uppin this people

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good battle: i got a little confused with you style philosopher

Style: two
flow: two
punches: phil
personals: phil
vocab: philo
win : phil

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uppin this for ya'll

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I think 2X4 got this, both were kind of whack though...Phil, man, keep trying, i see some potential... But you need to focus on punches at least as much as personals... Two By Four... Better Meta's... Pce...

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stfu..... :) n e ways uppin for one more vote damn..... and what metaphors?

Uppin Once More, Damn X Stop Dq'ng My Votes

sorry man, Drunk bad mood, n e ways uppin

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this battle was bad no offense..

both of ya punche's we're basiclly the same..

parallel: your sturcute was very good, flow was iight but only alittle stretched... your vocab was pretty good, and nyce personal.

philosopher: you know ur my boy from L.R.I. (Low Ryders Inc.) but man, i thought i helped you get better, it's been like 3-4 months since that crew went away.. but neways, you really need to work on ur structure, your punch was iight, but i'd same jst about the same as parrallel, and your flow was off man.. but neways

vote: par

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Parallel - good spit man, it flowed well and your punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - How can you get “respect” saying you’re the only philosopher…
Why you study males ejaculate, how did this “interference” occur…

Worst Line - Word got up you fluked out getting into the “council” you dog fucker…
When you stepped to the “press box” you got the mad chills, burr…

~philosopher~ good spit man, you had good punches to but flow was off.

Best Line - Xclusive with girls reminds me of handicaps playing in the N.B.A., he can't 'score' (6)
Site is his life, cuz last time X was out with freinds...
... He was in a computer store!

Worst Line - Like 'gay men' addicted to 'druggs' this kid likes 'crack' (3)
And the "..." after your name leads to: "At being wack"

OVERALL - Close battle here but I gotta vote for Parallel. He had the better flow and his punches were hard. ~philosopher~ you dont need to explain line for line word for word.. lol, anyways.. your shit was good but the flow was horible. I guess that whats happens when you dont try.

Vote - Parallel

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Uppin Damn It!.

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damn it should be 3-1, cuz of fuckin d/r, and prallel stop, this d/r votes are pissing me off, and don't fucking deny you aint gettin d/r this battle

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I'm either dumb, stupid, or tired...maybe all 3...cuz i don't get the wordplay, [unchlines, or anything else...so Im not gonna vote


offer explanations for us "average" people next time

^^ he didn't have wordplay he just put (" ") over random words

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sup...good battle but i just thaught that ~philosopher~'s verse was to much exagerated and then he needed to explain it...thats not a real text...but you had nice vocab tere....and now for Parallel...yuour structure is perfect as well but try something new man...each time i see a battle from you its always something like '' '' '' '' '' '' ....well atleas your winning some battles so ill shut up lol...good battle

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philospher definately won this battle with better personals, a longer verse, better punches and multies, and definately a better structure, overall good battle though...
Best Line:
Like 'virgin asians' in 'porn' flicks, this bitch is gonna get 'torn' (1)
Lmao at the quote, only time X seen pussy...
... Is when he was born! (2)

Plz return the favor @ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=166119

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uppin this for y'all......................................

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parralel is in my crew.... cant vote... BUT!!! jezz philosoper..... stop putting goddanm explanations of your punches..... that basically saying... the reader is dumb. he wont understand my shit..... dude if i was voting on this battle... you wwould loose becasue of that

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wow....both y'all dropped wack

Para....the opener was the closes line in the whole battle if being a decent personal,...you attempted to make creative metas but you didn't have the punches to make them strong......your flow was cool tho...an strucutre was good....and surprisely good vocab......the verse was eh but had a few good points

philo....I figured u woulda topped his verse....but you spit some seriously played lines....open..porn flicks joint was played, unoriginal & weak.....gay lines are played. at being wack?...NO!!! ya whole verse wa slike dat...u coulda won if your concepts weren't so played...cuz ya punch develop wasn't all bad but it was based on bad concepts making them bad.....ya flow wasn't great nor was ya structure..so u lost this 1

Flow: Phil
Structure: Phil
Metas: Phil
Punches: Neither
Personals: Neither
Vocab: Phil

I know these are weak categories to judge on but there wasn't much else to base the votes on........1

Vote: Phil

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Voted For: ~philosopher~

one sided

punches- philo had harder hittin, and made more sense
personals- philo, much harder hittin, and more of em
metas- tie
multis- neither
word play- philo, wittier word play overall
humor- philo, i wuz laughin
flow- philo, overall it flowed easier
structure- parallel cuz it looked better

Philo good drop. nice personals and punches. word play wuz decent, work on structure. thats all i can say.

