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Voted For: Infector Mindz

Lmao...Good battle yall...Both verses were good...At first, I was gonna vote for Meniz, but IMs verse kept getting better, and he came harder with punches...Lmao at the "clean they mouth out with soap" line...Shit was nice...Both verses flowed, and had good meta's and a little bit of personals, but IM gets the vote for his punches...Good shit from both of yall...1

iight cool upppin again..l..........for thae first tiem i think

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Voted For: Infector Mindz

gets my vote becuase I think his punches where harder, his flow was better his lyrics where iight, his vocab was good, his imagry was ok, and his multi could use some working but it was harder. So he gets my vote and hey drop a vote on my link and a honest one peace.

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Voted For: Infector Mindz

Ol School


if u battlin me u must have issues, like a subscription for gettin ya ass kicked
u didnt show up last time, maybe u should continue the trend faggot

im gonna "turn u off to beefin" like "converting u to a vegetarian"
till you start "wetting urself" like "automatic filling aquariums"

let me dumb it down for you, cuz u cant comprehend or follow
ur a fucking mistake, i shoulda requested ur mother to swallow

im about to loke, ur text drops usually equipped with doubt and hope
so if any voters say "MENIZ" ima clean thier mouth out with soap

this guy needs help, rappin like hes got the heart of a tiny elf
with his head under the line of his belt he smokes his own cock to be high on himself

ur like "oh no brother" im ice cold so i make this froze ho shudder
im a fighter not a lover so when "it goes down" hes "fuckin scared" like "virgins with no rubber"


Ill.Logic
Whos-Killin-Men?Not Infect...Theres No One Hes Better-Then,
Thats Why Ya Ass Got-Dropped...So The Only Time He Seein VT Is On E-S-P-N,
Droppin-Holes,Inside-Of-Ya-Skull...The Flow Couldnt Get Any Deeper,
Battlin Me,U Crazy...I Got Infect Facin-Death Like Standing Up To The Grim Reaper,
Weak Verses N Punches,Im Sure It Aint Me Infect Is Gonna Kill,
Cuz The Only Time He Drops-Hot-Tracks is When He Slips While Branding Steel,
Killin Infect With Words And He Cant Compete With These Symbolic Presages,
So Watch As I Put An End To IM Like X-ing An Instant Message,

Ol School-7/10
Ill Logic-7.5/10

this was a close battle...good battle also...both had some dope punches...but OS closer is played and that kinda fucked him up...Ill Logic had some nice punches and a steady flow...both had creativity but Ill had better punches...barely

damn c-bo.......two things wrong with ur vote........

1)you said you were feeling me more...then you voted for him
2)WE ARE IN THE SAME CREW....NO CREW VOTES

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Voted For: MeN-Iz

ok battle

punches- Ill, nice punches. Harder hittin and more creative. Ol, not very creative punches, most played, and most weak.
personals- Ill, you got this, mostly for havin em. Aight personals, not that hard hitting, but still aight. Ol, no real personals. Use them.
multis- Ol, ok multis. Not great, not bad. Ill, no multis.
metas- Ill, ok metas. Not the best, but not the worst. Ol, decent metas. Many are played though.
wordplay- Ill, ok wordplay. Some witty, some not. Ol, not a lot of good wordplay. You need to use that.
humor- Ill, had me laughin. Ol, I smiled.
structure- Ol, not many stretched lines and it was easy to read. Ill, too many stretched lines overall.
flow- Ill, ok flow. Last line fell off, but other than that good. Ol, fell off too much. Auquariums, virgin line, etc...

Ill, good verse overall. Try some multis, only thing I can say really.

Ol, work on personals and wordplay. Punches are ok, but personals help win.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/ Ill.Logic

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Oh I forgot, leave an honest vote on my battle vs. final, or at least leave feedback. Thanks.

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Yo the other guy had more punches. You were doing alright, just try and put a few more punches. your flow was alrite. Try and put in some multis.

Voted For: Infector Mindz

64 reply's....4 pages wow....if ya niggaz was 2 vote on battles maybe ppl would of vote on dis shit...but aneway i thought ill had it till infector's verse lol dat shit was hott...

opener-inf
structure-ill
punchlines-inf
wordplay-nun
multis-inf
creativity-inf
personals-ill...da last bar
finisher-umm ill..inf dat line was hott but it was mad stretched..
enjoyed-inf.....i guess maybe cuzz he spit more but i liked his verse betta...ill u had about 2 hott bars datz it ya first bar didn't even ryhme..nuff said

LINKS R IN DA SIG RETURN IT...

