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Voted For: Diplosive

Weak battle both ya ll need to elvate but i got 2 give it 2 diplosive he cam jus a bit harder
so ill break it down lik dis
punches- equal
structure-Diplosive
multi-diplosive

so diplosive wins

but i liked dis line by (x)Ceed
Son, ima sweep you away like the SOUTH ASIAN Tsunami...
Kid ima fold you up and unfold you like you were really Origami.....

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Voted For: Diplosive

Voted For Diplosive

Good Battle over all vut D gets in

Explanation:
D got it to due to Punches his where way harder then X
flow was mosly X his fit a little bettere but his vwas common n not very hard

Wordplay goes to D cuz he did jus what this catagory is have good wordplay
X ya wordplay was a lil common n not very hard( i have the same prob :(
Multies both had em so that was tied up
personals saw some from both but they were a lil weak so that ends up in a tie as well

so D gets my vote due to Punches and Wordplay

Not Hatin, Jus Votin

good Battle to both

Voted For: Diplosive

whoa deplosive came out the gate with insane freestlye, he just kept it going, it was ok by both of you, nothing special, but ceEd, your flow was off, strecthed lines by both, bot foreal, ceEd work on that structure, never write that big again k, and diplosive I think he just came with harder punches, and thats earned him this win

Voted For: (x) CeEd

V/{X}ceed....this was a good battle x had structure that needs to worked on but u made up for it in ur punchs an personals it felt like u came harder an had a better verse....diplosive...u had a couple of good lines but nothin consistent or different ur verse a little basic but no hate...jus elavate..
punchs=x
vocab=x
structure=dip
opener=x
closer=x
overall={x}ceEd
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Voted For: (x) CeEd

damn...................x u got killd her G.............u wak son

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Voted For: (x) CeEd

X Cee Took This, Nice Punches Decent Vocabulary, Also Had Some Creative WordPlay, Need Some MEta's But It Altight, Both Of You Need Work On Your Structure, DIplosive You Need Work On Your Rhyme Scheme Buth X Ceed You Need Help In Multi's You Had Some Alright Punches Though
Over All
Punches-X Ceed
Meta's-Tie
Multi's-Tie
Personals-Tie
Over All X Ceed To This Battle Return The Favor Man Link In Sig Me Vs Death And Only That One

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Voted For: Diplosive

STYLE:
cant feel either; poor closers in both cases, need to step it up here

PUNCH:
(X)eed, ur punches made sense, but were way subpar and elementary, Elvis Presley, Gwen Stefani... sour cream? DISNEY? i rest my case
Diplosive, some good ones, some were just wack

FLOW:
cant find the flow here guys, somewhat awkward rhythm

TECHNIQUE:
(X)eed, "like, like, like, like, like, like, like"... u need to expand ur vocab
Diplosive, this a battle, not a poorly grammared essay, lets hope this was actually "something keyed up real quickly"

S: (X)eed > Diplosive
P: =tiE=
F: (X)eed > Diplosive
T: Diplosive > (X)eed
OVERALL: i found myself not weighing out which 1 of the 2 being the better, but rather which 1 of the 2 wasnt as bad... need some work guys, this was a hard vote
VOTE: Diplosive

ps:
(X)eed, expections (in ur sig) is not a word, by the way is it (X)eed or (X)CeEd, people know u by ur name, they cant if u dont even have 1
Diplosive, anorexic is the word ur looking for, dont make up words just to rhyme! while we're on this topic, its losses not losts, plagues not plaques, sense not cents

using the right words is a major part of being lyrical.

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Voted For: Diplosive

displosive haha wow i think you tore him a new one.. but yea i liked ur drop it had alot of good vocabulary.. cept u didnt really need to waste it all on him youcoulda beat him in 6 i think haha. but yea you kept it up nice .. not to complex but not retarded nice vocab and personals
7/10

x-eed wow . umm where to i start? ok first your vocab was nice you just need to learn how to make it work and actually make ur punches into punches.. this is rap not slap boxing ha. but yea you had some good ideas you just didnt make em work for ya.. you got the ideas just learn how to use them ...elevate no hate though

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