This was feedback posted for EastCoast
 

checkin polls............................................

This was feedback posted for EastCoast
 

i like the last part the most good verse and made it simple

y is ya'll just posting feedback if ya think i won then vote.......damn!

uppin///

Voted For: EastCoast

east coast got this easily jpoll you self gloriefied to much and east had a good flow to his rap my favorite line is

your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/

i dont want my vote dqued so here is more feedback of why eastcoast won.

he had a better closer jdot used

...........as you and Marilyn Monroe having an all night fling

thats like sayin he gets pussy you dont wana glorify your opponent you wana diss him plus i wasn't feelin the ...................'s in your structure

Voted For: EastCoast

ehh this battle was not hot at all, but im goin with east coast bcuz of vocabulary n better punches. Although neither verse had any hard hittin ones. work on creativity alot. Jpoll didnt come very hard and he had no really good punches or multies this time
holla back at me
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yo...just checking the polls......................

Voted For: JPoll

Another hurb child, kids claiming to be a whole coast...
Too bad I'm like Rocky, punching his frozen raw roast...
decent opener
And its true and it's on, even with a quick key,
You can't think you'll win...
......................cause not even your family believes
decent
You'll get owned, if you go toe to toe with the champ...
I mean fuck as his desktop he's ink...
.....................ready to be hit with the NOBODY stamp...
okay…
You got cramps yet, cause your meager streak is done...
This kids as stupid as nelly claiming to be number one..
meh…no
No I'm the king, I've had belts and I'll show you my ring..
You with my win is as unlikely,
...........as you and Marilyn Monroe having an all night fling
‘okay’ closer


Egotistically you can't beat me, cuz I never miss aim/
Statistically the king of this game, and I'm here to reclaim/
okay…
The ballistical championship, leaving Jpoll with no votes/
And a sedistical slit throat, using a verse that he already wrote/
okay…
Your not rhythmical, you can't win, I'm on a higher level/
It's mystical, your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/
no…
Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/
Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/
pretty decent…
That's what J says, yet he keeps a spare bottle beside the bed/
Only a fag jacksoff with thoughts of a man inside his head/
um…sorry but no

JPoll took this 1…
Harder punches…
Nice vocab…
And ‘okay’ structure…

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Voted For: JPoll

ok here it goes
Punches Jpoll by a mile
personals i say tie not bad by both
opener tie both were ok but not the best
closer jpol was great and funny as hell

so vote goes to Jpoll

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Voted For: JPoll

Haha this was no contest obviously...JPoll came way ahrder wit the personals and the punches. Flow was good too...East Coast, your verse wasn't terrible, but it wasn't great either...work on your structure, your flow, and get your punches more creative. No hate, just elevate.

Return the favor honestly please.

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