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Voted For: Young Philly
This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to .......... I really like the flow to both verses there was a nice touch to GKILLAZ flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, YOUNG PHILLY had some GREAT line too i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick nice battle -Please return the favor on my battle I know its a lil weak but its ok Please return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=163680 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: GKillaz
Philly: Me back to the streets is not an odd relation altercation// Plus i wreck it,Shit gets hecktic once i make an observation// 4/10 Don't care if you white, black, indian or asian// Annilihate G Bitch Killaz, then i'll rock the nation// 4/10 I don't believe the rumors spread,won't listen to the bitchin// Prime objective Destroy Bitch Killaz, that'll end the mission// 6/10 I hope it flatters you,you tried to compair me to a bitch// I boastfully make hits, you mostly just fake shit// 7/10 To tell the honest truth LKD deminished you// You just got ya boys to vote so RB didn't finish you// 5/10 Super lyrical is my Super power Convolution// wit lyrics like yours, you failed the M.C. Institution// 4/10 You battle me and actually expecting to win// Your lyrics speak for themselves and are concidered a sin// 4/10 meh you had alot of played lines with weak punches but i seen a real dope line... GKillaz: This kat right here, to me doesnt compared... Last battle I had him screaming it wasnt fair... 5/10 Beware of the furry I unleash on the microphone... It causes a cyclone.. ruptures your timezone... 7/10 When you was LilKdogg you left my rhyme alone... Now your unknown get away from my throne... 9/10 Got ya runnin from your home movin to Mexico... But even there you couldnt get your text to flow... 6/10 Last battle I won 5 to 1 this times goin be K-O... You want to battle me at my best?.. ok if you say so... 4/10 I break knecks.. your tryna flow wit fake text... Fuckin pussy's tryin to come at me wit latex... 5/10 How much did you pay for them two wins?... Pick up the microphone thats when the boo begins... 5/10 Why the fuck am I wasting time on this guys ass.. He's just a ghost tryna come back from the past... 6/10 have a nice sleep 6ft deep REST IN PIECES... Watch as his win rate rapidly decreases... 6/10 BANG BANG MURDERIN YOU AINT A THANG JUS PIcK UP THA MIC AND WATCH YOUR BRAINS HANG 3/10 meh lots of played line but it worked out.. |
This was feedback posted for GKillaz
i gotta go for Gkillaz becuz his verse is really complicated then young philly. i thought young philly force some stuff, but you know therez room for elevating
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Dam Son This Is A Close Ass Battle Id Vote Again But I Cant
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Voted For: GKillaz
aight damn...you str8 up merked this dude...your flow was sick...you beat him before your real battle verse even started...i like how you warmed your self up...str8 up chillin my nerves...all of your shit flowed well...good punches and disses throughout...structure wasnt bad...you had 2 many bars to pick my favorite...all of them were above average...i give your whole verse a 8.5/10...good shit... and youngphilly...you got ripped mayn...your verse wasnt bad tho...you had good structure, flow, vocab, punches and disses...his was just more...he got you with his 2 page punch...lol...keep doiin ya thang man... VOTE/ GKILLAZ |
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