Voted For: Bizzy

Good Disses And Multies.. Your Wordplay and punches wernt there... but neither were oreos..

fav lines:
4 even tryin 2 THINK on my level, u get left w/a chunk of brain TISSUE MISSIN/
with a MASSIVE WEAPON, i'm BLASTIN PEASANTS,
in essence, i'm the "future" & u can't get "PAST" MY "PRESENCE"...


oreo your verse came with alot of played or really bad lines.. just not a good verse from you.. get harder hitting punches and personals.. cause you have alot of talent to bring your verses up..



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Voted For: Bizzy

this was a close battle... u both had sum ite verse but i give it ta bizzy coz i felt he came harder. he had decent multies as well which gives him da edge. no hate. if ya want me ta come back n break it down just holla!!

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damn sorry bizzy but votes here need to be more explained but ill let ine slide

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Voted For: Bizzy

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to oreo flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, Bizzy had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


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Voted For: oreo

Oreo gets my vote in this one... He definately had better personals, and more vocab... His structure was a little off but he made up for it with some good rhymes and punches.....
Best Line:
if you were the oreo if this battle it would be easier to eat you
you need some elevtion, go back to hip hop preschool,


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Voted For: Bizzy

Yo i give dis one to Bizzy easy win cuz, because Bizzy's punches hit harder better flow better vocab. Metas were weak and ur structure was iight
Opener:Bissy
Voc.:Bizzy
Structure:oreo
Punches:Bizzy
Metas:Bizzy
Closer:Bizzy lol killed it nice shit

On da real oreo yo shit was wack

return da favor please Honest explained votes only....~1~
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wait how is it that these votes his stucuture and had no meta4s and shit but stiil get the vote

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just wanted to see da polls....nice verse npth....

Voted For: Bizzy

bizzy versus oreo, thats nabisco versus a lame,
you rhymes are whack, you put your whole crew to shame,
^^^dis wuz a way better opening n tha whole thing flowed better..."get left @ a STANDSTILL when i show u the HANDSKILLS,
i drop niggas like ANVILS by the LANDFILLS/"
my vote gotta go 2 bizzy

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Voted For: oreo


Oreo
Alright Some Good Shit In This Verse, You Had Some Decent Personals..Vocabulary Was Good, Some WordPlay But Not Much, Your Structure Was Some What Decent, Some Punches Was Coming Hard But Some Was Falling Off Over All The Verses Complexity Was Decent....8/10

Bizzy
Damn!, Some Good WordPlay In Here, I Was Feeling This It Was Pretty Dope..Punches Wasn't To Hard But They Was Decent...Good Vocabulary In Some Areas Of Your Verse.. And Others Were Basic...Your Structure Wasn't To Decent...Alot Of It Was Off To One Side...Over All 7.7/10

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Voted For: Bizzy

bizzy wins this no doub t good shit bizzy u had good hard punches and dope lines best lines were & that's how i SPARK SOME FEAR,
u try 2 rhyme, but u studder like epileptic AUCTIONEER/
aint none of yo FLOW'S HARD; i'll pull ya HOE CARD,
face it...u just a waste of sperm that shoulda been a BLOWJOB/
stupid; tell me, Y DO U RAP?
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ hahahahah lol good shit good vocab too homie good shit......... yo return the favour aiight in the battle below against me and necro pyronix aight ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,