one of my battles


im like an airplane except when I "land" a punch your eyes-pop instead of your ears/
suddenly you fall to the ground people crowd around your eyes are re(a)d with tears/
battling noobs cause your greedy until you lose cause you know, you’ll never beat-me/
could never defeat me being my personal butcher is the only way you would “meet me”/
only way you could put me in a coma is with a decent auroma but since you stink that’s not gonna happen/
keep it to your self hang your career up on a shelf don’t you notice noones clappin you need to quit rappin/
im gonna rip-you like a wet tissue and both of us know that noone will miss-you cause your wack/
there’s no returning, cause your not worth burning take out a pen and start learning cause you cant come back/
so what’s the difference, all your punches are misses like a blind couple trying to give each other kisses/
so this is where it ends, get a date that has no friends, you might even get married and become a mrs./
StyleSwitch..

Leavin Ya Breath Less and Dead, killed wit ease..
Only time u blazed up when u payed for trees ....
Didnt Understand my Rage when i spit ..............
Show you first hand and wreck ya shit...............

another one..

something he may-be re-gretin lookin at porn cause thats all he be gettin talk about 24 seven, next time ill just decline/

this kid must be high while my quick fists fly he starts to cry untill his tears wilt and dry, i told you bitch this win is mine/

ill spit far less than he did if this was any easier i would have cheated this bitch is already defeated in the second bar/

let the results show, so in the future this kid will know, dont chanlenge someone whose seven and 0, or youll lose by far/

its said you are what you eat and this mans speaking beef, let alone eating dick this bitch has his own male recipie/

told you not to mess wit me, or you end up dressin me cause real life relatin to polls cause youll always be less-than-me/

im getting bored of this, your gonna end up getting whored and dissed, lets put it simple i have have scored you missed/

so i sat down and waited, for this bitch who thought i was overrated, if you elaborated people could see through the mist/

im just waisting lyrics, when you see a vet next time youll fear us and i hope you werent serious when you spit your verse/

this must have a curse, after this youll need a nurse, tell her your just got merked and give her a dollar from your purse/to let yall know..

structure doesnt matter in text.. you have to read the lyrics alloud to get the flow, otherwise text doesnt have flow so read it out loud

where are there wins seriously i whould be in but jesus christ look at that roster HERB,,, like that herb shop haha but any ways here ya go



helpinu out :thumbup:



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^^^werd you in New Era
Spawn no you have strech lines work on dat den comebak

lmao..alright..u say i have stretched lines, read it aloud and read wit the commas, ull see da pauses.

Black Queen told me if i aint got a crew to join Grand Hustlaz so yeah im here pm me if im in i aint tryin out peep my battles and open mics if ya want me.

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i got ya'll a sig somethin quick

^^nice sig homie you in da crew everybody rep da sig

you have ok well where does commas n stuff are at make another line it'll look betta and you structure wud look betta to n it wont be hard to read yo stuff

Yo Black Queen i Pm'd u take a look at it and tell me wuts up.......Pz

good luck wit ya crew.....we know you deserve it

^^thx Tech good luck wit wat you do

Forum up erybody go check in

good luck with this crew but when u ready to stop playin then holla at CODE STEEL...

female cub-fourm will be up strickly for ya.....

holla.....

code steel..

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CHECKIN IN.....what up guttahz!!! Whats HOOD wich yahz!!

uppin...............

Da Throwdest said I gotta drop ten lines and see what yall think so here it go, southern style:

Knock, knock? Whos there? Mr.Aimz, guns drawn
Southern nigga, still bangin- slugz in ya, stomach showin
Thas how we do in the dirty, we reckless
Take ya jews plus the necklace
Whats the use of wearin one if u 'neck-less/necklace?'
M-I-A is where I reside, on the block smokin up lye
Over the planes and the clouds- yes, gettin real high
U can catch a shell, 4-5th'll do ya well
Leave u more than a swell, nigga u goin ta hell
Im on rap verse, wrappin up a rap verse
Grand Hustle, ten times strong
When Keith Aimz get sign on, nigga....