aight coo..........i see what i need to work on

Phantom known for nonsense rambling this where his opera ends
Like planes with one wing ya elevations frame is cursed to descend
no
Its pretty certain my verses is five-O like police unit
Im better but like viral e-mail letters you fail to compute it
not a punch
Must be crazy but like ya avy i guess ya vision is blurry
At the most my words will roost 'Ghosts' like 'Bill Murray'
nah
A.I name of a nerd why the password hiding ya chess secrets?
Not a vet k.oed ya text general i been exorting ya weakness
not a punch foo
Thought you was nice saw ya OPEN MIC stopped and realized i was drunk
Shit is played if you wrote in Koolaid you couldnt come with a punch
playyyyyyed

BTW you gotta do streetryda Mike.

:)

2 by 4 is gettin turned into 'ashes' after my 'fire' erupts...
un'touched is a fuck with no luck so he hangs on 2by4's nuts...
ducked outa our crew cuz eventually we'da knew your rhymes suck...
Don't do something like this in your text again..a three line bar? gay.
stuck your fag bf in our thread sayin for us to leave you alone...
owned your names and thrown ur shame back and your both now sonned...
dont rhyme...weak
get emericas finest out ya sig bitch you might as well be sigless...
biggest faggots in m.a.b. better of ina 'r.i.p' so ppl can 'dig it'...*
only line i liked
you bitches might as well be labeled a 'guch' cuz we just can figure...*
who is the 'pussy' and who is the 'ass' but ima split ya with ligatures...
wack
signature needs to be fixed but he dont wana just cuz he paid for it...*
prolly laid his bf for it, 'popd' his cheery,'whined' now he's 'corkless'...*
'this' 'was' 'an' 'almost' if we knew' 'what corkless' 'had to' 'do with' 'anything
uncrafty and rhaspy cuz i punked you out real fast and really nasty...
lyrically past me? nope cuz you aint dope,n ya 'candys' not 'everlastin'...*
lol...wtf@havin candy being a compliment
lastly ya shanty of a twigs is not standing cuz im like the big bad wolf...
shook down ur straw town but the bricks your without,their somethin i took...
huh?

weak...try and drop SOME strong punches...stop all the quotin ever last word.

This is an old battle verse, but peep and gimme feed:

I was reading the Sunday comics and got a shocked look on my face
The Phantom had escaped, so I came to put him back in his place
Mask on his face, at the opera, why the fuck's he on this rap site?
He's the only thing from Cali I ain't gotta smoke with the hash pipe
The light-skinned kid gets smacked white, what was up with Mr. Big C?
It was prolly "Big Compensation" for the size of ya dick, P
Quickly, change ya atitude, stop actin' like a herb, snotty
Should be in "Authentik Inc." how you look like a skinny Irv Gotti
Think I'm gettin' "balled" but you lost your hair and
As far as votes go you won't get shit like kids inheritin' traits from adoptive parents
Stop ya starin', you done seen this defeat comin'
And it's apparent Mr. C made Dizzle P son him
Quit runnin', ya mouth, I'm "bored", ya rhymes are "lacker"
How you gone be the king of Cali when you just a fudge "Pac"-er
I'll leave you "bloody" take caution next time you "C step" to me
9th Degree the ghostbuster, destroyin' this supernatural enitity

Customers?..............

soc you whore i koed you with that verse mike hawk rate that

I was reading the Sunday comics and got a shocked look on my face
The Phantom had escaped, so I came to put him back in his place
never got this =/
Mask on his face, at the opera, why the fuck's he on this rap site?
He's the only thing from Cali I ain't gotta smoke with the hash pipe
coo
The light-skinned kid gets smacked white, what was up with Mr. Big C?
It was prolly "Big Compensation" for the size of ya dick, P
fag lol
Quickly, change ya atitude, stop actin' like a herb, snotty
Should be in "Authentik Inc." how you look like a skinny Irv Gotti
kinda....get more complex
Think I'm gettin' "balled" but you lost your hair and
As far as votes go you won't get shit like kids inheritin' traits from adoptive parents
nah
Stop ya starin', you done seen this defeat comin'
And it's apparent Mr. C made Dizzle P son him
good flow but bad punch
Quit runnin', ya mouth, I'm "bored", ya rhymes are "lacker"
How you gone be the king of Cali when you just a fudge "Pac"-er
meh
I'll leave you "bloody" take caution next time you "C step" to me
9th Degree the ghostbuster, destroyin' this supernatural enitity
coo

Empire take that fake ass quote out ya sig.

I dropped a garbage verse against you that time.

S'Why we are having a rematch if you don't pussy out again.

:thumbup:

thanks mike i see how i need to elevate but if you would see how much i have since i came to this site....you'd be suprised....but uhh...yeh that whole wine line....ok you pop a wines cork and then its corkless....so yeh.lol you had to think a lil but thanks....
perciate it guys...

