Voted For: Death

blah blah blah blah thats all this battle is if your ready to battle someone better pm me DEATH and all show you what rap is about on a site like this Chuck Low knoes hahaha

oh sorry i didn't leave an explanation death got this battle becouse of better structure Chucks shit wasn't even readabla and was very weak

dont feel special death this is more of a pitty vote im settin you up to knock you down

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Voted For: Death

wow, not really much to say

Chuck low, looks like you threw that verse up, "wortest", use real words please, structure and flow, bad, hard to follow and read, you dont have to use capitals on every word.., yeah, rhyming wasnt bad thou, but you need to work on actually insulting your opponent with your punches and personals, 75% of your verse is just talking ranodomly, stay on topic, keep elevating thou

-Parasite, solid drop man, flow at times was a little incosistant, but overall, punches hit harder, were better thought out, second line was my fav, bout the choc. bar, ahah, good stuff, just work on flow a bit more maybe add some multis, closer was a little weak, but didnt need that much of a strong one, good job, keep elevatin....wird

vote: parasite