Voted For: Epic

Epic: Decent verse. No personals though, so you need to work on those. Avoid masturbation punches, rather played. Try more multis, and better word play. Work on flow as well.

Paradox: Pretty good punches, but only 2 good personals. Work on you wordplay, and your multis.

v/Epic

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Voted For: Paradox

Paradox
decent punches, some of them landed...
your structure was in palce and not stretched
the flow was pretty good, and the vocab was
nice also..u also had some good persona's too
overall you had a decent drop though..6/10

Epic
decent drop from you, the punches werent really
on point though but they were aight, the vocab'
was decent and the flow + structure was good
but overall your punches werent really connecting
though 5/10

no hate

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Voted For: Paradox

epic: you tried way too hard on your wordplay and ya punches suffered...the b-rad wordplay was HORRIBLE BEYOND BELIEF, i thought i was doin a fuckin word puzzle tryin to find out what you were sayin, fuck wordplay just focus on punches then slowly word w/p into your verse, and your punches just plain werent hard, like your were kinda tryin to diss him but not make him look foolish

Paradox: brail shit is old but at least your wordplay tied into a punch and worked...nice flow throughout ya verse, and please stop using "lyric blah" or "verbal blah", it just seems so herbish and was used in like 98...closer was nice and yours actually had a punch that connected

this battle wasnt even close, paradox's punches punched more, epic through like little 5 year old temper tantrum slaps



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Voted For: Epic

v/epic.....good battle but epic came wit stronger punchs an they were more creative i liked the b-rad line he had better vocab an was consistent wit the diss's.......paradox...u had a good opener but ur whole verse wasn't consistent in diss's like epic.....good battle..no hate
punchs=epic
vocab=epic
structure=tie
opener=para
closer=epic
overall=epic
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