Voted For: *Troop*

clearly took this imo......you went indepth with you verse and you had nice vocab and imagery was there too....explained more and stayed on topic through out the whole thing
@ your verse was a little simple it waz good but didnt have much too it.....your first 2 lines didnt rhyme well you could have re-worded some of ur lines also..thats why troop gets my vote 1................