This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

I just need to check something right quick..


WORD.

fuck, me J got so many votes DQ'd some dint have enuff feed, but soverin (dont even no if that was his alias) aint even in nok.

Uppin'............................................ .Fuckers.........................................

-CJ-

Voted For: CounTREE Jay

Normal Punches-CounTREE Jay, overall I felt your punches more. Didn't have as many as J did, but they hit harder. J Dot, I felt some of them, but a lot of them were self glorification and that hurt ya here.

Personal Punches-Tie, not really personals, just wordplay. Both had decent personals, but like I said, mostly wordplay.

Metaphors-J Dot, better metaphors and more of them. Really not that great, gay, slaves. CounTREE Jay, I found one, that's it. It was aight.

Multiple Rhymes- J Dot, not that great, you just get this because you had them. CounTREE Jay, nothing to rate.

Structure-CounTREE Jay, overall not as many stretched lines. J Dot, felt stretched. Aight overall.

Flow-J Dot, I may have found the beat you listened to, or were thinking of. Just seemed to flow better, I think your simplicity was why. CounTREE Jay, didn't seem to flow as well. Never fell off though, which was nice.

Word Play-J Dot, aight wordplay. Overall not that witty, but more of decent wordplay so you get this. CounTREE Jay, some wordplay, but not witty or enough of it to surpass J Dot.

CounTREE Jay, I feel you take this battle because of harder hitting punches. Most everything else was ok, but your punches won this. Wordplay helped as well. Work on your personals though.

J Dot, aight verse, but your lack of real verses lost this for you. A lot of self glorification, be sure to check yourself. Work on better wordplay and more personals.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter (Just RTF, CJ, please do the same)

v/CounTREE Jay

One Vote. One Battle. One Win.----Px

My bad, CJ good personals, but still a lot more wordplay then personals. px

this nigga gettin hella D/R....faggot...how all tha sudden, a battle that wasnt even upped at those times get voted on...and i kno u dont be votin on shit, esp. around those time frames, cause i checked..u didnt even vote for them fags...u a dick sucker


uppin this

uppin this shit for more vots in this dumb shit.....

^^^UPPIN' FOR SOME LEGIT VOTES FUCKERS!!!^^^


s.v.

honestly...
j dot....believe it or not, my boy doesnt cheat. i know that cats might say shit like "we dont ever cheat" and shit like that.........but in the sindicate, its word. i do not condone any bullshit whatsoever from the crhymies. i've kicked cats out for less. countree isnt a cheat, nor is any other known member of the crhyme dynasty. any votes that came through here, were done so legitimately. IF YOU CAN SUPPORT ANY FINDINGS OF CHEATING, SHOW ME AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. if you cannot do so, i ask that you honor my wishes and keep the cheating shit out of any sentences mentioning me or my respected cohorts. word. good lookin' out. oner...


s.v.

Voted For: CounTREE Jay

CounTREE Jay:
Don't know about RED BEAMs, don't be poppin' things,
No coup de'tate, but I'll show you how to Nok Out Kingz,
Decent personal in 1st line, ok punch...overall a good opener
Pyro for just one battle? What, couldn't take the heat?
Soon expelled from the site, to win, you'll hafta cheat.
I was really feelin' the setup, but the punch didn't connect
Started your own crew, and still on Code Steel's roster?
Couldn't beat or join us, so you sided wit an imposter.
Ok personal, decent similie in 2nd line
Posin' more than 50 sayin' that you rockin' wit the best,
Thought your crew was aight, till your co-leader left.
Decent personal
You crew can't touch C.S. like a certain M.C. that lost it,
I'll hammer the point home & put the first nail in y'all coffin.
Good closer, was feelin' the 2nd line

J Dot:
Step in da ring, I'll assassinate ur Nok out dreams
Watch out fien, JDOT got him NOK OUT KINGZ
Opener was weak, no real punch
block out teams, especially when yall shout out schemes
tryna beat us is rare, like seein a fake watch gleam
Punch wasn't that hard
i got that beam, send it to you, watch yall scream
i block yall theme...cock back and drop yall team
Blatent gunplay is played
im not that mean.....CJ made me act that way
send him back to tha "Countree" and whip him like black slaves
Aight personal
i admit im amazed, this nigga really want it with J?
i dont like gays.....so back up and go that way
Blatent gay lines are played too
i seen ya'll play...matter fact ya whole playbook
what type of nigga make a crew and fill it with gay crooks?
I repeat...*see previous bar*
im safe rook(rookie)....i'll give this nigga slow-mo stitches
....how u rep a crew that breeds only homo bitches
*see previous 2 bars*
u gettin no mo' digits.....landing in yo winnin column
.....call him, invisible? how, J DOT still saw him
Weak, concept could've been worded a lot better
"J DOT TAKE IT"
ask yo crew, they call me they favorite
we give u a double head start, and u still wouldnt make it
Weak
"ya crews sacred"?...these niggas fell far outta line
ya'll aint no criminals, ya'll cant even spell out "CRIME"
Attempt at a personal fell short

Honestly, CJ had harder punches and better wordplay...Although I've seen a lot better from both of you. That's pretty much all I can explain it.

RTF @ a link in my sig, honest explained votes only :thumbup:

nah..fuck that...yall niggas is doin sumthin. i find this kinda odd. but i aint even trippin off this battle no more, that nigga is honestly weak to me. yall niggas had other niggas, that wasnt even in yall crew, come in here n get my votes dq'd. yall could win this shit, but overall, yo crew bitches

Yo, if you wanna battle again, since i'm so weak, we can do it again. Lil' nigga.

-Cj-

Voted For: CounTREE Jay

Don't know about RED BEAMs, don't be poppin' things,
No coup de'tate, but I'll show you how to Nok Out Kingz,
Started your own crew, and still on Code Steel's roster?
Couldn't beat or join us, so you sided wit an imposter.

Vs

i seen ya'll play...matter fact ya whole playbook
what type of nigga make a crew and fill it with gay crooks?

this was kind’a a 1-sided vote here…CJ came harder in this
punches, structure was in palce and not-stretched-out…had pretty
decent multi’s…but the drop was aight…J DOT yo shit was aight…punches
weren’t really there, some were okay, and some were weak, but overall
CJ had came harder than you though…