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Voted For: kon-vex

my vote goes to 4fil

breakdown
sabo-aight ur had a weak verse you only came out with personals they were nice but your structure was......it was just horrible i wasnt feeling your verse that much....you had no vocab at all.....it was pretty basic......your punches were weak cept the vapo rub one...you need to elevate
4/10

4fil-you got this beacuse one you had a better structre.....you had harder punches.....saw a few personals inn there.....you had more creative punches so they ere harder.....you had better vocab.....it flowed better and was just i felt your verse more than sabo....
7/10

best lines
sab-Im dissin you non stop I belong in the hater club
Thinks he’s a con-vicks(kon-vex) cause he jacked a tub of vapor rub*

4fil-He roles with lesser pedigree yet still thinks he’ll be rich
Roling with the dogs, it’s the closest he gets to a bitch
“Can’t teach old dog new tricks” lets just wait and see
Wont need to play dead… once youve finished with me


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i cant vote. but i think 4fill, (konvex, mistic rogue) took this. pz

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Voted For: sabotage

Basically,

two of 4fil's bars didnt even fuckin rhyme. he did't throw punches at all and i've seen it all before. He used concepts that i dispelled as simple as A FUCKING NEWB. but his structure was good although that is not what matters. Sabotage had horrible verse and flow and structure but although he came with played ass shit (defeat?....knee grow please) he had 2 almost creative bars, the pussy and the upping. Bad battle. both needa elevate.

V/Sabotage

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Voted For: sabotage

eh this was kind of weak battle in my opinion but its all good...

sabotage got this from the punches...4fil they didnt really make sense...it looked like you cut off words to make all of the lines match correctly and some of the words were needed to say what you meant...so they didnt make much sense, sabotage punches were good and had 2 personals against him that hit...4fils personals didnt, he said about the council but it didnt hit and didnt effect sabotage...no hate on nobody both did good but sabotage got this for harder punches

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I can't vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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won't let me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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bro sabotage....... why dont you ever up this battle!

Voted For: kon-vex

Sabotage
pretty nice punches...landed
gay structure tho...[dont space them out]
decent flow on that...
vocab was okay...and tha
persona's were decent...
overall drop: 4/10
*didnt come hard enuff*

4fil
nice punches...everything landed
ncie structure....decent flow to it
good vocab..ez to read..and decent
persona's on that too...
overall drop: 6/10
*came harder than Sab*

RTF

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Voted For: kon-vex

4Fill:
Vocabulary And Structure Got This..Punches Was Pretty Hard Too...Personals Was Decent...I Like Uhm All Shit Was Tight WordPlay I Know You Got This Hommie It Was Tight....Over All I Give You A 9/10

Sabotage:
Close Battle Hommie Your Punches Was Hitting Also Dam Good Shit Coz..Personals Was There And Vocabulary Was Decent.....Structure...That's A No Doubt Always Coming With Good Shit... Over All Your Flow Get's A 8.5/10


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just checkin polls....cant vote...4fil in my crew...but i would vote for ...4fil

Voted For: sabotage

This verse took me a while... but I didn’t flee rapverse
Takes thought preparing lines, all about you wackness
He’s flowing electricity, but if he has power I doubt it
He raps so shocking;. he could cause a power outage
He roles with lesser pedigree yet still thinks he’ll be rich
Roling with the dogs, it’s the closest he gets to a bitch
“Can’t teach old dog new tricks” lets just wait and see
Wont need to play dead… once youve finished with me
Most kids got an alter ego but this kids got an ultra ego
“The building blocks of life” his blocks are just plain Lego
Another council member… must be their worst employee
Sabotage your whole operation, at trying to dickride me
Hes to elusive, cause he rhymes wack so hes unnoticed
The council, their laws to be wack, so this is my protest
^^^^^^^^^^^ FLOW WAS GOOD BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT THAT GOOD DIDNT SENSE ANY HARD PUNCHES NOR PERSONALS FAM........LEARN TO USE THAT BUT GOOD FLOW FAM







Im skilled in this game u just a poor rookie
They say you are what you eat..no wonder you devour pussy

Im dissin you non stop I belong in the hater club
Thinks he’s a con-vicks(kon-vex) cause he jacked a tub of vapor rub*

Periodically line after line
Kon’s gonna beat me? Naw, its all in your mind**

Im beating u forever like they sayin that times broke
The only time youre ever up is when youre waiting on votes

I got ho’s cause kid I jus pop and go
Kon’s seen more de-feats than Dr.Scholls

Ur flow is only sprinkling mine stays thundering
What more do I have to do? Youre already under me***
^^^^^^^^^^^^^LIKED THE CLOSA,,,,,,,,STRUTURE IS KINDA FUCKED NOT THAT GOOD.......EH AND DA FLOW WASNT GOOD EITHER BUT DA PUNCHES WERE GOOD AT-LEAST U HAD PERSONALS IN EACH BAR CHA FEEL ME


CONCLUSION= THIS IS AN WACK BATTLE IN MY EYES

SAB U NEED TO ELEVATE ON FLOW AND STRUTURE CAUSE THAT SHIT WAS FUCKED UP........BUT U HAD PUNCHES AND PERSONALS WHICH WAS GOOD PUNCHES WERE OK BUT DA CLOSA WAS DECENT NICE.



4FIL U HAD FLOW WHICH IS GOOD BUT DA PUNCHES I DIDNT SENSE ANY HARD HITTING ONES.U NEED TO ELEVATE ON PUNCHES FAM.........SHIT DIDNT CONNECT........U HAD WORDPLAYS BUT DA PUNCHES KINDA LACKED AND TOO BASIC DIDNT REALLY SEE ANY PERSONALS IN THERE.


I HAVE TO GO WITH SAB CAUSE HE'D REALLY THREW SOME PUNCHES IN THERE AND PERSONALS.......4FIL I DIDNT SENSE ANY PUNCHES THROWN NOR PERSONALS.....U HAD FLOW AND WORDPLAY BUT DA PUNCHES WERENT DECENT TOO BASIC FAM


V-SAB CHEA

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