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This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

OK simple as hell you win

you where lyrically alot better than him youe structure was also alot better.........i dont liek how people use that CENTER shit...it just shows that your structure sucks so you ahve to use that

also
9th you cam alot ahrder with your shit.,,,vocab was alot better....the othe rguy used a bunch of slang words and shit...stupid idea to do that.......also wicked your punches where either played or elementry....9th that quote was kinda wack becuase he already told you thT YOU CAN USE IT.....but i liked th eway you did use it tho...
wicked clown was kinda wack..wicked yoru intro was weak.......

good battle but 9th degree wins........

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=178494

well i cant vote untill i get a few more post so iw ill juust leave feedback

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

............... u won......... again wicked with wat i think is stupid shit

Lol Fux, no vote? We need votes.

Voted For: 9th Degree

LOL!
That Public schools thing was RANDOM AS FUCK, But it was also the highlight of the battle, very creativve lol

wasnt feeling that closer
but besides the closer

It was a solid, creative drop, punches hit, an the personals were right on point, dope verse 9th

Wicked? your opener was uhmmm, i dunno man, but i just wasnt feeling it at all.....

Wicked ya flows lacked creativity, an it was too basic, no real vocab, an lines were strecthed, i've seen better from you, some personals were tight tho, your closer was the best you had ta offer, but on the whole......

9th certainly took this, much more creative verse, humouress an witty, where as clown was all too basic ta go up against a emcee like 9th

No hate clown, because i aint exactly cool with 9th, but he got this 4sho

Return the fave in any of my battles ya see floating around

Peace out

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

I just wanna check the polls..

WORD SNUPS!

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Checking the polls because you're shook or too lazy to vote?

Fuck it, uppin'.

im uppin this shit... 4-1... guess i lost... whatever i guess.. good battle 9th

Voted For: 9th Degree

haha, very humorous battle....


WC
>9th you aint nothin but a fuckin fudge packin gay sex lovin boy
just a bitch made faggot who loves gettin raped for his Chips-ahoy
-thought this coulda been better, wordplay was bad 5/10
>what a joy it is to see you fall flat on ya face in front of all of RV
where all can see, the tragity at at hand when you step to me
-2nd line was weak, first was good though 6/10
>yeah kid, you beat me once before back when you were P DIZZ
mores changed than ya name cause now we all know how fucked up u IS
-haha, nice personal...7/10
>got a moth full-o-Jizz from suckin on SOCs Cock far to much
aint nothin but a dick rydin homo bitch, never gonna be more than such
-great set up, lost me on the second line 5/10
>fuck kid, your so goddamn gay you make Tha Q look straight
just maybe the 2 of you should hook up and try to relate
-okay 6/10
>everyone rides ya nuts but to me ya just fuckin over-rated
god made rappers but he musta been drunk when u were created
-haha, decent closer....7/10

overall: 36/60....yeah, i think you lost this battle with wordplay and complexity, you had some real good ideas with your punches and personals...on more than one occasion, it was ruined by poor vocab and wordplay, but overall, a decent battle, but your punches/personals weren't as effective as 9th's

9th
>Called me out for makin' fun of you, so I'm bout to get killed right?
What you lack in a sense of humor you make up for with skill...sike
-haha, great opener 8/10
>This kid's actin' futile, and I'm getting tired of bustin' fools
Wicked poses as much a threat as nail clippers in public schools
-okay punch here 6/10
>You go overboard with shit talkin', far more than rock the boat
But now ya only defense would be pmin' people...not to vote
-good personal, hit hard i think 8/10
>I really must've clowned you, but ready to rumble like Michael Buffer
So in this 3-ring circus the only one you receive is suffer
-coulda been worded better....6/10
>And as far as ya verse goes, you were prolly prein' it, whore
Why else would you tell me to drop a line 'bout how I beat you before?
-another good personal....7/10
>Ah fuck it, I ko'd you like it wasn't no thing, bastard
Well, that's it for tonite folks
-9th Degree, the Ringmaster
-hahaha, funny closer, worked good with your verse 7/10

overall: 42/60.....i think you took this one because you came harder with punches/personals and your wordplay made them stand out alot more, making them hit harder than wicked's.....your flow and structure were fine, easy to read and pretty funny too...so thats why you take it...

v/9th degree