X/Para, work on punches, and better personals and wordplay. overall elevation is the key.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter.:thumbup:

v/ ~philosopher~

px

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my honest vote would have to go to philo...

PHILO...
Like 'virgin asians' in 'porn' flicks, this bitch is gonna get 'torn' (1)
Lmao at the quote, only time X seen pussy...
... Is when he was born! (2)

^^^ok. nothing spectacular...but you made your point.

Like 'gay men' addicted to 'druggs' this kid likes 'crack' (3)
And the "..." after your name leads to: "At being wack" (4)

^^^not really feeling it...sorry...

This kid threw a fit, cuz I got into classic and he wasn't let in the crew (5)
And it's sad, when to own X, posting his picture is all you have to do!

^^^okay, but i think you could have fine tuned the words a little better to make your initial concept hit harder, but im feelin' it.

Xclusive with girls reminds me of handicaps playing in the N.B.A., he can't 'score' (6)
Site is his life, cuz last time X was out with freinds...
... He was in a computer store!

^^^i see where you were going...but you fell off a little bit in your closer.

philo...you had a decent drop and show cool potential. honestly, i feel that you need to fine tune your punches and personals a little better. your structure was pretty bad overall, but it should be easy to work on. keep on doin' the damn thing.

PARA...
How can you get “respect” saying you’re the only philosopher…
Why you study males ejaculate, how did this “interference” occur…

^^^sorry...i didnt like this at all. it wasnt too funny in my opinion.

You run around say shit when your “minds” tingling in an ambition…
To bad your even worried of a intelligent smart “brained” musician…

^^^blah, blah, blah...
Word got up you fluked out getting into the “council” you dog fucker…
When you stepped to the “press box” you got the mad chills, burr…

^^^no, im sorry but that didnt hit the spot either.

para...you had nice structure and you tend to use decent vocab at times, but honestly i feel your verse fell flat. there was no heart here. you didnt seem like you were ever trying to win. work on your punches and personals a bit more. they might not have hit the spot as well as planned....but philosopher at least used a few in his verse. you have potential to do something...take advantage of that in the future. on a seperate note...i wish you the best with your new team and any upcoming battles. one.

...the super...crhyme sindicate

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Wow..close battle here..both of you had sum nice
punches..good flows..Parallel took tha structure & vocab..
but overall both of u had nice drops...but I think Parallel took
this one by a hair...punches were a slight harder than phil's
and the structure was in place too...but no hate tho
Phil..u had a ncie drop..like ur punches too..but to me i felt
that they weren't as hard as Para's tho..

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this look i'l a wack ass battle so i'm checking the polls just to see who sucked more

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structure par by far both had pretty stretched lines but ur lines were more even
vocab parralel no doubt phil came basic
flow both were pretty good but phil was better due to his basicness but unfortunately text flow doesnt really matter
creativensee all of phils punches were played parralel was all original for the most part
phil wor on ur vocab structure find some better personals and work on creativeness
par work on personals and wordplay
good battle to both but par got this with better structure vocab and creativeness

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actually i didnt have wordplay but i had a normal punches and you had nothing...honestly...but i ad words that had a reseblince to each other...go ahead i learned from triple...and he voted for me but you were a bitch cuz he got are names fucked around..HOE

The fuck up, if I meet you in real life, I would honestly kill you, seriously, hop off my nuts, and go rock your pink clothes at another party, ya, you really are a thug aren't you? Fucking 8-0 street rec, man this is the internet, faggot, noone on this site likes you, so just die now, and do us all a favor, and don't talk shit, cuz your old acount got banned for cheating, cheating faggot

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leaving feed back since parallel is in my crew, but i think parallel ripped it nice shyt!