Voted For: Kordozar

opemer amd closer=kor
meta=kor
structure=tied
worplay=kor

chaos everyone got some shit to say bout xeke hop offf his nuts, you and parraleel put him in your verses

best lines
Don't Swear You Hard-Cuz God Knows Your Not!!.....
Cuz My Verse It Tight-Like Strobe Having RV ON LOCK!!!.....
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^^self glory but dope
Your Skills Will Get Abused Like Tha Use Of Tha Amendments..
He Claims Ta Kill A Crip But On Rv He Has Perfect Attendance..

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Voted For: Kordozar

Good Battle

Kordozar had betta structure easier to read...He had good flow and punches hit hard too...Vocab was decent..Personals were alright nothin to much couldve done betta..Same with multis...

Chaos terrible structure...Flow was decent...Punches hit hard too...Vocab was good..Multis you were lackin and Personals were not there in this battle like in ya other ones....you couldve done way betta than this fam

V/Kordozar

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Voted For: Chaos

Daammnn niggaa

Vote: Chaos hands down ..

Punches - Chaos .. it all landed .. he been spittin facts n shiit .. n nice vocab ..
Personals - Chaos .. I saw other battles n shii n its tru fashoo
This Kid Reminds Me Of Zeke-Talking Shit Swearin He Got This.....
This Kid Stood Up To Battle Me-And Got Lost In The PROCESS!!.....
^ Tru
Structure - Kordozar .. I like'd his cause his was neater :] lol
Flow - Chaos .. Hands down he took that all the way ...
Multies - Chaos ... cause his was not stretch'd ..
You Should Be Like Empire-Take A Break And Come Back.....
Cuz Your Wack-And Lack-Certain Material Your Suppose To HAVE!!.....

Enjoyment - Chaos .. Whole thing .. love'd it ..

Voted For: Kordozar

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Voted For: Kordozar

aaaaawwwwwwwwww shit this was a manslaughter no hope for choas kordazar killt it good shit dawg i like that whole verse u had personals, meataphors, and word play and hard hitters good shit return tha favor
chucklow vs. javelin
chuck low vs. kkkhater
chucklow vs. death
chucklow vs. jbkryptonite

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Kordozer: Your verse was better than chaos!! you rhymed a little better!! yur punches where alright!! You got my vote mainly because yur verse had better rhyming!!

Chaos: work on yah rhyme technique!! you had some nice punches but jus threw in words that didn't fit the rhyme scheme!!
return tha favor
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^might as not cuz its gonna get DQ'ed for unexpalined feed back...so save ya time....uppin....

Voted For: Chaos

nice battle you two, stay up kiddies............ :thumbup:

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^LOL..............
u hit the voted button :cool:.

Voted For: Chaos

kordozar-your opener was sorry it didnt even sound rite your structure was decent not bad could of came harder then wat you did
Chaos-your opener was nice got right to da point um.... work on your structure a bit sloppy kno u could do betta wit dat your punches hit real hard nice verse ova all

v/chaos
return da favor links n da sig

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Voted For: Kordozar

aiight well im votin fa kordozar cuz his rhymes was more raw, his structure was better...his opening n ending was by far superior to chaos...his rhymes made sense...unlike chaos.."...Your Like Underrated Herbs-We Should Build At Wall Of Shame For You Kids..... i mean dat shit makes no sense nigga


n i jus got 1 mo comment..."..Cuz Your Linez Are More Crooked-Then R-Rated DICK!!!!....."
*Shakin muh Head* make no sense n it real nasty...i mean how u kno bout crooked dicks nigga???

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Voted For: Kordozar

kordozar u had all punchs and personals that were to tight i chouldint stop readin and chaos more Self Explanitory ur flowz like u tryin to be nice to the man kordozar get s my vote he came harder probly tryed harder Chaos u had some streched lines that chould have been prevented i like ur verse u need some work still but good battle kordozar u we'reint perfect but i liked da verse and u had better verse in this battle wich means im givin it to you V/Kor

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Voted For: Kordozar

have to go with kord on this one he cam harder he had better flow and his strucutre was better, hIS OPENER to his closure was better here is how I graded dis shit

KORD
[Center]He's Weak On Tha Mic,So How Iss His Name Chaos?
M.a.b Are Full Of Pussies Even Tho Most Of Thier Members Are Straight Guys..
He Puts Half Nude Pics In His Sig,Cus Sex Iss What He Desires.
He'll Get Koed And That Will Be "Tha Reason You Retire"..
This Fake Thug,Lives A Life Of Dream House And Matchbox..
Tha Onli Hip Hop He'll Do Iss Playin As Tha 76ers Mascot..
Your Skills Will Get Abused Like Tha Use Of Tha Amendments..
8.9/10

chaos

Yo,Kordozar!!
This Kid Reminds Me Of Zeke-Talking Shit Swearin He Got This.....
This Kid Stood Up To Battle Me-And Got Lost In The PROCESS!!.....
Your Like Underrated Herbs-We Should Build At Wall Of Shame For You Kids.....
But Accept This Kid Isn't A Herb Underrated-Cuz He Always Mentioned!!.....
You Should Be Like Empire-Take A Break And Come Back.....
Cuz Your Wack-And Lack-Certain Material Your Suppose To HAVE!!.....
Your Like All The Other Rejects Here-We Should Make A Play-pens For You Kids.....
9.7/10

hit up on my links peace

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Voted For: Kordozar

this was a pretty good battle.



vs.

[quote=Kordozar]He's Weak On Tha Mic,So How Iss His Name Chaos?
M.a.b Are Full Of Pussies Even Tho Most Of Thier Members Are Straight Guys..[/quote

Chaos-You verse was pretty good. Your flow was decent, you had some good concepts and punch or two that I was feeling. You had a good metaphor or two. You also had a good personal or two as well. Overall, a decent verse.

Kordozar-Your verse was pretty good as well. Your flow was alright, you had some witty concepts and metaphors. You also had some good punches and a personal or two. This was also a solid verse.

Overall, this battle was fairly close, but I have to give this to Kordozar for attacking his opponent harder and coming with wittier concepts and punches. It just seemed like he put more into his verse and it showed, in my opinion.

V/ Kordozar

Voted For: Chaos

I thought caos won y....

Structure: tie
Flow: Tie
Openor: Chaos
Closer: Tie
enjoyed: tie
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Chaos:

Flow: 10/10
Structure: 8/10
punches: 8/10
Personals: 5/10
openor: 10/10
closer: 8/10
total: 49/60
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Kordozar:

Flow: 10/10
Punches: 5/10
Personals: 8/10
Structure: 8/10
openor: 8/10
Closer: 7/10
45/60

vote: chaos

Voted For: Kordozar

Ok i vote for u because u had a stronger verse but dont get me wrong it was a nice battle vs u both but Kord u had better punches and rhymes then chaos and better personals then him but u guys had a good battle damn wish i could battle this good but anyways Chaos keep it up man u almost hid this one close battle so u kinda messed it up on the 3rd to last line no hate im just statin my thoughts on who won ok.