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Mix & Match 03-09-05 04:24 PM

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

Here is why I am voting for Authentiq.

The creativity on this was more present, it was him and his last prayers, on a topic that hasn't honestly been that discussed that much. Where as, Tha Sick One, pretty much took the "gangstuh" way out, for creativity wise, it just wasn't as applicable. Also the grammar, used in Authentiq's really outdid Tha Sick One. When you have larger grammar you look much better, and smarter, and show that you have a larger brain capacity. Although Tha Sick One's piece, did flow better.

....Gone.... 03-09-05 04:29 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Tha Sick One
why is it everytime i get a vote you bitch and moan about it bein a d/r .. just accept the fact that people actually feel what im spittin.. peace out bi-atch






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Compose 03-09-05 05:43 PM

Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

wow...easy win imo this wasnt even close

emotion-mista tha sickness you actually had good emotion in your piece...i felt it there a lot but mistas was more deep because of the words he used to describe shit so he got the edge in this aspect

imagery-mista definately...basically described how shit looked a lot better then sickness...good words showing what he was saying you did good here...

beginning/end-mista this is the easiest aspect mista won...sickness, when you said the soldier line i was like wtf? where did that come from...you didnt give no backround information and it felt like the whole intro was left out...and the ending was horrible really played out and the whole verse was just like mediocre...no vocab...if he got votes thats amazing d/r, mista you had a really good ending i thought and the beginning had good imagery so i liked that

overall no hate to you sickness but mista won easily...good luck to both

peace


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