come on people.....................................uppin

ok hoe.........uppinizzle..........................

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Voted For: Parallel

A'ight...this was a close battle, but I'ma have to give it tp Parallel...some decent punches, a lil played, but it was enough to take this battle...better flow, better structure...no hate, return the fav if you havent already...links in sig...peace...

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Voted For: Parallel

Vote: Paralell

Paralell
Mad wordplay in ur drop g, liked the way it flowed and i think i spootted sum multi flow gettin going in this....all i can say really is work on your structure..you had some creative punches that were original and not played..keep dis up :thumbup: overall - 8.5/10

50Cent
there was nothing wrong in your drop...except for the played as wordplay on wood not hitting back etc ur 2nd bar was not a punch you actuall agve him props...although overall it was a decent drop...work on more creative and original wordplay and punches..:thumbup: overall 7/10

RTF -links in sig

why are you d/qing votes..i merked you, you havent even got a vote yet, get lost...you just fucked my record up too

actually you didn't
your punches were played
I cam creative
you had a mJ punch...If you actually beat me I'd give you props....but you didn't

Voted For: 50Cent_MurderInc

I vote for 50 cent because his flow was on point and he had mad personals.
fav line:
Throw 2 by 4 a punch....watch him snap
Think he'll respond? nah! boards don't hit back
Maybe he's good....kids just pulling our rope
He was quoted in Mike Hawk's sig...he must be dope
Herbs hopeless.....just searchin for e-nookie
Bitch cant be tough...I mean he beefs with a cookie

Parallel...
I guess every one was right when they said you were wack. You hella fell off, but you wernt really ontop of anything.
worst line:
You asked bigchase to help with your “rhymes” on the Computer
Newbies don’t deserve better “phrases”, it don’t get any Cuter

streched as hell and computer and cuter don't really ryhme that good...If you practice enough you could be as good as estyle.