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Voted For: Premanition

Final:
yo man that was a good verse your emotion war there and your crwtivty was there but i wasent really feeling where the imagery was going to?...but the vocab n stucture was good the stucutre was alright not the best but it was good n you flowed well but it was just that imagery that wasent there to give you this win..and a bit of the stucture i feel you can do better and also you were on topic good..no hate

Prem:
alright i liked your creativty and emotion and your imigery was very well done and also you had some alright vocab but kinda fell iunno but it was alright not the best vocab but what i liked was your stucutre and flow mostly. but i really feel your creativty and imigery got you this win..no hate

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if some way my vote is not properly rigth then f u people cuz i vote explained well to many hoes say i didnt explain it right...so strobe dotn bother

aight thanks

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Voted For: Premanition

i peeped both topicals

Aiight this shit was a hot battle. both came hard and understood the topic and wrote to it well. But dayum only one can win so I have to break it down Clearly. Prem i didnt even know you did topicals. hmm shyt was close

vocab:
Premanition got vocab. he had better word usage and it hit HARD!!! dayum i was like dayum did this nigga really spit that. this shit was fiya

structure: final
your structure was better because you spaced it and made it neater. prem put dots and spaces and fucked it up and the last line was by itself

Imaginary: prem gets prem his shyt was better i could feel every word he said.

Flow: prem had better flow better use of multi's and vocab. it just hit hard

vote: prem

thanx but thats not really that gud dawg i done alot beta, final good battle dawg we'll do it again at some point

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Voted For: Premanition

aigth these where both good...

FINAL: you had a great story about energy...but it was liek oyu where defiining energy rather then making a topical about it....although it was very good it did not reall grab my attention...as i was reading it i felt lost..i got real bored....now your structre was super stretched,,,,your vocab was nice but then agian nothing cought my attention..

premenition..
you cought my attention formt he get go..BANG.....that got me wanting to read it ....it was hela nice..i loved your ending..damn you structure was also nice.....vocab was nice....good shit.....you just had my attention fromt he begining....god shit

all in all preminition got this win becusse he kept my focuse...

vote=prem