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Voted For: L.I.

I think that L.I. got this battle because i feel that L.I. came stronger in the following categories...Topic i felt L.I. got it was effective and was on point I. Mind u shoulda been a bit more creative on this occasion rhyming i felt went to L.I. good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to L.I. and flow and structure i'll give to L.I..

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ok... being that i'm not in L.I.'s crew any more (respect yo) I can now drop a vote and get shyt moving on this much slept on battle... peoples is checking it but all them disqualified votes are ridiculous

the breakdown:

LI: ok... he came with a very familiar approach that everyone could relate to... the thing that held me though was the way he used his words to make that imagery stand out... his wording showed a lot of emotion... use of multies weren't necessary for this piece but it did him justice... pretty strong drop throughout the entire joint... nice vocab... by that i don't mean he used big words but his style didn't have that elementary feel that i usually see in a typical RV drop... i hate voting on structure so i won't do it... i don't think it matters as long as the flow of the words come out the way they are supposed to when ya read it... and his definitely had a decent flow when i read it out loud... real easy to follow and understand... overall i give LI a 8.8/10

I.Mind:

nice... nice... nice...

ok , i felt the angle that you came from... talking about nature and all
a lot of people woulda just stuck to the obvious reference for the topic but you came from left field and caught ya readers off guard... good shyt... it worked to your advantage... your flow was also very good when read aloud... you guys were about a tie in that category...too hard of a decision to make by reading it and just as hard when read aloud... i felt ya imagery and ya rhyme within a rhyme style for this piece... very consistant throughout... the only thing that i didn't like was your ending... it just seemed too obvious what ya last line would be... i know that it was the topic but the topic doesn't always have to be word for word in ya drop... it makes it seem a little cheesy when ya think about it... especially with all that great content you had in there before it.... you evened that out by opting to choose nature as ya focus instead of the whole relationship thing so i didn't deduct points because of it.

this was prolly the closest battle i've ever had to vote on but omma give I.Mind an 8.9/10 and the "W"... again... good shyt from both and keep doing it the way ya doing it... werd

i can't poll cuz i dropped feedback when i was down with LI... a mod is gonna hafta fix that vote for ya I.Mind

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haha, its cool man, thanx..much appreciate it, uppin.. n if u think its good.. freaken vote for best topical emcee of the month lol

werd...omma drop that topical vote for ya... but i still can't vote on this cuz now i'm in YOUR crew...lmao...damn

This was feedback posted for I. Mind
 

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Voted For: L.I.

ok ummmm
li u had nice imagery
and the emotion was wonderful and heart felt
i liked the complexity in this piee....
and the ending was remarkably dope

i mind u had the better complexity
but the emotion lacked just a little
and the imagery however was quite nice i must say
u had a great opener and start
but feel off towards the ending


overall im sorry but L.I one this do to overall better imagery,emotion,and ending


props to both


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Voted For: L.I.

aiight ...

L.I:

your piece was very good... the wordplay was good, imagery was decent, definately could have been better... flow was on point, as was the vocabulary.. you used a different style with this topical , your vocabulary is extensive, before you used to throw in a couple good words now your whole verse is full of them... i think it could have been better but it was definately a good verse

overall : 8.5/10

i.mind:

you also had a good verse... you took this battle in the aspects of imagery and structure, your flow was less on point than L.I.'s was and your wordplay was definately good but it wasnt good enough in this situation... i like how you moved from one point to another.. from my paradise to ashed... i personally wouldnt do it but you worked with it pretty well... i think your verse could have been better also and you took a less approached method for this topic most people would talk about love like L.I. did but you were more original.

overall : 8/10

vote: L.I.

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Voted For: I. Mind

just checking the polls hoes:thumbup:

but looks like a close battle but im not gunna sway

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Voted For: I. Mind

L.I.: enjoyed reading your piece although your approach to the topic wasn't that original maybe.Didn't use too many dictionary words and you didn't keep it too basic either so vocab was good.Structure was good, maybe you can divide it into several parts which will make it easier to read. Like how the story progressed and it had this emotional yet powerful vibe over it which I enjoyed. Had your flow on lock, not that much imagery because you said everything just the way it was, "in your face" sort of attitude. Good drop for sure!

Dabatos: I absolutely LOVE the way you handled the topic, very orginial so props for that.I like how you divided it into different parts which makes it easier to follow the story and it also looks nicer for the readers. Found a good balance with your vocab, didn't get the feeling that it was too basic, remained easy to read and follow. Loved to read the progression of the story,nice imagery and the emotion was good as well.With the last part, you desribed everything so good that I got the feeling I was standing right there and watching it all fall down.Tight piece!

My vote goes to Dabatos because I was feeling the approach of the topic a bit more buty both did very well!Nice battle! Please return the favor...(link's in my sig)

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Voted For: I. Mind

im gonna have to say I.Mind takes this one.. came harder with the emotion and flow... the whole verse sounded soo nice.. when on the other hand LI's got choppy thru out... i loved all the imagery from both although i think Imind took it in that category as well... and u both told the story soo well.. i actually got into it as i was reading.. iight no hate.. just being honest.. pz..

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Voted For: L.I.

I THINK L.I HAD A MUCH BETER ALL AROUND VERSE THATS WHY HE GETS MY VOTE

Voted For: I. Mind

was feelin dabatos on this one... both came with hella wise structure. loved the flow...

LI: killed em with perspective, you had
the whole verse mapped and on lock. i
enjoyed this, one ive been wanting to
read for a while now, you kept ya head up
and completed a decent topical. nice shit.

D: loved the overrall production, had me
from the start, the opener was like a thesis
statment, grabbed my attention... you came
dope, wrote exactly what needed to be wrote.
killed it with imagery and passion, loved the
contraversy of the dream article. nice piece as
well, im going with D on this one...

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do not returnt the favor, thats not why i vote.

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Voted For: I. Mind

Dabato- i thought you had a very nice , organized, drop, your word play was very nice and i thought that you dropped something that displayed alot of honesty and emotion... which is essential in a topical battle i think... your rhyme scheme was on target and i thought that you really took the topic and ran with it. over all you had good wordplay and vocab.. and very nice imagery

Li your verse sorta threw me off with its struct but otherwise i thought that it wasnt as well thought out as dabatos .. you had alot of good vocab none the less.. but it wasnt put in a easy flowing attitude .. i thought dabatos flowed.. while yours just seemed a little forced at times..but over all you did have a nice drop... work on your struct thats all i gotta say otherwise dabato takes this one for having more emotion and better wordplay ....


Vote.//Dabatos

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