Voted For: Kamikazee

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Voted For: Kesse

kesse.....
'live by the gun, die by the gun', look no further cause that i can provide
by accepting this battle, you proved your name and committed lyrical suicide
nice opener.....this bar shows you have mad potential

with that name and a record that's lacking, your far from hardcore
in history, kamikazes were sent packing, thats why the japs lost the war
nice play off name...hit good

your about meet that same fate, another loss i'll create, make your day worse
but there's a first time for everything, you'll be riding home in a hearse
set up line was good...but the punch was weak...

you ain't got no rhymes, heard better from a mime, its actually really pathetic
cause this verse is so sweet that it may have turned ya diabetic
nice attempt at wordplay...set up line wasnt good....but the punch was decent....


Kam..............
I spit so much knowledge, u cant understand it u need a online translator,
Da punches i throw stick to these herbs heads, like they was a magnetic equator
self glory...this bar meant nothing...you have to diss someone in a battle man

All da lines dat i spit have u in a state of shock, as if i was Electronic,
U still wouldn't be any good even if u bit off some lines from sonic
ehh ok...not too great though

I will literally have u choking off my line like they was chronic dope,
Ready to smash ur dreams and send them on, like i defeated ur hope
decent bar...best bar of your verse here


overall.....vote goes to kesse for more complexity and harder hitting punches....Kam's punches just werent hitting it felt like to me....and a couple of kesses were.....so i went on that....overall kesse just had a better verse....RTF

Voted For: Kamikazee

'live by the gun, die by the gun', look no further cause that i can provide
by accepting this battle, you proved your name and committed lyrical suicide
^^^ummm aight
with that name and a record that's lacking, your far from hardcore
in history, kamikazes were sent packing, thats why the japs lost the war
^^^nice hit on his name
your about meet that same fate, another loss i'll create, make your day worse
but there's a first time for everything, you'll be riding home in a hearse
^^^decent
you ain't got no rhymes, heard better from a mime, its actually really pathetic
cause this verse is so sweet that it may have turned ya diabetic
^^^self glorifying... :(

I spit so much knowledge, u cant understand it u need a online translator,
Da punches i throw stick to these herbs heads, like they was a magnetic equator
^^^nice....
All da lines dat i spit have u in a state of shock, as if i was Electronic,
U still wouldn't be any good even if u bit off some lines from sonic
^^^it's aight...
I will literally have u choking off my line like they was chronic dope,
Ready to smash ur dreams and send them on, like i defeated ur hope
^^^nice....

voted for: 8 ball for better punches, it was close though, good battle.

Please return the favor, post a vote to my battle in my sig please, thanks!

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Voted For: Kamikazee

man i gotta go with 8 on this one sorry keese but it was a close battle i'll give you both that. umm 8 the only reason you one was i thought ur personals hit harder. keese u have a bright future . jus elevate some

structure:keese
punches:8
meta's:8
wordplay:8
appeal tie
funny factor:tie

vote//8-B@LL (close ass battle)

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Voted For: Kesse

[font=brushscrd]8-B@LL
I spit so much knowledge, u cant understand it u need a online translator,
Da punches i throw stick to these herbs heads, like they was a magnetic equator
pretty good opener
All da lines dat i spit have u in a state of shock, as if i was Electronic,
U still wouldn't be any good even if u bit off some lines from sonic
nah, not feelin this 1
I will literally have u choking off my line like they was chronic dope,
Ready to smash ur dreams and send them on, like i defeated ur hope
closer was aight

Kesse
'live by the gun, die by the gun', look no further cause that i can provide
by accepting this battle, you proved your name and committed lyrical suicide
good punch
with that name and a record that's lacking, your far from hardcore
in history, kamikazes were sent packing, thats why the japs lost the war
[u]decent punch here
your about meet that same fate, another loss i'll create, make your day worse
but there's a first time for everything, you'll be riding home in a hearse
1st line was blah, but the 2nd was okay here
you ain't got no rhymes, heard better from a mime, its actually really pathetic
cause this verse is so sweet that it may have turned ya diabetic
good closer

overall Kesse took this one barely though, pretty good battle between u 2
but Kesse took this one

not a hate vote