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Voted For: surgical

this was a hard choice they both were really good they both had good meatophors punches flow and everything "I stand tall like a tree but I flow like mapel
While im spitten you sayin is heaven missing an angel"
thats the line that made my vote

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Voted For: oreo

ok oreo i liked everything except the first bar just didnt stand up with the rest of it, but the others were great awsome creativity likin the dougi line goes good with surgical.
surg cam aight but some lines i wasnt feelin at all like:
"I dipped you in milk and laid u out on the table"
thats gay and so is the last bar just really lame, no offense but its true the last line and the first are always the most important.

Voted For: surgical

I think surgical linez were vicous. both had good lines overall. Oreo he had you wit some of them personals soon. Dis was a very close battle. Props to both of you did your thing. Punches were a tie. Personals...surgical. Flow both. and structure surgical...no hate ~1~

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watever clown, on real life im scared of clowns but on the net whose big now
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Voted For: oreo

my vote goes to oroe, i liked oreos verse better, i thought it had better flow and some nice punches, yo surgical, your flows nice but you punches need working, also oreo, nice structure, peace out!

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ps.....return the favour k.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Voted For: surgical

Yo nice battle overall for both of yall. You did ur thing. I give my vote to surgical becaus he had more and better harder hittin punches. The last line was good. (DvDs lol) Flow goes to surgical. IF oreo had a few more lines he would have had a waqy better chance. Personals oon bopth ends were hot. Structer....tie. Personal i gotta giv it to surgical. Nice battle to you both.

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Voted For: oreo

i voted for oreo because surgical had too many bars..the rulezs say only 8 bars, but he has way too many..plus oreos flow had better punchlines....surgicals needed to put more thought in to his rhymes

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oops.....my bad about wut i said about bars... i accidentally got em confused wit bars

oops.....my bad about wut i said about bars... i accidentally got em confused wit lines

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Voted For: surgical

this was too easy. surgical took this one hands down.no hate people just an honest vote. keep elevating oreo. return tha favor........
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some one please d/r that def non explained vote..like whut.juss tellin the truth
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oreo some shit. his verse was all fucked up. it barely rhymed and there was no punchlines. surgical had better flow, structure, metas and punches.he also had a better opening and closing line. No Hate.

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surgical took this one. better flow and structure. i think he came a lot harder than oreo. oreo had some punches but they did not hit as hard as surgicals did. no hate.

Voted For: oreo

aight though oreo's verse was shorter i got to vote on his
he had some creativity goin on...original ye..
openin verse-tied
personals-surgical
punchlines-oreo
structure- oreo
metas-hmm....
overall verse-oreo

it was a close battle though i gotta give it to oreo
nice battle both

no hate or notin on this vote plain honest truth

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just give up oreo. you and your rhymes some shit. i could fry your ass.

upppin and fuc you releoaded you couldnt even beat me you homo

Voted For: oreo

oreo played wit surgicals name the whole time
stayed consistent and hit harder

surgical you shouldve played wit that whole
oreo concept a lil mo

oreo got this

its all love

look for me in upcomin battles

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Voted For: oreo

surgical had a better opener.. oreo i liked how u gradually came harder HOWEVER, the beginning should not be a weak spot, ya feel me.. your personals were kinda funny too, the last bar was kinda funny with the e.r. thing.. u had better vocab... i question if either of u seen one another's verses cuz i seen the table and able thing.. maybe it's a coincidence.. but anywayz, u had a decent structure and content to take surgical.. this was a close battle but oreo took this..

so that's my vote.. good luck with this pz..