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Originally Posted by C.A.L.I

My feelings for you like warm sunshine on a spring day as it comes down
Your breeze of beauty floats my emotions in heavens clouds
You voice beckons me through wires to kiss your lovely lips
Yet i wait fearing rejection not sure if you will return my kiss
I have a map to the path to your love but detours have made me lose focus
I know not if we travel the same path or if the end is only of hearts broken
Im confused the fog of you and i misting my sight
But like a warrior who protects his kingdom i stand one time.............
Knowing you are worth the fight
I call you...you dont respond yet when you do it is passion of words
How am i to make a picture from the inaccurate blurs?

now pay me slut :thumbup:

Hmm, pretty good.. But im lookin for someone that could write somethin of what I really feel....

Poems is fucking soft.

:shoot: ^ yeah fuck THAT IMA HARD NIGGA POW POW POW :shoot:

yeah but in my opinion poems are too soft and showing emotions is weird to me.

I personally like poems better then Topical's now, because you need more emotion for poems which is what im better at then imagery which is needed for topicals...

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Originally Posted by Phantom

Sooooo basically you like a girl but are too lazy to write the shit yourself?

co-sign... lol.......

is there anyone else submitting any more poems?....

........so dabatos are you going to get back @ this thread? jk.

still waiting on dabatos...:).

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Originally Posted by Butters

........so dabatos are you going to get back @ this thread? jk.

yes... u won........