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Voted For: Elusiv G

Acuity...better structure and was quick to da point...i could actually picture it happenning....Overall good

Realistik you just wasnt dat realistik 2day...i know ya capable of being real but not 2day...good structure but i think it took ya a while to get on point and wasnt really interested it....i really fell asleep...no hate of course just sayin...

v/Acuity

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Voted For: Elusiv G

REALISTIK: I liked your apporach on the topic... Flow was fine.. Structure.. fine.. but it wasnt very imaginitive..kinda like.. I was expecting everything that happened to happen.. no surprises or shit..

Acuity:
Ya shit was deeper.. more descriptive.. I liked it.. It was somethin we can all relate to.. we've all had close friends.. maybe not that particular situation but its easily imagined.. Flow was on throughout.. structure was neat and easy to read..

my only advice would be to type properly mostly.. dont say like "da" and "dere" shit like that.. cos it makes good lyrics sound dumb.. You hear mainstream cats do it.. but theyre all wack.. so be intelligent

Voted For: REALISTIK

Realistk you came very nice, it was smooth, flowed, you seem to be good at topical writing, and'v done it before.
Lusiv, you need to work on your imagery,flow,vocab.. you cant just rhyme g,me.. and make people get inrested.
for that v/Real

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Voted For: Elusiv G

yo this was a reall good topical battle. you both did really good but ima have to go with elusiv G..it flowed in mind and he described it so well i could see it happening..both had dope vocab.. realistik yours wasnt as imagintive and elusiv g's.. dope battle

v/ Elusiv G