Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

Not a great battle.

Untraceable:
You rely on vocab WAY too much. It does not fit your verse, and also throws your flow off completely. I don't feel any frustration in your verse either. Your flow fell off completely in one bar, and that hurt you. Your complexity wasn't as detailed as Era's either. Overall, your verse is ok, but I think you need to not worry bout vocab and work on your details.

Era Zistibul:
This verse's emotion isn't that strong, but I can see and halfway feel the frustration of the kid. Your vocab was a good blend, and it didn't throw off your flow. Your flow was pretty good. Not much of a twist on the topic but I like the Frustrated, Frustrated.... part. That pretty much won it for you. That just sets the tone. Work on your imagery and workin in some multis.

Overall, both of you need to work on your imagery. UT, put more time into the verse and Era put more time in imagery.

v/ Era Zistibul

Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

meh, this was a decent battle

untraceable....i thought you had a cool verse, you had good imagery at the end, but the start wasn't too good, and the emotion coulda been better, i think thats why flow got my vote, he had better imagery and emotion...but you did write a solid verse, came good with multies and structure was good too, flowed nicely, but i think flow took it

flow, nice verse, interesting, good imagery and emotion, and you kept it consistent, which really separated you two, good use of multies and rhyming, and overall a solid verse, keep up

v/flow