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word thats hwy hes lost poets...leader |
word up...:)
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Well thanks, but I didnt know if you understood it all, so I explained some of the lines, gimme some feedback, and if you did just understand, then say, "I new that already" and that"ll be enough thnx ~1~ |
I understood it...dont worry...just think of creative metas and ull elevate...
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who wnats ot tag team bash some noobs cuz im bored???
LI??? shabba??? |
chase do you really need help to noob bash??......lol
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Hmmmm, I think I might post something in here
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Oh know this is really wack, for you and for me, lol I dropped hella weak and payed the price, but cuz of this ima be really angry wit this battle and k.o Red Bull wit a hot verse (wich will be in here when I finish) so just peep this for now, it was vs. Fiya Spitter
Bit his name off Lady Fiya, you disgrace a good name// Nottin mo then a 'bitch', i'll leave you out in the rain// Imitate the guy in headgames sig, i'll strangle you wit a piano wire// Didnt know wack was 'hot' these days, guess thats how u spit fire// I'll fite 'Fiya' wit fire, merk this name bighter// You may spit fire, but i'm a fuckin fire fighta// Wack noobs on R.V., ya you are all the same, another rook who just spits lame// I'll pour gasoline down your througt ignite it wit a lighter so you can mimic yo name// |
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Bit his name off Lady Fiya, you disgrace a good name// Nottin mo then a 'bitch', i'll leave you out in the rain// Its just a statement...really...what signifigance does it have saying your gonna leave them out in the rain?... Imitate the guy in headgames sig, i'll strangle you wit a piano wire// Didnt know wack was 'hot' these days, guess thats how u spit fire// Decent...ur getting the concept...just needs a better delivery...so work on that... I'll fite 'Fiya' wit fire, merk this name bighter// You may spit fire, but i'm a fuckin fire fighta// looool NOOOOOO... Wack noobs on R.V., ya you are all the same, another rook who just spits lame// I'll pour gasoline down your througt ignite it wit a lighter so you can mimic yo name// Very, very, very stretched...its really a boring punch...=\ |
hmm that shits hard ya ill need to do it in time im so actice it will be done soon:) anyone wanna check out my openmic and give feedback on it :) and then tell me what needs fixing:)? speicialy L.I
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Bit his name off Lady Fiya, you disgrace a good name//
Nottin mo then a 'bitch', i'll leave you out in the rain// Its just a statement...really...what signifigance does it have saying your gonna leave them out in the rain?... Cuz a bitch is a female dog, they get left in the rain, rain puts out fire I think thats what he meant |
'I'll fite 'Fiya' wit fire, merk this name bighter//
You may spit fire, but i'm a fuckin fire fighta//' rofl...duke is dope. |
k heres a song with a punchline in it a punchline basically im gonna make one with eyr name its only simple to do it but it dont meen anything jsut for a example here it is:
this crazy ass bitch diabolic tryin to teach me a little sumin, sumin... but all as he needs to do is shut up and stop his frontin/ ^^^thats weak but is it a punchline? i can do better k heres some wordplay: i can take words, put them into linez and create a brand new picture... you will lose i gurantee it cuz i already made you run cuz im more sticter/ ^^^that wordplay? i kno its weak but w/e is it? |
^^^that was from the diabolic thingy hes tryin to elavate me but sense yer better i wanna she what i get for this???
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this crazy ass bitch diabolic tryin to teach me a little sumin, sumin... but all as he needs to do is shut up and stop his frontin/ Telling them shut up doesnt deliver a punch...say sumtin witty.. i can take words, put them into linez and create a brand new picture... you will lose i gurantee it cuz i already made you run cuz im more sticter/ No...i dont see the wordplay...u attepmted a meta...a weak one...keep practicing and read the vets battles and try to imitate their syles... |
^alright thanks and ya i get the punches now and im starting to leanr wordplay triple N is teaching me in my crew hes good with punches but i wanna learn wordplay but i will soon ya ill take eyr advice and read other vets battles:) but here ill try another punchline:
relizing that ruff tuff thug is hella weak with everything he says and dos... taken him and throwing him into the back of a garbadge truck would be done with ease/ ^^^^^^dos that work for a punch and i kno it dosent rhyme but dos it work for a punchline? i can make it rhyme but i dont realy got to much time:) |
No..its just saying ur gonna do sumtin...
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I want Empire to help me elavate aight L.I :thumbup:
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^L.I is better then empire but L.I sucks at audio empires only better then him at audio
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Lol yup..
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Check out my latest battle......... ummm help me elevate it, and vote to :thumbup: |
I will later...
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god damnit sticky it
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^word mental... sticky this... ah he prolly will when he comes on next year -_-
anyone wants to know/learn about multis im ya man :thumbup: |
Yes, teach me multies and assonance.
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joke?^
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I could prolly use some work on multies.. But what is there to teach..?
If you can think of anything, give us some tips, but I think its mainly just practice. |
l this is my thing when i was with triple he wont reply its been 2 days almost so here ima put it in this one with L.I k hers punches and wordplay i hope:D
k ima try a punch again k heres a try: triple N, is "fucked in the brain" for thinkin he good for his age/ but naw im young and im more like a "mad dog in its maddest forum", now im engage/ ^^^sry about sayin yer name as again i think yer dope but it was more easyer w/e dos it work or do i need bigger words? like (protection, connection) cuz if i do heres another: i will fuck triple cuz i inproved over this shit he taught me, i hope he better not have had a celeberation/ if he did then hes wack, like a "faggot on the phone with his man", thats sick but its all in your imagination/ holla quick |
i need to work on bein more consistant
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anyone??? i need this bad:D
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