check pollz.......................................

Voted For: J~FOUR

flow- j~four, was structured betta, which made it flow
alot betta then alias king
punches- alias king, some of ur punches were played, &
j i felt ur punches were up 2 par & hit harder
personals- j~four, had alt more, & were alot betta...
where alias king were pretty lame & didn't
form 2getha well..suggestion u need 2
elevate in ur rhymes & wordplay
multis- obviously, j~four had the best out of the 2 wit
his rhyme scheme he's guaranteed his flow &
multis will win..alias king ur a newb so u should
take a close look & u'll c
vocab- j~four clearly took this category by ease; where
alias u were lackin' & need serious elevation
originality- j~four had the most original lines while alias
ur lines were played out, but overall j had
the best verse
v/ j~four

make sure 2 return the favor

This was feedback posted for The Alias King
 

You fucking suck a.k.a leave the damn site you fuck herb

Voted For: J~FOUR

Alias King: didn't find good balance in your vocab, structure was nice but your flow was off here and there. Emotion was good because of the personal vibe over it, not that much imagery, you had an "in your face" sort of attitude,saying everything like it was. So imagery and maybe vocab a lil could've been better...Overall good drop...

J~4: very deep, had your flow on lock, vocab was tight and structure was good.Emotion was raw and you made me think about some things which is nice of course. Imagery was dope, enjoyed reading this for sure! Very good job!

Vote goes to J~Four because I was feeling his verse a lil more, no hate...RTF please

Voted For: J~FOUR


j~four:
When I Rip Dudes To Shreds, And Put Two's To Heads
I Leave "Niggas Sleepin" Like "Black Dudes In Beds" ~
^^^DATZ MADD RACIST FAM...U PROBLY WHITE 2 DONT SAY NO SHIT LIKE DAT IN STREET
Punches Bruise When Sent, To Make Fools Of Lames
Cause I Stay "Over Alias's" Like "Breaking Up With Names"~
^^^^????WHUT DA FUKK
The Truth Is Plain, "Shootin A.K." Like "Automatic Weapons"
Cause Punches Stay "Hitting Zones" Splitting All Your Sections~
^^^FIRST LINE WAS DOPE..BUT DA SECOND WAS WEAK
My Name Not Mentioned, Till I Grasp His Tounge And Slice
And Make "W(Double You's)" With No Verse Just Knifes ~
^^^^DAT WAS HOTT FAM..VERY CREATIVE
Duke, "Excpect To Get Beat" Like "Misbehaved Children"
Cause I Leave "Brains Like Fans" Always "Stayin On The Ceiling"~
^^^PLAYED AS FUKK
And "Stomachs Get A Tight Feelin" when "Punches Hit Ya Chest"
Cause This "Dude Win Is Negative" Like "Male Pregnancy tests"~
^^^OKAY CLOSER..NTOHIN SPECTACULAR

the alias king:
i'm all over gun punches so you can get your ass pistol whipped
Gang violence so if i don't make you blood you'll get cripped
^^^LOL...WACK
look they should call me c-4 and we can see who drop a bomb first
I'm at the top being the best and you on the bottom being the worst
^^^^SELF GLORIF..AND IT WAS WACK
I got the power to alimbanate all u snitches and make u
bitches
i'ma make it so that your nba patches is gonna need stitches
^^^UUHHH...NO

J FOUR WINS DIS SHIT REAL EASY ALIAS DUDE IS DA WORST RAPPER ON DIS SITE...LIKE 4EAL 4REAL LOL