Wow, that shit was real dope. Incredible flow, great usage of vocab...
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This is really the only thing I need to post here...

dope drop not really much about graduating in it but 2 lines..but hot usage of multi's and good flow..i aint finish someone else's open mic in a while....
the chorus is more like a verse though..i would make it shorter..
like the humor........a bit emineminish for me but...i never read ya shit im impressed..........8.5/10

thanks for the feedback cats... uppin'.

Wow y'all are majorly startin' to sleep on this one.... uppin'.

Hmm...a very nice piece. Flow and multies was dope...it was just plainly amazing. There are not much words to describe it.

thanks for the feedback man...

greatly appreciated.

damm shitz tight blood nice flow an shit you doin this to audio if not you should nice vocab an shit good read

thanks man...

Remember people, the Awardz always need votes each month, and every vote counts.

Please return the favor...

Abandoned

no problem.....

this was hot, yo.....good use of multis and vocab...this really caught my attention from tha jump...and thats rare, cuz most people dont warm up until a few barz in...so mad props on that....keep droppin tha fiyah mayne....

return tha favor, please.....'one wish'....

lol... thanks man...
uppin'...

ok good ass flow and vocab first verse was the best one but whole thing was real good your best no but good here all the same nice visuale i see your still mad about that damn suspension :nono: good drop a 8/10

thanks for the feedback Empire... just read your poetry battles... damn you still got it dawg... welcome back.

Painful Times at Lawson High...


^^^nice chorus...but i got an ear for rhyme...so, i would have worded it "awful times" and "lawson high"...get it?

ne way...i feel like shit...so imma make this quick

see...rhyming is in my genes

damn...there's another one


ne way...


some of the rhyming seemed forced...including your diction...it's as if you were using words just to rhyme...try rhyming like that in complete sentences...

otherwise...this was creative...I like some of your multies...needed more concrete imagery (similies, metas)

vocab was extensive


I arose from the ashes of hate clashes to attend classes and spit acid and hit bastards...
Im a phoenix... so you could call me state capitol... I got the ears of the people... white, black and all...
Three X I'm under rated leavin' whole cities evacuated when I come on tour cuz I'm flat out nasty...


^^^ That caught my eye


Good Job dawg

7.5/10

thanks man... appreciate it...

Yo... upping....

Still busy at the Om vp...nice Playing off the school paper name..i really dislike school..damn nazis and jus..if you can get all these people to vote for you on the Award you would landslide it..
Cart pushing...i am now famous

lmao... I know... mafuckers 9th Degree put the link on page 3... y'all should drop an honest vote on the award.

hot shit.......i think it'll take the best open mic for da month.......................werd!

i give it a

9.999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 99999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999999 95............................

...........................werd!

thanks for the feedback.

This deserves to be open mic of this month and next month! Shit, give him last month as well. Those lyrics were nice, real nice. Well thought out finally, flow, creativness, and lyrics that say somthing. That inspires me ta write more.

Vinch... buddy

I won last month... and the month before that.

weerd...

It inspires you to be as good as me doesn't it? :)

uppin' for more feedback...

ayo nice drop....keep them coming...just dont get writers block...haha....anyways 9.6/10

return the favor by leaving feedback on my first open mic...First Love....pz fam..

weerd... I will do son... thanks for the feedback.

just inspires me to be better than you...... :thumbup:

You'll need alot of inspiration then... lmao...

damn... breathe was so dope shit made me lose my breathe, but this shit put me to death. dope shit nigga. nah layins? weerd... 9.8/10

weerd nigka...

we nigkas for life

thanks for the feedback...

uppin' for more.

im busy i couldnt read slowly but i read most of it and it was HOT dope hook and good vocabulary and Multi's i was feelin this fo real. shit was hot...the concept of this track was crazy aswell. but that hook was long as heyll u culd of did it once and sed (x2) lol but anywayz this track is HOT HOT HOT!!! nice shti dawg keep it up

9.5/10

check my shit jimmy

lol thanks for the feedback man...

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I felt it fo rthe most part....But it seems 2 me that ur trying 2 hard 2 get Artist. Open mic of the month, It seems forced 6.5/10

Uppin

iight man whatever... thanks for the honest feedback...
uppin'.

haha, Look man ur takin it the WRONG way, As for structure its set 2 perfection, Ur concept and shyt Is fine. The only thing that sweated me, was U PMIN' me 2 peep it. That is what made me think Ur "Title Hungry", Based on ur works....8.5/10

reply... nah... I'm not tryin' to get it it's pretty much won... but I like to know what people think all together.

See unlike people like Anxiety & Preminition who want the open mic award so bad they just tell people to vote for them... I take in all the feedback and take y'alls advice and use it on the next open mic to make it better.

That's what I did following breathe when I wrote this I took the feedback from that, and applied it to Graduate.

And that's what I'll do for my next open mic.

But thanks for you expressing your concerns...

LOL, Uppin for this cat,