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Good Shit Hommie Vocabulary And Structure All Good Fam
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weerd thats my godson right there dope piece good vocab and meta's i was feeling this should have made it longer though good emotion and depth hot piece 8.5/10 keep em coming
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weerd thanks flow apreciate tha luv.........
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yo i dont get it???
why ya on this GUY NUTS FOR??? this verse was ok noting more.... flow was preety good * at times * vocab was decent * it sorda fucked up ya lines now N then but not bad * no punches * which u need* u was more focus on flowing with vocab which is aight when u use MULTIS to help make the read fire u know what im saying.... all around this was average besides ya vocab... 7.0 outta 10 keep elevating... * P.S to ALL HOP OF HES NUTS DANM I'VE READ WAY BETTER AND YA AINT REPLY TO THERE SO WTF?? * i'll even drop a link in here if ya want me to, from my own teamate who had a open mic diss to D.O.P.E.M.A.N he killed that verse flow, punches, creativeness, vocab ALL AROUND TIGHT... this open mic diss had noting close to it yet that thought it was one of the BEST DROP IN A MIN WTF IS THAT??? let him prove him-self befor ya hop on the ban-wagon.... |
this wasnt a diss....an not to be cocky or nothin but ive seen your shit your to basic no vocab anutha lame ass herb...fucka
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im a nobody * diss to jpoll*
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=158902 ^^ that had more heat N better all around... da price is right http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=159378 by ex-ile was way better then u'r verse N everything..... that verse u got on here is average... N if u feel different BATTLE ME... fucking herbs.... |
this wasnt a diss you retard it was a open mic........herb
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and the first was a open mic diss...... U DICK...
the other was a OPEN-MIC like u'rs....... U DICK... |
you just hatin cause we beef.....fuckin newb.....
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no hate u just cant take the truth...
u letting these dick ryders GAS U UP..... |
stay tha fuck outta this thread.....this is why you will always stay a herb.....dude cant even see real talent wit ya no vocab intelligent gun playin linez fuck you.......
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blah blah blah hes a herb he likes gun blah blah blah blah........
nigga right now u sound like my little SISTER U FUCKING HERB.... hhahahahahahaha......... |
yea ok thats why i'm respected an you aint?....thought so fuckin bitch uppin.........
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yo dat was hott INTROSPECT i like dat shit
i give it 10/10 u had hella wordplay.return da fav.will ya? |
weerd absolute.......................
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uppin..........................
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this was pretty tight... i liked it, short but good. very deep and to the point, one of the best open mics ive seen in a while (especialy for its length)
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lmao at intensify effect... nigga get a life... you are such a fuckin HERB IE you PUSSY! lmao what a loser
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weerd if you feel that way go vote for it best open mic september..............
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This was pretty hot man, the vocab was hott, the structure was okay, the flow was okay.. but just was too complex for me lol.. (Sorry, I aint good wit words :))8/10 |
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^^lmao...............:) |
uppin this shit............
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uppin.................
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sniifff*...hmm*smells vodka*..lol...intro wheres mine..?
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*snatches bottle back lil kid's cant drink... :nono: |
nice piece dawg, plenty of vocab, multis, flow was on point but i'd expect that from you, this was nice just too damn short...lol
welcome bac *cough* join M.A.B *cough* |
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im older then you kiddo :spit: *takes bottle back* *allllllllllllllllllllllllllllll gooonnnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeee* |
shit, A.I.'s doing it big, fa realz.... keep it up, intro loosen up on the vocab, too much is not needed, it shoulda been longer tho.. but sum nice lyrical content.. glad u fam.. :thumbup:
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lmao fiya ya know am vocab master its that serious......
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uppin this...:)
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LMAO check tha views on this........
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uppin...........
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Damn..You killed me with that latin kitten line..
made me go "OOOO" which hardly ever do.. I won't give a rating..cuz you don't give ratings..;) fuck it "9.9/10" |
lmao weerd apreciate the luv.......
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lmao am bringin back this beastly open mic....
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yo nice shit dog, man dat was hot, chek sum of ma battles, u tink i cud get up in A.I ?
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i ecko tha pain from tha sting like hollow wasp's...
damage an carnage surpass my lyrics like hitlers houlacosts... -nice wordplay and some vocab going there explicit lyric stickers submerge's tha art that is purposley hidden... personals are twisted like aim convo's featuring latin kitten... - werd latin kitten was tha shit with dem personals. good part right here kids parish in peices cause they lacked self intelligence... lyrics today disgustin like eatin feices check tha verse tha punches are irelevent - true thats da truth u speaking fam........nice part here let me retract your thoughts an appear unknowingly like cancerous spots... feed your brain learn the anadamoy of decompesition cause bodies rot.. -nice mayne good vocab and flow serve large portions of vocab through bar by bar injections... your comebacks recieve numerous rejections..missin rhymes like c sections.. -oaiiiiiiiiiight good closa nice flow good wordplay on this part chea OVERALL= THIS AN GOOD DROP HERE NICE WORDPLAYS AND VOCAB.........KEEP DROPPIN FAM DIS WAS AN DOPE PIECE HERE IN AN SMALL PACKAGE.........9/10 |
weerd apreciate the feedback.......
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