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Dirty Nigga 03-18-05 08:11 AM

Voted For: Hot Sauce

Hot sauce got this 4sho...
Came sick with the multies an a few decent personals here n there, punches were nice too, overrall besides the way u structure your rhymes, there aint much i can fault, nice verse....

Social, ya structure was everywhere too
dont seperate bars like that man
gotta be more creative with the rhymes u choose ta use

Punch through ur cavity leave you a mindless drone.....
ur hits are known for their laxity, Please......mine the illest thrown....
^^^
like that
it was a good idea
but ya didnt use it as well as u could....
nah mean?

no hate, just be more creative

hot sauce got this for the overrall better verse (besides structure)

RTF In ANY of my battles ya see floatin around on front lines or whatever

Thanks

Peace

A_M_H 03-19-05 11:28 AM

Voted For: Hot Sauce

One sided battle here......

Hot Sauce, you had more creative and thought out punchlines in my opinoin. You had the wordplay, and the multis here, and there. had good metaphors, and similes as well. Good Drop

Social Outsider, you should elevate mane, you got the structure, and flow correct, but I'd suggest trying to be more creativie with your disses, and just use a lot more metaphors, and wordplay. No hate...

V/ Hot Sauce
make sure 2 return the favor


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