA |
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