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Voted For: DocC

Aiight, I think that Force took the battle here because he was more consistant. However neither of you used hard hitting punches.. I could pick examples in both of your verses where the punches left me going "wtf.. Thats hardly even a diss"..

Both of you need to work a lot on improving your disses and punchlines.. Start reading text from vets on this site and learn how to construct good concepts for punchlines.. I think you both got potential, but you need to elevate cause you wont be able to beat many people with verses like these..

Jus my opinion.
Peace.

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