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hey I voted so can ya return the fav in my link peace.

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Voted For: MeN-Iz

Wow Realli Ta Me Neitha 1 Of Them Made Sence.......

Openor=Ill He Had A Good Punch And Wordplay
Strukture=Tie Both Wass Easy Ta Read
Punches=Tie,Hard Ta Understand But They Both Wass Hittin
Wordplay=Ill He Had Wordplay Through out Some Bars Not All
Personals=Ill He Had Better Punches,Otha Kid None
Closer=Ill,He Had A Good Diss,And Punch Good Closer
Vokab=Ill,Not Through Tha Whole Verse But He Had Some

Ill Got This Cus His Punches Wass Hittin Hard,Good Personals And Strukture..........Rtf.................

/V Ill-Logic............

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damn......u really are a lil bitch...re-openin this shit and removin all my votes.......hoe

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Voted For: Infector Mindz

headache
good verse kid had some nice punches i was diggin here, your vocabulry was good man, i like your wordplay man one thing you need to work on his structure that about it, your had some decent personals in here i was digging it most hit hard some came weak but over all your wordplay took up for that, and punches was good man

murcinal
cool verse dawg you had some aiight punches i wasn't diggin the personals though but they was creative man for real most creative battle right here i can dig it, your vocabulary wasn't all that mostly the basics man, your structure whoa! work on that man both of you need to work on that fo sho

vote-headache
no hate one vote one win

Voted For: Infector Mindz

Murcina:
the stucture you had made my eyes bleed and the punches were real weak all you really had were dope multis and still that wasnt good enough trying be more creative with punches well i seen a few there was this oen dope line the branding steel line that was dope but the rest was played and weak, pz

Headache
way better stucture nice puncheslines better flow i was just feelin your punches alot more the creativty was there and shit i was just feeling the disses you gave him and the personals you used pretty nice job keep it up, no hate to anyone here pz

RTF in my battle wit Final links in the sig

Voted For: Infector Mindz

Infector Mindz
got this 4sho...
Came sick with the multies an a few decent personals here n there, punches were nice too, overrall besides the way u structure your rhymes, there aint much i can fault, nice verse....9/10


MuRcInAl
l, ya structure was everywhere too
dont seperate bars like that man
gotta be more creative with the rhymes u choose ta use
Overall 6/10



no hate, just be more creative

im got this for the overrall better verse

RTF In ANY of my battles ya see floatin around on front lines or whatever

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Voted For: MeN-Iz

if u battlin me u must have issues, like a subscription for gettin ya ass kicked
u didnt show up last time, maybe u should continue the trend faggot
weak
im gonna "turn u off to beefin" like "converting u to a vegetarian"
till you start "wetting urself" like "automatic filling aquariums"
okay, decent
let me dumb it down for you, cuz u cant comprehend or follow
ur a fucking mistake, i shoulda requested ur mother to swallow
decent
im about to loke, ur text drops usually equipped with doubt and hope
so if any voters say "MENIZ" ima clean thier mouth out with soap
nah, wack punch
this guy needs help, rappin like hes got the heart of a tiny elf
with his head under the line of his belt he smokes his own cock to be high on himself
weak shit here
ur like "oh no brother" im ice cold so i make this froze ho shudder
im a fighter not a lover so when "it goes down" hes "fuckin scared" like "virgins with no rubber"
okay decent


Whos-Killin-Men?Not Infect...Theres No One Hes Better-Then,
Thats Why Ya Ass Got-Dropped...So The Only Time He Seein VT Is On E-S-P-N,
wack
Droppin-Holes,Inside-Of-Ya-Skull...The Flow Couldnt Get Any Deeper,
Battlin Me,U Crazy...I Got Infect Facin-Death Like Standing Up To The Grim Reaper,
decent
Weak Verses N Punches,Im Sure It Aint Me Infect Is Gonna Kill,
Cuz The Only Time He Drops-Hot-Tracks is When He Slips While Branding Steel,
pretty decent
Killin Infect With Words And He Cant Compete With These Symbolic Presages,
So Watch As I Put An End To IM Like X-ing An Instant Message,
nah

overall, both of them weren’t as hard, but Murcinal took this one, just came harder
and did have weak lines all through the verse

Voted For: Infector Mindz

omg killed yo infector nice flow nice punches nice structure over all a better verse other murc nice attempt but flow was off punches not really hittin and structure was off elevate dogg shouldnt be battling peeps like infector