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OrEo da cookie 11-15-04 01:53 PM

uppin.....................damn yall is sleeping on this rematch

4fil 11-15-04 09:53 PM

uppin for somev votes!

~Luciano~ 11-16-04 02:10 AM

Voted For: oreo


His teaching methods are wack, cause oreo usually gets chewed
Must admit he sets good examples… showing kids how to loose
3/10
“the battle heats up” but he still stands still, frozen like an orphan
I’ll smash him on an “ice berg” till his head swells to “titanic” proportion
5/10
Eminem disses this guy too, so now he’s in his depressed stage
Quote from shady “I’ve been “chewed up” and “spit out” and booed off stage (1)
3/10/...did not fit
His predictions are commonly incorrect, like the weather predicting the rain
He’s either crazy or suicidal….like an “afghani” in an aeroplane
2/10...Um no

ya drop was stretched
punches were weak
wordplay was good
personals werent there
kinda like u was just freestyling

your the violent type that my lyrics are gonna tame,
so battling me gets you all choked up like suge did game,
5/10
whack ass couldn even stand up to me by poppin a boner,
straight from the test tubes? is Empire your sperm donor?
7/10..lol
your alright but i was planning on tellin ya later,
you couldnt up your game if you put your ps2 on a elevator,
3/10 kinda played
i could {cum} harder but this is text not sex im to humble
if your lyrics were a ball my punches would make you fumble
5/10
is the $5 you got on hand is that all your verses cost
your the phykicks right? couldnt you predit your lost?
5/10
ya punches hit harder
wordplay was ok
ya structure was a lil stretched
ya similies were nice
more personals than your opponent

overall oreo had the better drop for similies and punches that were a slight harder than Phyzicks

OrEo da cookie 11-16-04 12:28 PM

thanks troop upppin............................................ ...........

FlowIntelligent. 11-16-04 12:42 PM

Voted For: oreo

well i think oreo took this one fairly easy... phyzicks was way too basic for me everything was kinda weak and he made his explanation for one bar a 4 piece segment like he had to break shit down to us.... sorry didnt need the explanation... oreo u had some basic bars also but u had one decent punch.. structure was better and your meta's were fairly good...

decent battle

4fil 11-16-04 02:43 PM

^^^herbs uppin!

OrEo da cookie 11-16-04 10:55 PM

uppin............................................. ..................................

4fil 11-18-04 03:16 AM

uppin for some votes.....

OrEo da cookie 11-18-04 01:12 PM

upppin............................................ .......................

OrEo da cookie 11-18-04 09:11 PM

if we dont get votes soon how you wanna do this, wait tll 4 or something if no one votes for you? no offence but no one is voting and i got all the votes

4fil 11-19-04 12:04 AM

^^^ yeah its all good.... your gonna win so if you want pm strobe.. make sure you quote this message so he has proof..... then tell him to close it k

Know-Gimix 11-19-04 12:19 AM

Voted For: Phyzicks

word, i thought both verses were pretty good, i was surprised cuz usually first battle I check is always trash, but yall made me happy... iight to vote....
basically I thought Kon-vex had the punches swingin in full effect, I liked the em line, the titanic line, the em line all good.... oreo started off real hard, the suge line was pretty funny, also felt the ps2 elevator punch, but I felt like the empire line fucked flow up and the closer was kinda weak so Im givin the vote to Kon-Vex.... good luck fellas, please return with honesty... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1741883

OrEo da cookie 11-20-04 12:03 AM

damn well we gonna keep this giong then you know to see wats real

4fil 11-20-04 03:08 AM

uppin for some votes!

OrEo da cookie 11-20-04 04:41 PM

upppin............................................ ..................

OrEo da cookie 11-21-04 04:12 AM

uupin............................................. .................................................. .....

Sik Wit It 11-21-04 03:28 PM

Voted For: oreo

His teaching methods are wack, cause oreo usually gets chewed
Must admit he sets good examples… showing kids how to loose
…chewed & loose don’t rhyme
“the battle heats up” but he still stands still, frozen like an orphan
I’ll smash him on an “ice berg” till his head swells to “titanic” proportion
…decent
Eminem disses this guy too, so now he’s in his depressed stage
Quote from shady “I’ve been “chewed up” and “spit out” and booed off stage (1)
…played practically here…but decent punch
His predictions are commonly incorrect, like the weather predicting the rain
He’s either crazy or suicidal….like an “afghani” in an aeroplane
…work on yo vocab...decent here


your the violent type that my lyrics are gonna tame,
so battling me gets you all choked up like suge did game,
…decent
whack ass couldn even stand up to me by poppin a boner,
straight from the test tubes? is Empire your sperm donor?
…lol nice 1..
your alright but i was planning on tellin ya later,
you couldnt up your game if you put your ps2 on a elevator,
…decent
i could {cum} harder but this is text not sex im to humble
if your lyrics were a ball my punches would make you fumble
…decent
is the $5 you got on hand is that all your verses cost
your the phykicks right? couldnt you predit your lost?
…decent

Oreo took this one..
Punches were harder..everything rhymed
And tha flow was pretty decent here…
Kon-Vex…ur’s was alright but
That chewed & loose line = didn’t rhyme
Well to me it didn’t tho..

4fil 11-21-04 11:57 PM

^^^^^..... herb.... uppin for some votes!

4fil 11-22-04 03:43 AM

uppin for some votes!

OrEo da cookie 11-22-04 03:35 PM

upppin. looks like i gave you your only lost bro nice rematch

4fil 11-22-04 06:07 PM

uppin for some votes!

4fil 11-22-04 10:53 PM

uppin for some votes!

Sik Wit It 11-23-04 02:56 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by 4fil
^^^^^..... herb.... uppin for some votes!


^^newb

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~Lady Fiya~ 11-23-04 03:53 PM

Voted For: oreo

your the violent type that my lyrics are gonna tame,
so battling me gets you all choked up like suge did game,
^omg rofl, very funny.. LMAO
second bar i wasn't feeling at all.. it was str8 tho.
you couldnt up your game if you put your ps2 on a elevator,
i could {cum} harder but this is text not sex im to humble
^the ps2 was funny, but the "cum line" is over with, but not too bad.. the last bar took it in my opinion, so oreo.. get the vote, no hate to either..
hit up my battle in my sig..
good luck with this..
pz..


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