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-   -   eveO vs Lyriclesolja (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=149781)

Lyriclesolja 09-23-04 12:29 PM

Uppin for the win!!!!!.........i will return the favor with an unbias vote!!

Lyriclesolja 09-24-04 04:20 AM

Uppin..

Lyriclesolja 09-24-04 08:42 AM

Uppin i will return the favor with an unbias vote!

Lyriclesolja 09-24-04 12:44 PM

Uppin...........

M&rk 09-24-04 12:59 PM

Voted For: eveO

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144992
^^^return wit a explained vote!!

im goin this way becuz of his wordplay like....solja you still suck on my worst day i could shove scrable pieces up ya ass and u still couldn't fuck with my word play//
^^^really decent line, but u need to write in bars so it not so stretched and (//) these are newbish, writing in bars is better.


solja- u need to work on wordplay disses that hit, like eve did, take random things like that scrabble line and turn it into a witty diss. since u didn't have one of those i gotta go wit eve who did.... return the vote, link on the top peace.

Scenario 09-24-04 01:14 PM

Voted For: eveO

ok battle


eveO: nice wordplay, good structure, great flow, hot punches (the 1st and 2nd bar) just work on expanding ya vocab a lil more and ya punches, not really any personals, i liked the meta's, u got potential. all and all 7.5/10



Lyriclesolja: to basic, could have been better, elevate on being more creative, punches really didn't hit, no multi's, some aight meta's, need to expand ya vocab, structure was messy which kinda messed the flow up. all and all 4/10


vote: eveO


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