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Voted For: Kesse

ok, kesse won this battle handz down.... picture, u had an aiight verse but u coulda come alot harder, ur punches were weak, ur flow was pretty shit and u had like barley any vocab... kesse, u had a good verse homie, i liked ur opener and closer and ur flow just went, n shit man ur punches were good.. u just won handz down.. good battle.. no hate..
v/ kesse

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how u keep gettin these posers to vote for you, i dont get it... these lil newbs just keep returnin votes cuz you voted for them or sumin.

fuck, i dunno, but it is the truth.......keep getting them removed if you want.......upping

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well i plan on it, cuz i got the most credited vote from memisis and the poll is sopposed to be 2 to 2 right now after strobe fixes the votes. this is a stupid close battle, but the way all these gay cats... that dont know anything about battles... you'd have bout ko'd me.

pfff, whatever man, mimesis voted on a base of me making some spellin errors, and now they're fixed, fuck, you got so much played shit, your structure and wordplay are fucked...........like wtf is the line about the diet suppose to be................................................ .....upping

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Voted For: Kesse

One sided battle...

Kesse - You came good here, nice structure that brought good flow and hard punches. The vocabulary was allright, and the wordplay was good too.

i'll rip this guy apart, literally leave him picking up his bones
and i dont need to worry, his rhymes more stoneage than the flinstones

^^ Original and funny...good line...8/10

been in 45 matches, and you have more losses than your age
if i wrote down how many times you be KO'D...voters be clickin 'next page'

^^ Your best line for sure. That was a solid Idea...very good punch...9/10

Your whole verse was good lines that kept me reading and enjoying your verse. You ripped this guy. Well done...9/10


pictureperfect2 - Okay, you came allright here. Your structure and everything was all there, some good punches with minor wordplay and everything, it's just that Kesse came a lot harder than you.

U fat fuck don’t fight me like im a fuckin riot
This chubby bitch needs to learn im rapper and not a diet

^^ Wack man... you can do better than that...5/10


Homey you done, everyone’s level’s beyond you son
That’s why we have to look backwards to see where your from

^^ What I thought was your best punch...but it was played...7/10

I think that you could have come a lot harder. At the level you came at Kesse took this battle easy. Elevate your punches a bit. Be more creative and think of things that aren't so played out....7/10

Vote: Kesse

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Voted For: Kesse

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word to gettin posts.....fuck, my battles are always slept on, so i better be gettin posts

Voted For: Kesse

pic-alright you had an okay verse......pretty good with the personals......but they just werent THAT great.....you shoulda made them wittier and added a punch along with it......you had decent flow and you had better vocab than kesse...your structure was a flaw definately.....you had some short lines and some stretched......work on that........you need to work on your punches as well......GAY JOKES ARE PLAYED OUT so yeah remember that.....so overall your verse gets a 4/10

kesse-alright yo had a pretty decent drop.....better than pic...alright you came with wittier and more thought out verses.......your punches added some humor which we all like to see......your structure was your biggest flaw i'd say...work on that some......your flow was alright add some more multi's in there and your set :thumbup: but yeah also up your vocab some......its not always needed in amounts but....if you added more this would be a better verse......ima have to say you get a 6.5/10

v/kesse
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