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Black Queen 12-29-04 10:38 PM

This was feedback posted for King~~Dipset
 
just checkin da polls homie........................

The Black Plague 12-31-04 01:32 PM

Voted For: King~~Dipset

Ok... no offense to ya'll but a wack battle all around... Godz Angelz you started out okay, but in ya second line you basically dissed yaself... and don't play the age shit, cuz you only 12 so it don't work.. it just sounds wack as fuck. The thing about the crown and the puberty shit just didn't make sense to me, and was wack... punches didn't come together, so try to work on ya punches... struc was on target, flow was decent... King you came pretty bad too, but enough to beat him... first line was halfway decent, a attempt at a punch..2nd line made no sense, and was set up horribly... 3rd line was wack too, and was just an attempted statement/punch, but it missed...5th line was decent, Prolly one of ya best lines.... Closer was your best line.. not great but decent... and lose the numbers after ya lines...

OVerall this goes to King Dipset... better attempted punches, and a better set up verse... Godz loses because he tried to many age disses, and his closer was one of the wackest i've ever heard... Not good verses from either, but to me King gets this..

(X)eed 01-01-05 06:29 PM

Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

watta wack verse frm gods angel kid ,,,, dnt try rappin aiight ur wack ur verse wuz wack and overall a 6/10 man cmon u gotta have punches not shit likeTake all your clocks and set them back one hur, Dont you skip your shower,
Your date is ready, He Is waiting at your door with a handful of red flowers.
You mouth will clench at the end of this line, Cause to me your flow is sour.
^^^ the 1st line had no punch wtf ........................
now as for my dawg king homie you owned his ass lol man u were bit off the flow but had good punches Prayin to God Aint gonna Help This Angel
Ill shove a flag Up ya Ass so you Can See The star Spangle
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ lol hahaha good shit dawg keep it up i rest my case

50hater_killer 01-02-05 12:54 PM

Voted For: â€- Gødž Ã…ngël â€-

I think god gets this one becuase his flow and his structure was better in this one his rhyming made more sense he had harder punches he had more personals I think. His opener to his closure was better, his multis where ok and his vocab was I think was better so this vote goes to godz.

hit up on my links please peace.


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