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checkin the polls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!
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this guy won
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im sorry u lost hot sauce....... keep practicin backetball
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Voted For: E.C
hahah i like the opener that shit was pretty good. umm good use of Personals and punches i was feelin it fo sho...good shyt fam lay....just work on your structure and flow. other than that this shit was humerous and thats alwayz a plus in a battle Hot: mayn i hate tht nasty ass structure u need to fix it up...its ugly as heyll. LOL..but word thaz sum koo shyt.....u had good multis u can tell u came from hollafront cuz of the structure but it dont work here... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Hot Sauce
checkin pollz.....................................
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Voted For: E.C
well the battles where pretty much even....but im jjust goona have ot give it to you for not strectching your lines as much as th other guy.... EC...this was a pretty decent verse not that good but you are elevating....also wrk on your vocab...you used some very basic words and your punches where kinda played...nothing really hit...but your strvuture won this for oyu HOT....your structure loose this for you plain and simple....you shoudl battle agian but fix your strucute... your verses where not that much better than EC but they where in deed better but you also used alot more words in each sentence to make them better punches and shit....just fix your structure and stop with the capitol letters.. vote=EC |
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^^^UPPIN'!!!^^^
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Voted For: E.C
punches-tie persnals-E struck-E metals-none mutis-tie flow-E E wins this came harder had better flow and struck he gets my vote easy............. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
upp'in this battle for my man hotness...................
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lolo whats goin on... you lost yeh take it liek a man and stop bitchin.... uppinnn agennn
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Voted For: Hot Sauce
Good battle to both cats, I gotta vote for Hot Sauce though. Hot Sauce didnt really put the personals in, at least not that I saw, but still brought it with the metas and multis, I like the overall flow of it more. Basically Hot Sauce had I'm known to 'kill more cats' than your LOCAL~POUND, strangle this bitch and distort his VOCAL~SOUNDS// Got you in a CHOKE~HOLD~NOW, my 'inquitous liquid flow''ll have your FOLKS~ALL~'DROWNED'// Could change ya name to 'Ford' but ya still can't 'FOCUS'// Betta HOPE~BITCH, that i don't Swallow 'coke and razors' in my 'intestines', cuz i'll 'rip' any nigga up wit 'DOPE~SHIT'// and that was nice. EC brought it solid but just didnt have the hot punches to win. Close battle though. Return the favor me vs. Dominate http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=175470 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: E.C
structure ec hot sauce your structure is horrible so uneven which butchers your flow work on shortening your lines and taking out fillers also lose the // they look gay and are un needed vocab tie neither were impressive both need to up their vocab multis hot sauce soem of his words were made up to make them buit oh well at least he had some i guess ec throw some multis in there kid punches both came pretty played but im going ot give it to ec you both need to be more creative and find some better personals good battle to both though work on the things i stated |
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checking polls i think u won.......................
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