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Artik Phrost 10-19-04 08:50 AM

i lyked this...you a lil violent tho...but that shyt was nyce...some of it was a lil choppy, but overall this was a nyce drop....keep it comming. let em know tha bizness

-lets battle sumtime....

KiTTie 10-20-04 07:39 AM

ya, vote in the battle in my sig (i only need 1 more vote) and aight

LaMafia 10-24-04 04:06 PM

pretty good....

keep it up, girl :)

do ya thang.

lookin 4ward 2 tha rest

streetryda 11-06-04 04:19 PM

dang this was good you definately elevated since our last encounter..im glad to have seen you get better......i knew you had potential and this just showed it off...okay yeah so what if it was basic not every damn rapper uses insane vocab and worplay and shit in every damn song they do......moreless they spit pretty basic stuff its just it flows good so it makes it tight....i thought this was really good lots of emotion and you expressed your feelings..idk if this really happened or not but i got the message....keep it up ma!!!.......ohh and hope to see that pic sometime soon too.....
peace~1

KiTTie 11-07-04 01:42 PM

ya, thanx for all the love, no... it didnt really happen, but i wouldnt b suprised if it did.... im elevatin as we speak... im battlin ThugLife... ima win, he sux anyways. he a racist bitch, but hey, i have been cheated on, so thats who im directin it towards. he axed my friend when i was sick. she told me, i broke up wit him... dont matter that bad, he wasnt nuttin 2 brag about.

im supposed 2 git a comp by christmas (hopfully) wit a scanner. ill take sum nice lookin pics and post em up. i aint the HOTEST thing in the world, but hot enough 2 git wit 2 guys in 1 nite :)

KiTTie 11-07-04 02:09 PM

yo, uppin on this site... i want sum mo feedback plz!!!

KiTTie 11-07-04 02:32 PM

wuttup wuttup yall??

no luv, uppin 4 critism.....

KiTTie 11-07-04 04:14 PM

cmon PLEASE uppin 4 feedback... NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Macca 11-07-04 04:29 PM

nice drop and why you think i got shit against you. return da favor in my sig home gurl.

KiTTie 11-07-04 04:29 PM

thank ya..... never mind the hate shit...
it was a while back


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