I was reading the Sunday comics and got a shocked look on my face
The Phantom had escaped, so I came to put him back in his place
weak..
Mask on his face, at the opera, why the fuck's he on this rap site?
He's the only thing from Cali I ain't gotta smoke with the hash pipe
ehh
The light-skinned kid gets smacked white, what was up with Mr. Big C?
It was prolly "Big Compensation" for the size of ya dick, P
Mr. Big C?
Quickly, change ya atitude, stop actin' like a herb, snotty
Should be in "Authentik Inc." how you look like a skinny Irv Gotti
wack
Think I'm gettin' "balled" but you lost your hair and
As far as votes go you won't get shit like kids inheritin' traits from adoptive parents
ok
Stop ya starin', you done seen this defeat comin'
And it's apparent Mr. C made Dizzle P son him
wack
Quit runnin', ya mouth, I'm "bored", ya rhymes are "lacker"
How you gone be the king of Cali when you just a fudge "Pac"-er
wack...forced..
I'll leave you "bloody" take caution next time you "C step" to me
9th Degree the ghostbuster, destroyin' this supernatural enitity
wizzity wack

I havent seen ur recent shit but this was wack.

Lol damn, I gotta elevate...

Okay.

I'm done for today.

*signing out 5:46*

bastard...!, com'on 1 more...lol

i will not remove the quote till you say sorry

No need to be strapped wit a gat, ill collapse ya rap by way of an asthma attack
…………Applaud my verse n pat my back…n you still would'nt be clappin back..!
stretched...ehh punch
When well wacks learn, ya steady losin as I degut ya insides from hands to stern..
this herb peaks in stack of ferns, steel his lite so he can be Jack’d-on-land-n-earn’d,
(Jack’o’lantern)
wack...how does that sound like jackolantern?
A Doctern of Inoculations comin at you like ancient civilizations ta ruin ya health,
(E-Knock’n late shins)
U a star? Cuz ya screwin yaself, face facts your wack like board-books on shelves,
ehh
Work at the post office?. Cuz im rippin this mail (male) like I murderin next(necks)
Give’em weed packed guns n this kid still couldn’t pop-off a dope case of text,(techs)
Dope lines are played..and subbin text for techs is my idead :thumbup:
Im bored with this member, he knows im better n I aint even lost my fuckin temper,
straight up use.. W i d e l e t t e r s ..cuz you don’t tear shit up like d/ridin contenders,
wack
Respect im telling, like misprints this legend’s shit is similar to defective sell’ins,
Ill squash his melon, cuz in this run ya never getting a vote like convicted felons..
ok

1 good bar outta that stretched verse.

Good idea guys.

meh, you n soc both do text simular
so i dont expect you to like it stretched.....
i think this is like your own lil personal hate on rv thread..

i own all you hoes espically enygma and shadows edge

i would love to see soemoen step up to me in topical or poetry battle

*steps up*

ad i know ur not new..jus battle me

I hate over confident people..

This just in...
hardly anybody likes a stretched style on RV.

battle you for your spot in the crew?

actually go meet me inside The Council... ill make a thread on the front forum fuck all the fucking sub forums

in what crew?Council...no..not my choice..

want in a crew go call a tryout thread..

setup the battle
topical:you pick the topic...

oh shit this guys gunna let me pick the topic... when you want it due by nizzle?

MC firetruck is a text book herb

^Is that an assumption? Where's your proof?

cuz you all wanna be unoriginal....
lmao, i think you should elevate b4 you pop-off
in a thread like this..you aint to nice....pc...

Stop bitching just cuz you're whack.
All of you.

*signs in 10:31*

:huh: you like me :thumbup:

Does this look like a freepost thread to you nigga?

Sheeeeit.

My recent KLL verse against Trase...

As far as ya flow goes I could even drop a no-show
Verse and you'd still be worse, dog you're gassed like Conoco
The only way you'd be dope is if you Traced my flow
You're broke like some other heads in Boston, you don't got a Benz...I No
I rhyme sharp, you'll get Pierced like Paul did, you're not tight dun
Always crew hoppin', you get around, guess it's "like mother, like son"
I'm from Illinois, so I reconize "corny", I'll get to croppin'
Your alias Nasdaq fits you perfect...you're afraid of droppin'

As far as ya flow goes I could even drop a no-show
Verse and you'd still be worse, dog you're gassed like Conoco
plizayed
The only way you'd be dope is if you Traced my flow
You're broke like some other heads in Boston, you don't got a Benz...I No
lol...
I rhyme sharp, you'll get Pierced like Paul did, you're not tight dun
Always crew hoppin', you get around, guess it's "like mother, like son"
lol, liked...
I'm from Illinois, so I reconize "corny", I'll get to croppin'
Your alias Nasdaq fits you perfect...you're afraid of droppin'
nice...

Better than all them bitches.

^^^
nigga your whole shit is played...


and as for shabba aka mike aka emulate... nigga you are played...

Biter/Cheater/Failer@Life.
stfu.

what the fuck are you talking about kid... do you even know who i am?